Hello everybody, Spinzaku here. This is my first atempt at a Fanfiction so be at least slightly gentle.
Reviews,Shoutouts,tips, and good criticism is excepted. Flames will be ignored.(But it will still hurt my soul if you can live with that. I had been watching FOZ eariler and as I watched, I saw that Saito was a weakass pervert. I wanted to give Louise a very powerful Familiar. Sasuke. Of course Sasuke throughout the story Sasuke is trying to be a much nicer person. Don't worry, it will be explained.

"Chapter 1-Sasuke's change/Louise's success-failure

Sasuke Uchiha stood out in front of the ocean, thinking about his brother who had sacrificed everything for him. Itatchi had fooled him to the very end, making him believe that he had been an insane psycho that wanted to steal his eyes. In truth, he had been a double agent that took hate in the face of love, dishonor in the face of honor. Even then, Itatchi died with a smile on his face. Tears streamed down Sasuke's face, he had murdered his best friend. He had killed Itatchi, that maenad that….He had obtained Mangekyo Sharingan.

"The hebi has been disbanded as of now. I have decided to live my life peacefully, that's what Itatchi would have wanted. Not in Konoha, of course. I just want to live as long and peacefully as possibly. Do whatever you want to do, just try not to get into too much trouble." Sasuke smiled ruefully back at them. Each of his old team smiled back at him.
Do whatever ya want." Suigestu turned around and started walking away.

"Stay safe, Sasuke." Jugo turned around and walked away in a different direction then Suigestu.

"If that's your decision Sasuke I don't have the right to change your mind." Tobi/Madara said walking towards Kami knows where.

Karin just left without a word. It was better this way, he didn't want to hurt Karin, he really didn't. Having ties to his past would lead to bad things in his future. He had only one more visit to make.

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Luckily and surprisingly, Itatchi's body was where it had been left. Sasuke carefully turned the body over and looked at his brother's face. Don't worry brother, you will be very missed by me. I'll see to your getting a proper burial.

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Sasuke place the log over the mound in the ground. He was standing at the place he had disbanded the Hebi. He decided to bury Itatchi here, just because it was so beautiful. Sasuke took a seat on the rocks right next to his brother's grave. Without his clan's scrolls he would never know the true powers of his new set of eyes. It was okay though, he wouldn't go blind as Itatchi had almost had. Sasuke looked down at the water and activated his Mangekyo. It wasn't a six point star anymore, it was a ten point star and in each different point was a black circle. Red veins went through the white of his eyes as well. He deactivated it to its normal mature Sharingan, and then deactivated it to his normal black eyes.

The only thing left to find out was, where to go? What place would accept him? He had contemplated going back to Konoha for awhile until he saw the bingo book. He was a nuke-nin to Konoha. He couldn't go back there? As he was thinking about all of this, he didn't notice a pentagon shaped seal appear under him. He didn't notice until he started to sink into the ground. As he struggled, he only sank faster. Sasuke quickly activated his new Mangekyo, trying to find some way to escape the strange seal. He only sank faster. No, this couldn't happen, not yet, he didn't want to die, or whatever this was doing to him. He activated his chidori on instinct, trying desperately to get out. Only seconds later, he sank completely in.

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"At last, today is the summoning ceremony. While this is your first test as 2nd years, it is also a holy first meeting with your life long familiar." Spoke a man looking at the group of children before him. All of the students were nervous about what they would summon, but none so as Louise De La Vallire. The small flat-chested pinket was absolutely horrible at magic. Everyone called her Louise the Zero. She was nervous as hell about what she would summon; she would be mortified if she summoned something that would make all the other children laugh at her. A girl named Kirche walked up to her and said.

The class was standing outside next to the castle getting ready to summon their familiars. The man who was talking to them, Mr. Colbert, was wearing a blue robe and he was holding a staff. While he explained how important this ritual was, the students were growing anxious.

"Well won't this be exciting? Can't wait to see what you summon." Kirche egged her on most of the time. (Won't bother describing her)

As Louise watched people make their summons, she grew more and more nervous. Someone had summoned a bear-bug, a girl named Montermoncey summoned a frog, a boy nammed Guiche summoned a mole looking thing, a girl named Tabithia summoned a dragon, even Kirche had summoned a Salemander.

"Is that all, has everybody finished?" Mr. Colbert yelled at the group.

"No, Louie hasn't gone." Kirche yelled out. Everyone snickered as she stepped up.

