Chapter 1: Finally awake!
SLG: Lan, his friends, the villains are in the next chapter, and I'm trying a different way of writing a story. Also this character, explain some part of OC to made it bester to understand them in the story.
The Past: 30 years-ago
In a high technology lab, a man with three children was getting ready to do something.
One of the children was a 10 or 11 years- old girl that was standing next to a pad. She has black long straight hair, 2 puffy curly bangs on the side and one curly one in the middle. She was wearing a full body suit.
The man has short black standing up hair and red share eyes. On his face was a worry
Look.
"Don't worry father. It's will workout. She said with a smile, but then almost started to fell down, but a teenager boy, who have long spike purple hair and yellow eyes, jean, and black t-shirt with a white wolf on it, catch her. He look that her and said, "Be careful, you'll not will yet sister."
"Yeah, Emi! Eroil is right, and there a lot righting on this," said the little boy with short wave green hair, yellow eyes, green pant, and yellow shirt.
"Only 7 years old and already like a businessman. We better keep an eye on you, Eric before you start tricking us," remarked Eroil.
Everyone except Eric started to laugh. Eric said, "Very funny, Eroil. But that will never happen. You guys know I know better."
"Eric…light…"
Emi have just past out, and Eroil have curry Emi to the pod. The pod quickly close and a liquid started to flow in the pod. Eroil run to help his father, and Eric just standing there, and asked, "Will this work father, the illness is really far?" Without stopping his father answer, "I'm sure works."
Now—
In a huge building offices with a good view, the room have a sofa, shelf, desk, one wall completely glasses, double doors, rug, chairs, and paintings on the walls. It was clearly a bright sunny day, and a man was work hard in the office. His head was down and only his short wave green hair was show.
A green eyes navi wearing completely black surfing outfit, that include boots & the long glove that have symbols on them, and a helmet. It has pop up on the guy computer, and said, "Good morning Mr. Kirika! You have a board meeting that 3, and you used to have a deal meeting to day that 10 before that today, but you managed to get it yesterday."
Mr. Kirika smile, as he raise his head, and said, "I have some time over after the 12'o clock meeting yesterday, Toby."
Toby said, "Yes, but now you have 9-12 free, Eric."
"What? Are you sure? There isn't anything else for me to do between them," said Mr. Kirika. Just then rings sound appeared for a second, and Toby said, "You got a mail from your brother, Eroil."
E-mail read:
Dear little brother,
I figure you'll provably out do business things, which you seem to love to do so much. Well stop the heck what ever you doing, and meet me at our dad's personal lab now. Or I quit!
Later
Eric and Eroil was in there father's lab where theirs' sister was in. Eroil have now long hair tried back, white lab cost, black pant, and a white t-shirt with a symbol on the left corner. "This better be importation Eroil! I'm a have lot to do, it not easy to run your own company this huge," said Eric.
"Stop begging about it for a second, Emi going to wakeup soon," said Eroil and Eric were taken by this. "I'm sure of it. I check the machine this morning, she sure be waking up any minute now, but we need to talk about what to do after that." he added it.
"Huh? What you mean afterward? We're going to gave her a job that the company, and find a nice apartment too," said Eric.
"How is it that someone as smart as you can be so airhead?" remarked Eroil. Eric about to say something, but Eroil added it. "Since the illness was really bad, dad has to frozen her! She'll still be a kid."
"WHAT!"
"It a good thing I take care of something," said Eroil. "You really sure notices does thing about the family." He added it. "Why didn't you tell me soon?" asked Eric looking mad that Eroil. "Well one I though you knew, two to keep her safe, and three I didn't know you're an idiot!" replied Eroil calmly. "How dare you call me an idiot?"
Toby asked, "What do you mean by keeping her safe?" Eric stops talking after hearing this question.
"If you think of it, Emi will be the only family member left after we're gone," answered Eroil. Eric has cooled down by now, nod his head with agreement. No one seems to notice that the pod have open and Emi was well awake. "That factor will make our sister the sole heir to my company, seen ether one of us don't have any offspring." Eric added it.
"Man, I knew you'll end up running a company, but I never figurer that you haven't marry." They turn to see Emi sitting up that them.
A few months later
Emi was alone in her new bedroom, which is the walls was green, blue, and yellow. The room also has a flat TV, a computer, wooden desk, it own bathroom, a huge circle rag, a great view, a colorful bed, and pictures. Emi thinking to herself, "I been here in this new world, and I still don't really fit in to this rich life style. Heck I don't fit really in this new world."
Knock, knock
Eroil come in the room, said, "Hey sis, I hear you doing great catching up to your grade level. So I got something for you."
That the computer, Eroil got up, and said, "Everything is loaded and all set to begin. I got to go; my net navi Wolfman will help you. Right Wolfman?"
Wolfman's appearance lives to it name, except it was white, and more a werewolf navi.
He appeared on the screen, and said, "Don't sweat it. We're having this new navi running in no time flat."
SLG: That it for this chapter, now it time for the truth advancer to begin in the next chapter. Okay I know this chapter isn't really one of my best, but it the way I need it to be. Beside some of the best story don't always have a great begin. Please reviews this chapter, I really want to know what you guy thinks about the characters so far.
