Hi everyone

I read many great stories of Revan sensing Malak's betrayal, and/or capturing Bastila. But I never seen this one where Malak don't betrayed Revan by firing on his ship. Star Wars don't belong to me. *Note* I have play the game both modded and not modded. To be honest, with mods it's way more fun and I download many things. Playing neutral, Revan canon face and I'm believing that kotor neutral is the way I believe that it should be play.

To some he was a Jedi Knight.

To others he was an Dark Lord Of The Sith.

Darth Revan stood on his command ship, a endless and brutal battle before him just outside of his ship. The Jedi and Republic hadn't listen to him, so he'll attack them until they shall or suffer the consequences.

Just then, the door open softly and 5 dark Jedi came in, hoods and masks covering their faces. They all fall to one knee and bow to him, the Master spoke. "You summoned us Lord Revan?"

Revan was quiet for the next minute, letting the battle outside being the only noise heard. "Yes, the Jedi and Republic is on my ship," Revan finally spoke, his voice in his mask being nothing but mechanic. "They're approching me and shall fight me soon."

"Ah yes but why have you summond us Lord Revan?" the other one questioned, knowing he'd better kept his voice low and respectfully or this shall be the last he's ever spoke.

"You'll stay here," Revan said, still staring out at the window where the battle was going his and his apprentice, Malak's, favor. "When the Jedi arrived they will get a warm welcome."

"As you wish my lord," the master said with a bow, quickly followed by the others before standing infront of Revan and holding their red blades.

O.o

The Jedi, Bastila Shan was leading an strike team upon the ship. Many republic troopers and 4 Jedi follow her. After a long gruesome battle and many of the Republic Troopers falling to an blade of a Dark Jedi or a blaster shot of an Sith Soldiers, they made it to the outside of the ship bridge. Only one admiral remain, all of his friends and allies were dead.

Bastila put her hands on the bridge doors and close her eyes, remembering Revan before he became like this. She was sure deep in that mask and armor, was still the man that cared about her and who she had care about.

Moving her right hand, she opened the door and walked in to see five Dark Jedi. Activating her yellow single bladed saber, she'd charge to one with her Jedi companions charging to them.

The republic admiral made it around the Jedi and Dark Jedi and up to Revan, who hadn't turn around. Pulling out an blaster, he fired at Revan, but the blaster shots came to an full stop. He grabbed an vibrosword and ran to him, hoping to stabbed him. However, Revan deflected the blaster shots to him and he held his stomach. Not even a second later, he clutched his throat before hitting the ground.

Finally dealing with the last dark jedi, Bastila and the other jedi stare at the dead admiral before turning to Revan with a look of disgust. Revan turn around and had an saber hilt in his right hand, yet it wasn't ignited. "Ah my dear Bastila, I have miss you." Revan said shaking his head after seeing her all these years. "I must be honest with you, I've really wish you and I'd met on good terms but unfortunately that isn't the case."

"You betrayed us, Revan, your nothing but a cold and emotionless monster." Bastila shouted. Revan winced slightly when he heard Bastila said those words. It was because of her that's he had left for the war. Now, Bastila thinks he's a monster.

"Jedi lies, they have turn you against me like all in the order, just think Bastila, you can have peace yet emotions if you join me." Revan said, extending his hand out to her. "The Jedi have been losing you as their puppet."

"I'll never fall to the dark side," she declared, glaring at him. "I am a Jedi."

"Yes, you are." Revan said, slowly walking up to her, the Jedi standing next to her protectively just-in-case Revan tried something. "You follow their pathetic code, yet they look down upon you, especially Vrook. I can see it in your heart. The dark side is pathetic as well, ruthlessly attacking the jedi. They are own by their own code, join me and together we'll master both sides."

Bastila considered her options about this. Deep down, she wanted to learn both sides, but held her place as a Jedi. "I am a Jedi," she repeated, though she doubted her own words.

"Stand down Revan," another Jedi with a green lightsaber step forward and aim it at him.

"Ah very well, Jedi, if it's a fight you want you shall have it," Revan ignited his saber, showing an red glow extended from the blade and aim it at them.

"You cannot win Revan," Bastila shouted. It was a shout that emanate betrayal, anger, frustration, fury. He can feel all of these emotions of him "betraying" her and the Jedi. Revan frowned at the thought of killing her, his once best friend, now his enemy. But, sometimes sacrifices must be made for the greater good. Bastila and the other Jedi raise their blades and the Sith Lord fought each one.

