Can you all be nice to me please? This is the first story that I've ever written so don't expect it to be wonderful. It is most likely rushed and really bad so if you give constructive criticism I don't mind. But just go easy okay? Thanks :)
Oh! And don't worry about the fact that Sakura looks wrong. She'll become normal later in the story….. Ch. 2…..
Quite short. Sorry about that!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. If I did it most likely would have sucked.
Chapter 1
A small sigh was heard as a twelve year old female with short, curly hair and sparkling brown eyes turned over to look at an alarm clock that was sitting silently on a wooden desk.
The girl emitted a small growl when the red numbers on the alarm clock showed that it was 6:45 in the morning.
"Just great," muttered Sakura to herself, for that was the girl's name.
"I'm up fifteen minutes too early and now I'm wide awake!"
Sakura's foul mood continued as she got ready for school and only when she started walking to her first class did it get better.
"Do you get the feeling that something awesome is going to happen?" Asked a voice in Sakura's head.
"Inner… for once I might have to agree with you."
Sakura has had 'Inner' ever since she was a little kid and has grown little fond of her. Of course, Sakura has never told anyone about the voice she hears because, apparently, hearing voices in your head will give you a one-way ticket to the Funny Farm.
As she sat down in her seat at the back of the class, Sakura noticed a female with four blonde ponytails talking to her teacher. The two looked as if they agreed on something because they smiled at each other and shook hands.
Becoming bored waiting for the class to begin, Sakura started to watch the people going past the window that was conveniently placed right next to her.
I t was after five minutes of this that she felt a presence near her.
Turning around slowly, Sakura was confronted by the blonde she had seen earlier.
The girl smiled and stuck out her hand.
"Hey! My name's Temari!"
Shaking Temari's hand Sakura replied.
"I'm Sakura."
"Nice to meet you Sakura. Could you please follow me?"
"But… what about my class?"
"Heh. Don't worry about that. I already talked to your sensei and its all okay with him."
"Alright then."
Sakura followed Temari to the front gates of the school when the blonde suddenly stopped and handed her a brown cloak with a hood.
"Can you put that on for me?"
Now, in most cases Sakura would have refused to put the cloak on and would have ran away screaming her guts out, but right now she was quite curious as to what was going to happen. So she did as she was told and just ignored 'Inner's' ramblings about evil pink bunnies that were stealing all of her chocolate chip cookies.
"NOOOO! My hard work! I slaved over an oven to make those god-sent items and now those pink fiends steal them all from me! Why?!? I should give them a piece of my mind! See how much the like the Holy Cookies being taken away *mumble mumble*."
"Okay Sakura, I think I should explain some stuff to you."
"Ahem. Alright, there is a place where shinobi (ninja) live in villages. That land is connected to where we are right now, but the shinobi from the other place can't come here unless they're chosen for a special reason. Now, every few years someone from the other land will come here to get twelve year olds who can become a ninja. We find who can or can't by sensing who has chakra and who doesn't. You are one of the few who has chakra. I shall ask you now. Do you want to become a shinobi?"
"Hmm… should I take the offer? Or do I not?"
"I say we take it! That way we can kick some ass! CHA!"
"Are you sure?"
"Of course I am. It isn't like we have any family alive or anything for us in this place."
"You know what?"
"What?"
"You're totally right!"
"Of course I'm right! I'm always right! Um… uh… I think I am."
Sakura mentally rolled her eyes while she answered Temari's question.
"Yes Temari, I want to become a ninja."
Temari nodded and continued speaking.
"In the ninja land there are Hidden Villages. The most prominent is the Hidden Leaf Village; Konohagakure. Now, when we get to the other place you will be randomly put in a Hidden Village. You shall also get weapons that you will automatically be good at using. Sometimes only you will know how to use them, but they're rare so not many ninjas have them. Also, there are the Tailed Demons that can sometimes have people like you as their containers. Those types of people are called Jinchuriki and I think that you have a large chance of being one. You'll most likely find out quite soon."
Sakura's eyes were wide with shock at what she had been told. Temari, however, didn't notice as she was too busy creating a portal that would take them to the place she had just talked about.
When the portal appeared it was a stormy purple in colour and it had a warm breeze flowing out of it.
Grinning at Sakura, Temari leaped into the portal and disappeared. And it was with a nervous laugh that Sakura did the same.
To Be Continued…
I still think it was a tad rushed. Hmph. But I tried. Does anyone have any tips on how to make a good fight scene? I'm having trouble with making a good one.
Georgie-chan
