I finally realized how much the first one sucked, so I'm trying my best to improve it. If there anything I can do to improve it please tell me.

I do not own Arthur

Ed Crosswire drove his 2005 2 door Mustang GT into his driveway. He opened the door grabbed his brief case, and stepped out, with a look of despair on his monkey face. He inserted his key in the door and turned it. He pushed open the door and closed it. He walked over to the coat rack and dropped his briefcase to the floor and took off his coat, he also let it drop to the cold floor.

The house was silent except for the loud radio in Muffy's room and the plasma t.v. in the living room. He crept past the living room, down to the basement, where he had his own bar.

He pulled out a bottle of vodka, Ed pried off the cap and began consuming the alcohol. The monkey faced man knew he had a problem, but he still couldn't stop drinking.

Until he heard someone at the door. He quickly discarded the almost empty glass of vodka an acted as if nothing had happened.

"Have you been drinking Ed" Ms Crosswire asked sarcastically, already knowing he was.

"Listen, I had a pretty rough day and all I ask for is a drink, just one"!

"Ok Ed, one drink, then please come up to bed".

Ed didn't tell her about the loss of business