"Oh, alright Louise, go ahead and start the summoning." Mr. Colbert told her stepping away to give her space, while the other kids backed up to keep from blowing to pieces.

Louise was nevous as hell. What if she skrewed up? The students would make fun of her again. She just had to summon something great.

"Come on Louise, ya scared?" Kirche yelled out to her while petting her new salamander.

"Shut Up!" Louise yelled back.

"It'll probably be another explosion." Guiche, the curley blond haired boy whispered to the girl, Montermoncey. "But don't worry love, I will protect you." Guiche told her putting a rose that came out of nowhere into his mouth.

"Please hurry Miss Vallire, we don't have all day." Mr. Colbert said from the group of kids.

"Hai." Louise whispered.

" TO MY SERVANT THAT EXSISTS SOMEWHERE IN THE UNIVERSE! TO THE HOLY BEAUTIFUL, AND ABOVE ALL MOST POWERFUL FAMILIAR! I APPEAL TO YOU FROM MY HEART AS I CHANT! ANSWER MY GUIDENCE!" Louise shouted out her chant with great dignity. As she finished she pointed her wound foreword when…

BOOM

The students ducked down and covered their heads when an explosion from Louise accured.

"As expected." Guiche stated.

"Of course it came to this. Wait, whats that?" Kirche asked to no one when a figure's shadow stood up in the dust.

"Is that a human?"

"No way."

"Of couse it's a human. She's Louise the Zero!"

At the last comment, everyone began to laugh. To them, it was just to much. They knew she had zero succes rate and this just added to their claims.

"Theres no way, this is impossible!" A human Louise thaught. This was worse than anything she could have imagend.

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After the dust settled on the field. The group looked at the figure before them. A boy about 17 years old was standing there looking at them with an expression of shock, confusion, anger, and something else. He had black hair that was slightly spiked in the back. He wore a white short-sleeved, high-colored, shirt with a red and white fan on the back. The shirt was tucked in tightly in his pants. (Not sure how to describe pants?) He had a purple rope tied around his waist with a sword on the back. The sword was long but small, and it was a light black. He had open toed shoes with shin-guards. He also had some type of glove on both of his hands that went up about half way to his elbow. (Hope I described Sasuke well)

"Ugh, where the hell am I? Where is this place?" Sasuke looked at all of the students, trying desperatly to not show the anger, confusion, and loathing he felt right now. That strange seal had sucked him in, and he had come out here. He continued to look at the group of children before him. They all seemed about his age, and they all wore the same outfit. Everyone wore a button up white shirt with a cloak strapped by a pendant with a five point star on it. He wondered where he was.

"Where the hell am I?" Sasuke looked at the adult standing a little way away. All of the students began to laugh at the weird noises the human was saying.

"He's clearly a commoner. I mean, just look at him." Kirche yelled out while everyone laughed at Louise, who was blushing like mad.

" Mr. Colbert, can I please summon again?" Louise begged the man who only shook his head.

"The summoning is sacred. You have to finish the ritual."

"But-"

"No buts, now hurry up and finish so we can leave.

Louise blushed. All of the other students snickered and laughed at her while she aproached the strange man. Sasuke narrowed his eyes at the small pink haired girl that was approaching him. He may be low on chakra after his battle with Itatchi, but did they really think that this pathetic girl could take him? He gussed he shouldn't judge a book by it's cover considering the pucnch most kunochi had. He decided to just keep his guard up.

When Louise reached him she tried to pull him down. Only for him to take a step back.

"Hold still. You better be greatful, a commoner wouldn't recieve this honor an a lifetime." She grabbed his shoulders and brought him down to his height, she went up to about his chest. Sasuke pulled out a kunai and was about to plundge it into her heart. Before she kissed him. On the lips. He was so suprised that he dropped the kunai. His eyes were wide with suprise. Ever since he had left Konoha, he hadn't thought about girls(or boys). But the sensation of the small girls strawberry lips on his felt real good.

As the girl drew back, a faint blush on her cheeks, she turned around and addressed the man.

"Alright, the ritual is complete." Louise said to Colbert. He nodded his head and he then looked at Sasuke.

Sasuke was looking at his hand with anger and hate. Strange runes were shaping, no, carving into his skin. It burned, it burned like when the snake bastard had put the curse mark on his neck. The worst part was that all of his remainding chakra was being absorbed into the runes.

"What the hell did you do to me!"Sasuke yelled at the pinket who took three steps back from the angry boy. As Sasuke started to feel the last of his chakra being consumed by the runes, his vision faded, and he slipped into uncounciousness.

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