O.O

On the ship across, Malak was watching the ship his master was on and sensing he was in danger. He thought about using this to his advantage and kill Revan and the jedi with a single stroke, but he's smart enough to know the consequences of betraying Revan and him surviving.

Malak can only fear of this happening, he was about to tell his men to fire on Revan's ship. But out of fear, he didn't, it was best anyway. Perhaps, he'll be able to find a different way and kill him in the future but not now, if Revan survived, than Malak would wish he hadn't betrayed him.

Holding back an whimpered at the thought of failing to kill him, despite wearing a mask, he decided against this betrayal. "Admiral, prepared my ship." Malak said, not moving and still glaring at his master's ship.

"Sir, why...?" the admiral was cut off by a unbearable force pushing on his throat. He soon let out a wheezing sound before hitting the ground, unmoving.

Malak turn to the next highest rank, "Admiral Karath, prepared my ship."

"As you wish... my lord." Karath said, learning the consequences of questioning Malak by the body of his 'former' admiral on the ground.

"Yes, Revan," Malak muttered threateningly under his breath. "I'll not betray you right now but I will in time and take the mantle of Dark Lord from you." He'd silently hoped the Jedi and Revan kill each other.

O.O

Revan block another slash from a Jedi before clashing against one, who'd try to stabbed him in the back. Flipping around, he jumped back to the edge of the bridge and the Jedi all took their breaths before continuing the fight.

"Stand down Revan," Bastila demanded. What's she had noticed between their battle that Revan was holding back kill blows. 'Perhaps the Dark Side hadn't consumed him fully.' thinks Bastila. 'Maybe I can...'

She was stopped when another Jedi stepped forward and slashed at him. Revan brought his blade down and send lightning at her, she's stopped and block it. But his lightning was too much and she was send back and her lightsaber proved useless as the lightning burn on her.

Bastila thought this was it for her, and a tear came out, she was one of her friends from the academy, only 2 years older and a Jedi Knight now. However, surprisingly Revan didn't kill her, his lightning stopped. He grabbed the two other Jedi and send them to the side, aching with the pain of his power along with the one with lightning.

Bastila stare at him in shock and surprise, he could've easily killed them all but no, he'd let them live. She knew her suspicions was correct, he hadn't gone to the dark side, not completely.

Just then, the door snapped open and Malak came in and glare at his master than the Jedi in the corner, sending lightning at them, they all fall dead. Bastila, in anger, clashed blades against him. In the corner of her eye, she's been staring at Revan to see he was standing there, lightsaber in hand, looking from her and his apprentice.

Malak pressing against her blade force her attention back to him. She kick at his leg hard and made him move back. She use this to her advantage and send blows to him, which he has block easily. Malak jump over her and send a slash at the back of her neck.

Spinning around and barely blocking the attack, she and Malak enaged a duel lock. Bastila gritted her teeth. She'll have to win this or all in the galaxy would be doom. Malak send an strike to her saber and slash the single blade in half, making it no longer usable.

Malak approched her with raise hands, sending torrents of lightning upon the young Jedi. Bastila screamed out in pain, squirming in pain. She wished that the pain to stop. All she wanted was it to stop...

As he did this, she started to be lift up from the ground and slam into the wall. The lightning came to a stop. Going on the ground weakily, she stare up at Malak with weaken eyes. She had felt her life force draining away. It will be any moment now, she close her eyes for what's she thought to be the last time.

She felt Malak lightning coming toward her, but strangely it didn't struck her, she open her eyes and saw Revan standing there, red lightsaber in right hand, blocking the lightning, absorbing the lightning with his left hand. Bastila never seen a Jedi... or Sith doing this, he was holding his saber in one hand but using tutaminis in his other hand. The lightning seem to be weakening and Revan knew this so he no longer had to use that power and now he hold his saber with both hands.

The next moment went fast - Revan jumped toward Malak in a blur and slash his hand and lower arm off. Before Malak fall to the ground, Revan sighed and turn off his saber. He hadn't expected this day will turn out like this.

Bastila had succumb to her injuries and passed limply as the world of blackness took her.

A/N I hope you guys like the first chapter. If you have any ideas for the future, feel free to tell me them and I will use them with your permission of course. I'm not sure how I want this story to shift, but I am willing to try my best.