Oturan

Part one: The New Girl With The Cold Lock Stare

Hello there! This is my main story on Deviant art…if you have an account, im gaarazami, come say hi! In this story you will meet 5 new characters from different villages, and you will learn about their ties, hate, pasts, and everything they're hiding. But when others learn this, it will changed their lives forever!!! Lol, please enjoy

"Nakurae, aren't you going to have your ramen?" Kankurou asked, his friend had seemed troubled lately. "Oh, uh, sure. It's just that…" Nakurae didn't finish. "Have you seen some different people around lately?" Kankurou looked at her strangely, "Yeah, I see tons of different people every day, it's not like I live here." "No, like, new people, about your age?" She quickly added. This news didn't sound important, but it had Nakurae troubled. "No, but it could just be a new student here for the make-up exams. Since Orochimaru messed them up." He had heard that a few students were coming for them. "Yeah, I guess so" Nakurae sighed. The eating area's door opened slowly to a girl who didn't look like she was from Konoha. The girl had long blonde hair with one dark brown stripe, her outfit was very dark green, and her body was slender. Wrapped around her knees and elbows were what looked like tiny bags about the size of a hand's palm. Nakurae and Kankurou turned to look at the girl, straining to look at every detail. "Nakurae, is that the person you were talking about?" Kankurou pointed. "Uh, yeah, I think so. I've seen her around the temple." The girl must have heard them, because she gave Nakurae a mean stare. "What are you looking at?" The girl said coldly. Kankurou bent over until he was near his friend's ear. "Nakurae, stop staring, I think she heard you." Nakurae seemed stiff. "I said; what are you looking at?!" The girl came closer. She came near enough to Nakurae that she could see under her bangs, this girl had a mark. It was purple, and surrounded her eyes and connected them. Nakurae started sweating, locked in the girl's stare. "Uh, nothing, nothing at all!" Nakurae stuttered. The girl squinted, mocking Nakurae, and walked away. "Wow…she seems…nice" Kankurou said. "More like mentally disturbed." Nakurae added, still stiff. "But, the bad thing is, if there is one new girl, there has to be more. Let's just hope they're nicer." "Yeah let's just hope" Kankurou wished, then they returned to their lunch.

Note: it WILL get longer! Lol…