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"Hi my name is Emily Fon and your name is?" "Ryan Shirogane, nice to meet you Emily-chan," he said holding out his hand. I shook it and smiled. Today was the first day of junior high and I just met my first best friend. We're both 6th graders which helps me because I just moved from China. "Hey guys over here!" he yelled gesturing to group of kids. "Oh hey Ryan what's up?" a boy with red hair asked him. "Nothing much," he replied. I was hiding behind him the whole time which seemed to bother a girl who looked almost exactly alike the other redhead. "Hey Brittany what are you glaring at?" the redhead boy asked. "Ryan who is she?" "Oh this is Emily she's new. She came from China," Ryan replied to the 'Brittany' girl. "Aren't you going to introduce us properly?" a girl with blue hair asked. "Oh sure," he said, "Okay Emily this is Bret-kun and Brittany-chan Aoyama, the twins, and this is Sora Aizawa-chan, April-oneechan, and Amy Akasaka-chan." He pointed to each one as he said each name. "Everyone this is Emily Fon," he said gesturing to me. "Nice to meet everyone," I said quite loudly. "Nice to meet you too," Brittany said hesitantly shaking my hand. I smiled knowing that I had a good group to hang with.
A FEW YEARS LATER (Ryan's POV, 9th grade)
"Hey Ryan-kun!" I heard someone yell behind me.I turned around and got tackled by a certain blonde. "Hey Emily-sama. Can you please stop doing that," I said standing up. "Sorry Ryan-kun I can't help it," she said smiling as I helped her up. I gazed at her and she caught me. "Whatcha looking at?" she asked looking around. I felt my face start heating up and said, "Nothing, nothing Emily-sama." "Okay Ryan-kun whatever you say," she said smiling. I have liked Emily since the 6th grade. She doesn't seem to have noticed though. We have the same schedules every year no matter what. "Emily-sama we're going to be late for class," I said. She looked around at the clock and said, "You're right! We better get moving!" She grabbed my arm and ran to our next class dragging me along as usual. Our next class happened to be... Science. The only class me and Emily didn't sit next to each other in. When we got there the bell rang and we sat in our seats. "Hi Ryan-kun, what's up?" Brittany said. She my Science partner and Bret was Emily's partner. "Nothing really, Brittany-chan," replied staring at Emily's back. Me and Bret aren't really friends anymore because he started flirting with Emily in 7th grade. Emily was smiling as Bret was talking to her. I wonder what he's saying. It's a good thing I'm really smart because if I wasn't I would be failing every class. I never pay attention to what the teacher is writing because of course Emily is in every one of my classes. Emily looked over at me and that look snapped my train of thought. She looked at me in anger and disgust and I don't know why. All through Science I was in a daze. When the bell rang I walked over to Emily but she just looked away and walked out of the room. When I got to math Emily wasn't there. I sat through math worrying about her. During math a girl named Jazmen handed me a note after coming from the bathroom. On the front of the neatly folded note read "From Emily; To Ryan" I opened it and read these words, "Dear Ryan,
Bret said that you and Brittany were going out and you kissed on one of your dates. I'm very sad to say that I don't wish to be your friend anymore. Even if I have liked you since 6th grade. Please don't talk to me or try to walk with me anymore. Your "girlfriend" might get offended like most girlfriends do. Don't try to call me either. The only other communication you have to work with is passing notes. I love you but we can't be seen together by your "girlfriend.
Love Your Ex-Bestfriend,
Emily For the first time I noticed that there were tear stains on the note. On a fresh sheet of paper I wrote,
"Dear Emily,
Bret is telling you wrong and I've never even gone on a date with Brittany. I still would love to be your friend and I have liked you since 6th grade also. I only have one person I would even consider being my girlfriend and that would be you. I'm sorry that this happened and I love you. I will try to call you more often. So please can you be my best friend again? and if so can you also be my girlfriend? Love Your Bestfriend,
Ryan" Since math was my last period I walked to the place where walkers go. I waited for Emily which took five minutes. She looked like she had been crying. She walked pass me so I hugged her from behind. Her eyes went wide and I stopped. Her face had utter confusion written all over it. I handed her my note and she read it. She started blushing wildly and then she yelled, "YES!! I love to be your girlfriend, Ryan!"
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