OoC: Fixed version of the quick chapter I wrote a few nights ago. and Blue what about my character and a harry potter land? I like using OC's I don't care if there not popular. Anyway I'm not mad about any of the reviews I've gotton it's helping me become a beter writer
Late night: Mid street
"HOLD IT RIGHT THERE" A 12 to 13 year old girl in a school uniform yelled at a boy on the other side of the street. She had brown flowing hair that was tied into two pigtails and held by two red ribbons. She had a green armband pined on to her shoulder. On the band was a symbol.
"..." The boy appearing to be 15 years old said nothing as he continued to stand there. "Judgement..." The boy said turning around. . He had yellow spiky hair and yellow eyes to match. A pair of headphones covered his ears. He wore a yellow and white vest over his yellow and black shirt.
A red scarf covered his nose and the lower part of his face. He had green and black shorts that reached down way past his knees. On his right arm he wore a black watch. His yellow shoes were covered in scratches from running.
"There's no where to run!" The girl yelled. The boys eyes flashed with a black light. A spike formed where the girl was standing. The girl disapeared and reapeared in front of the spike.
"So thats how it's going to be..." The girl said reaching under her skirt and pulling out several needles.
As she threw them they disapeared. They reapeared a few inches from the boys face.
A Whispy shadow quickly shot up and knocked the needles out of the air.
"Oh no you don't!" The girl yelled throwing more needles.
The whispy shadow surounded the boys hand and hardened to form a doubled edged blade. He charged toward the girl.
That boy is me. Ryan Draco. It started off as a normal day or at least I think it did. It's hard to remember anything from before I entered Academy City. My first day in Academy City and this happens. Perhaps I should start from the beging.
Flashback: Tram leading into Academy City
"Attention passengers we will be ariving at Academy City in 5 minutes" The intercom said. Ryan sat there staring out the window. He saw his own reflection his cold lifeless eyes staring back at him.
"Excuse me sir" A person said. Ryan turned and faced the man.
"..." Ryan said nothing. "Are you okay?" The man said. Ryan nodded his head.
"Thats good" The man said. "So why are you going to Academy City?" The man asked.
"..." Ryan said nothing staring at the man with his lifeless eyes.
"Not much of a talker are you" The man said.
"Get away from him!" A man said to the man.
"Oh sorry dude is this kid your son?" The man asked.
"No, but it's my reponsiblity to see he gets in the city safely" The man said. He wore a black trench coat and matching black shoes.
"Go..." Ryan said quietly.
"Hmm oh right" The man said leaving.
"You got to be more careful than that Ryan" The black Trench coat man said.
"Syndrom..." Ryan said looking at the man.
"Man they roughed you up good" Syndrom said "Just what happened out there".
"I... can't remember..." Ryan said turning his head back toward the window.
"Well don't worry about it kid, if it was important then you would have remembered" Syndrom said.
"..." Ryan stared quietly out the window.
"So do you remember anything?" Syndrom said.
"...Only what you told me..." Ryan said.
"Right..." Syndrom said.
"Well I guess thats why your here, Academy City is the most advanced City in the world, I'm sure they'll find a cure for your amnesia" Syndrom said.
"Yeah..." Ryan said.
"Here" Syndrom said pulling out a black book.
Ryan turned and stared at Syndrom with a confused look.
"I was told to give this to you, it's full of information on ESPer's abilities" Syndrom said.
Ryan took the book and started fliping through the pages
"..I don't see it..." Ryan said.
"Huh?" Syndrom said.
"...Shadow Manipulation, where is it..." Ryan said.
"Oh. That ability is rare" Syndrom said "Your lucky kid, if it wasn't for that ability of yours you'd probally be dead".
"Right..." Ryan said.
*DING* "Attention passengers we have arived at Academy City" The intercom said.
"Alright, Well let's get going" Syndrom said getting up.
Ryan fallowed Syndrom off the train. "It's just a few blocks from here" Syndrom said.
"...The dormitory..." Ryan said.
"Thats right, you're going to be a student at Nagatenjōki Academy" Syndrom said. "..." Ryan said nothing as he fallowed Syndrom.
"Just do as your told and don't get into trouble" Syndrom said.
Ryan stared at various people as they walked by.
"Well we're here" Syndrom said as he stoped in front of the dormitory. "This is where we part ways, later kid" Syndrom said walking away.
