Grey's Anatomy Fan-fiction: The Storm.

I am writing a fan fiction for the very first time in my life and I don't even know how it'd go, and I am still a newbie here. I'd appreciate it if you people would review it nicely, and also I have no medical knowledge apart from what I hear in Grey's Anatomy's episodes. I've continued it from the last episode of Grey's Anatomy season 10's final episode.


Derek and Meredith had just had the biggest argument of their married life. Derek was devastated upon the fact that she changed her mind about moving to DC. Meredith had somehow gotten the idea that Derek was enforcing his decision upon her. After she refused to move to DC with him, he took his luggage, put it in his car and left for DC.

Meredith sat back at home, she had never thought of the consequences. She just wanted him back and at the same time Cristina's words echoed through her mind "He might be dreamy but don't let him eclipse your dreams" and for a moment she thought, was it really her dream to be working at Sloan Grey Memorial Hospital or to live with Derek and her kids and have a happily ever after? The thoughts of becoming the other Elis Grey raced her mind and she had absolutely no idea what to do next. Kids had gone to sleep and she felt as lonely as ever. She thought of calling Derek up and apologizing.

As soon as she picked up her phone to do it, it started ringing itself. It was an unknown number. She immediately answered it.

"Is this Meredith Grey-Shepherd?" a woman spoke from the other side.

"Yes it is." She answered conformingly.

"Ma'am I'd like you to come down to Grey Sloan Memorial Hospital's ER. Your husband: 's been brought here with severe head trauma and some broken ribs and a tender abdomen. , and are currently attending to him."

The words shook her. Her hands began to shake, how could it be Derek she thought, he just left safe and sound she thought.

"Hello? Ma'am? Are you with me?" the woman spoke.

"I….I'll be…there..." she could barely speak.


Back at GSMH, Derek was lying on the gurney while Owen was examining his breath sounds with his stethoscope, he was barely conscious.

"Stay with me Derek, we'll take very good care of you."

"Mer…" He said while still struggling to breathe.

"I had them call her Derek, you just need to stay calm, OK? Can you do that?"

"Mer..I…"

" I need to do a small neuro exam on you, please co-operate." said while Owen put an oxygen mask around Derek to help him breathe better. Derek nodded a little, he did it on patients all the time, it was a little uncomfortable for him to be feeling it from the patient's point of view.

"Thank you, okay, can you squeeze my fingers? Good. Can you follow my finger? Up, Down, Left and Right. Good so far ." he said shining his penlight in Derek's eyes.

"Did someone page me for consult?" Bailey said while entering the room, not glancing at the patient, she was still putting on her gloves. "How's the patient doin'…" she stopped right there as she looked at the gurney and saw that the patient was none other than Derek Shepherd.

"Oh my God! Shepherd!" Bailey exclaimed. Derek looked at her with lifeless eyes. He was losing his vision; he was dizzy and knew he'd pass out any second. "Whats wrong with him" she asked Hunt stepping closer to the gurney.

"He complained of pain in his abdomen when I palpated." Owen explained.

Bailey looked down at his bare abdomen and she said "Okay Shepherd, I am going to palpate some points on your abdomen and just tell me wherever you feel discomfort."

"Any pain here?" she asked almost burying her fingers in his tender abdomen.

Derek moaned and steam settled on the oxygen mask. Bailey understood.

"Okay, we'll get an ultrasound just to see whats going on. Probably just due to shock. " She said taking her gloves off. "Has anyone called Grey yet?" she asked.

"I had the nurse call her. She'll be here any time."

Just then the door flew open, and there stood Meredith, in tears, she saw him, taking labored breaths while being examined by all departments. She looked at the table by the gurney and she saw the shirt he had been wearing. They had cut it off his body.

"That..that's..Der.." she ran to the gurney.

Derek was still struggling to be conscious. He saw her and she gripped his hand tight.

"Derek... I am here... it's okay… you'll be okay… I'll not let anything happen…. Don't die please... Don't! Der…." She said breathing fast.

"Meredith you cant stay here.. let the doctors work. He'll be fine. We've called for a cardio consult." Bailey said pulling Meredith from the side of the gurney.

"Cardio..Cristina..handles.." She said in shock.

"Yeah, I called her she'll be here in a while." Owen said.

"She left." She said.

"She's your person, she'll always be, and she'll be here for you and Derek." He said.

"Okay people, we don't have time to waste, let's prep him for the OR." Were the last words she heard before a nurse took her out of the trauma room.

April had been taking care of the kids so she didn't need to worry about them, she sat in the waiting room, thinking about how it took one second for life to change and how if Derek doesn't make it she'd be broken and she'd never be able to forgive herself. She sat there cursing herself that only if she wouldn't have led the fight, he'd still be okay, and not be there, in the OR, open in front of all his former colleagues.


I hope you guys leave good reviews for me. Its my very first time and I am still a Sophomore at High-school so ignore the mistakes please.