Through the Eyes of a Son: A Companion Piece for Blue Eyes
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AN: This is a five and one story from Jim's POV that is a companion piece to Blue Eyes a five and One from Winona's POV. The first chapter of Blue Eyes takes place the day Jim was born. I found it impossible to write a new born's POV so chapter one of this story with take place on Jim's fifth birthday. All of the other chapters will match up with the ones it Blue Eyes.
Special thanks to RogueAngel. She asked for this, so here it is.
I - The Day He was Born
It was his special day! That's what Ms. Zimms said. Today Jimmy turned five and that was the best thing ever. Mommy would comm him today too. Last month on Sam's special day she commed and talked to Sam for two whole hours. He couldn't wait. Mommy had been in space for a long time and he missed her. He had so many thing to tell her. He sat down by the comm unit and pulled out some of his toys. He didn't know when she would comm so he needed to stay close to the unit. He didn't want to miss it. He waited and he waited and he waited. When he didn't think he could stand it anymore he kept waiting. He couldn't leave and risk missing Mommy.
It was bedtime. His special day was over. Mommy didn't comm like she did on Sam's day. What happened? Did Mommy forget? How could Mommy forget his special day?
He missed her. He was going to tell her that if she came home he would make sure not to make her sad anymore. Maybe she got attacked by space pirates? Yea, that must be it! Mommy got attacked by space pirates and that's why she missed his special day. She would comm him tomorrow.
Winona Kirk does not comm home for another three weeks.
AN: I know this seems a little choppy but I was trying to look at like from a five year old POV. I figured things might be a little out there. The next chapters Jim will be older and things will flow better and make more sense.
What do you think of the first chapter, like it, hate it, print it and burn it?