Ryan walked into the dormitory.
"Oh hello" A lady sitting behid a desk said.
Ryan said nothing.
"Oh... are you okay?" The lady asked.
"...Yes" Ryan replied.
"Thats good, and you are?" The lady asked.
"...Ryan Draco..." Ryan said.
"Draco huh" The lady said as she typed on a computer. "Oh yes your right here, here's your room key" The lady said putting a key on the tabel.
"Your room is on the second floor, farest room down the hallway" The lady said. "..."
Ryan took the key and walked down the hallway.
Once he was on the second floor he started looking for his room.
"EEK!" A girl yelled as she was chased by three cleaning robots.
"..." Ryan blinked a few times.
The girl wore a white robe and she looked kinda like a nun. her robe was held to gether by several safety pins.
"...Strange..." Ryan said as he continued to walk toward his room. he opened the door.
It wasn't much. a two room appartment like room with a TV, a microwave, and a old couch. He walked over to the next room and saw a bed.
"..." Ryan said nothing as he threw his backpack onto the bed.
Ryan sighed sitting next to his back pack. Suddenly his lifeless eyes became dark.
When they lightened up he looked around the room curiously. "How'd I get here?" Ryan asked.
"It's weird, I feel like I've been dreaming" Ryan said holding his head. Ryan looked at the uniform in his back pack.
"I guess that means I'm here" Ryan said "Academy City". Ryan got up. "Well I'm not going to waste the whole day here" Ryan said walking out of his room making sure to take the key with him.
Downtown
Ryan saw various people. (I didn't expect there'd be so many people) Ryan thought.
"So enjoying yourself kid?" Syndrom said.
"Huh?" Ryan said turning toward Syndrom.
"Who are you?" Ryan said.
"What your awake?" Syndrom said surprised.
"What do you mean?" Ryan said.
"Dam" Syndrom said "I was hoping I could trick you longer...".
"Wait... You!" Ryan yelled angerly.
"Finally remember kid" Syndrom said.
"Syndrom Match, the person responisible for this" Ryan said forming a blade of darkness on his right hand.
"Heh, I was hoping I would have more time, but I guess I was wrong" Syndrom said "Later kid" Syndrom said.
"Stop!" Ryan yelled throwing a darkness blast at Syndrom. As it got closer to him it disapeared.
"You got to remember kid, this town has rules of it's own, you can't be throwing your Ability around like that" Syndrom said as he walked into a alley.
"Wait!" Ryan said running after him.
Ryan didn't see anything in the alley It was like Syndrom disapeared. "Dammit" Ryan said "I was so close..." Ryan walked out of the Alley. "He can't have gone far" Ryan said running down the street.
Several hours later: Dusk
Ryan stoped running. His shoes were scuffed up from running. he was breathing heavily.
"How can he just disapear" Ryan said looking around. The sun went down.
"Well done kid" Syndrom said standing on top of a building.
"Grrr" Ryan growled.
"I thought you would have gave up by now" Syndrom said.
"Shudup!" Ryan yelled forming a blade.
"You just don't learn do you" Syndrom said. Syndrom jumped off the building as he approached the ground he slew down and landed.
"Tired yourself out eh?" Syndrom said.
"Ghh" Ryan said relizing he barely had enough energy to form the blade. Ryan charged toward Syndrom. He slashed Syndrom. The blade phased through Syndrom and left a deep scar in the bulding behind him. (What!) Ryan thought as he lashed out at Syndrom again
"C'mon did you actually think i'd be stupid enough to let you hit me" Syndrom said jumping into the air.
"VORPAL BLADE" Ryan yelled. His blade had a faint dark haze around it. As he slashed it it send a wave of dark energy at Syndrom. Sydrom relfected the energy attack and sent it into the street bleow. It left a huge hole where it hit.
Syndrom laughed. "With weak attacks like that it's no wonder how I destroyed you" Syndrom said. "'later kid, FYI Judgement is on there way" Syndrom disapeared.
"What?" Ryan said (I have to get out of here! There's no way they would think that I didn't do this!) Ryan thought panicking on the inside
"HOLD IT RIGHT THERE"
End of Flashback
One of the Needles struck Ryan's shoulder. A pain shot through his body. He continued his charge and try to sliced the girl. She disapeared. (Why am I fighting? I know I caused this damage, but I'm making a big show of it...) Ryan thought.
