For the sake of my sanity, I have redone this pitiful piece of crap to something more tolerable. Please enjoy.
"So what are you in for?"
"Murder"
"Ah I see who did you kill?"
"Would you like to be added"
"Touchy touchy"
"My name is James what's yours?" the young boy said. He had just got arrested for steeling an apple. He arrived at the prison cell to see a person with a wide riMadamd hat, like a pirate from the ports and a long coat like the Americans wear. He had been awful hesitant to talk to this dark stranger sitting in the corner of a jail cell. As soon as he heard the sweet, soft voice escape her lips, he relaxed.
This was a woman, and when he caught the first glance of her, he wondered 'how could a woman that beautiful be put in jail'? She had very long black hair, which if it had not been so long, would have been curly. Her relaxed blue-gray eyes seemed to burn through his soul. Her skin pale and fair like porcelain.
'This woman can't be real, can she?' the boy thought and sat down just in time to catch the conversation between the guard captain and a stranger as the came down the hall.
"I need your fiercest hunter, for this man is not easy to kill let alone track" the stranger said as there heavy footsteps echoed through the stone hall.
"Well there is one but this one is not easy to bargain with" the captain said stopping at the cell the boy and the woman were in. "you there come out of the shadows and meet your new employer" the captain hissed. The woman rose with the grace of swan, but her grin was as wicked at a cat about to pounce.
"So who is this gentleman" she smiled as she was leaning on the bars. The man had long blond hair, he was tall, and looked frightened.
"My name is Raoul de Changy--" but he was cut off
"Ah the vitcome for the Paris Opera House. Now tell me what brings you here to the slum jail of Paris" she grinned.
"I need some one removed, he is causing havoc for my wife and I" he sounded embarrassed
"So you want me to get rid of the Phantom of the Opera," she said rather seductively.
"Yes" he replied rather shocked that she knew about that.
"Alright but it will cost you," she said.
"How much" he questioned nervously.
"I want out and to never come back" she smiled.
"Fine, get her out" Raoul shouted and motioned for the guard to let her out. The guard hesitated but then unlocked the cell door.
"See yea round kid" she said to the boy as she walked out
"Wait" he cried "don't leave me here she is my sister" he didn't want to be left in this hellhole.
"The woman smiled and said "well then come on I told you, keep up little brother".
'She actually is letting me go. This is what you call luck'