The girl reapeared behind Ryan And Kicked him in the back.
He flew forward and hit the ground. He got up. A dark haze surounded his body. Three small blades stuck out of each of his hands forming a claw. he riped out the needle in his shoulder. The wound fixed it self with shadows.
"What idiot gos around destorying the city anyway" The girl said to Ryan obviously angry.
"What kind of girl gos around throwing needles at people" Ryan asked Angerly.
The girl threw more needles at Ryan. Ryan knocked them out of the air with his claws. Ryan ran forward with intense speed. The distants between him and the girl quickly closed. He slamed the back of his claw into the girls stomach. The girl fell to the ground clutching her stomach.
Ryan used the girl's shadow to tie her up. The shadows covered her eyes.
The girl strugled against the Shadows. "Who are you?" Ryan asked. "..." The girl said nothing. The shadows started to squeze around her body. "WHO ARE YOU?" Ryan asked again.
"ghh..." The girl said.
"Well it doesn't matter, Here's what I want you to do" Ryan said "Forget what happened here tonight, all of it" Ryan said.
The girl just sat there. "Do you understand!" Ryan said. The girl nodded a bit. "Fine" Ryan said starting to walk away. "And don't worry about the shadows, they'll disapeare when I'm gone" Ryan said walking away
The shadow disapeared and the girl got up. She looked around for any sign of the boy. (Who was that?) The girl thought to herself.
Ryan's room
Ryan floped down onto his bed. (So much for staying out of trouble... but what is Syndrom doing here?) Ryan thought (And that girl... I hope she's okay...) (First day and I'm probally already a wanted criminal)
(That girls ability... Teleport? Didn't I see something like that in a book?" Ryan said suddenly his backpack fell to the ground. "Oh really" Ryan said frustrated. He started picking up the contents of the backpack. "Huh?" Ryan said as he spyed a black book.
"It's a book about ESPer's ablities" A voice said in his head. Ryan picked up the book and opened it. "Teleport, Blah blah blah, can't use it if the user can't focus." Ryan said reading off the page. "Well it's been a long day" Ryan said putting the book back in his backpack.
Ryan climbed under the covers and went to sleep.
OoC: Some bonus content for making a poor chapter
Underground lab
Syndrom walked in the mechanical door closed behind him. "Welcome back" A blue short haired girl said. She had deep violet eyes that were slightly covered by her bangs. She wore a short blue skirt and a yellow sweatshirt.
"Sheva" Syndrom said. "I want you and Chrono to keep an eye on him"
"Me and Chrono?" Sheva asked. "Why it's not like he will attack back, that power you used on him should keep him in a trance for a few more days" Sheva walked over and sat on a machine
"Go get Chrono"Syndrom comanded.
"Alright fine" Sheva said annoyed as she got up and walked into the dark hallway. She walked into a dimly lite room.
"Chrono time to get up" Sheva said waving her hand over a glass of water next to Chrono's bed. The water floated out of the glass forming a tall tower of water. The water leaned over and smacked Chrono's face.
"AH!" Chrono screamed as she got up. She rubed the side of her face.
"C'mon we have orders" Sheva said looking at the small girl. Chrono appeared to be about 6 to 7 years old and wore a black dress that reached a little over her knees. She wore black leggins under the dress. Her eyes were a blood red color. Her black hair stretched down her back and a little over her eyes
"That hurt Sayoko" Chrono said.
"Oh c'mon a little tap like that couldn't have hurt,c'mon Iris I know your more mature than that" Sheva said.
"What does Syndrom want?" Chrono asked.
"He wants us to watch over Kuro" Sheva said walking out of Chrono's room. Chrono fallowed Sheva walking a bit behind Sheva.
"... Hey Chrono" Sheva said.
"What?" Chrono asked.
"We might have to fight him" Sheva said "I don't know if I can fight Kuroneko"
"Kuro was always stronger than us" Chrono said
"I wasn't talking about his strenght" Sheva said as she walked into the main labratory.
Sheva and Chrono walked over to the door. "I know how you feel" Chrono said "Kuro was a good friend..."
"Yeah was..." Sheva said as she opened the door and walked past it. Chrono quickly fallowed her.
OoC: Again sorry for the poor chapter and hope this makes up for it