This is my new story BrokenHeart. I'm going to stop writing alpha and alpha for a little while, but if i find extra time i will update it. as the summery says, Kate cheats on Humphrey, but thats going to happen much later in the story. also i'm going to try to write this story in P.O.V. I have a few chapters like that, but i'm going to try to write this whole story like that. Wish me luck.
Chapter 1- Darkness
Humphreys POV
I stumbled through the forest blindly, tears streaming down my eyes. I just experienced my parents killed. All because of pack riots. I didn't know why, but my parents said it had something to do with a law. Most of the wolves killed eachother, and the survivors were running for safety, like me. If i stayed though, they probably wouldn't attack a pup. They might have taken care of me. Now i'm alone, but atleast i was trained for this.
"Got to find another pack" I said to myself.
If i keep walking i'll have to run across someone eventually. What if their not friendly. What if i run into a bear.
"What if i find the western pack?" I ask myself.
My parents talked about them before. They said that they were friendly, and that they were friends with the leader. There friendly so they'll probably take me in. If that doesn't work i'll tell them i'm the son of Chris and Clare. Then they'll definatly take me in. I looked up into the sky. It was almost dark, and the sun was to the right of me. That was west. I changed dirrections. I was no longer walking blindly. I was walking in the general dirrection of the western pack. The day had about an hour left of sunlight, then i would have to find shelter.
"Good, i'll make it there by tomorrow" I said.
Time went by fast walking because the whole time i was thinking. About what i was going to do. About my parents. I tried not to break down and cry, but it was getting hard. So i focussed my mind on what the west was going to be like. My parents said... I laid my ears back and let out a saddened whimper. I quickly focussed back to the west. They were a big pack. Lot's of wolves gave me a chance to make alot of friends. While thinking i didn't even notice it was dark.
"Crap, i got to find shelter" I said.
I looked around. Obviusly there was nothing around. I would have to keep walking until i came across something. I wasn't fond of the dark, but i would have to deal with that right now. I saw something in the corner of my eye. A hole under some tree roots. I sniffed it out to make sure their was nothing in their. I didn't smell anything so i crawled inside. The hole was small, but that would trap more heat inside. It was freezing at first but after a few minutes my body heat warmed up my temperary den. The warmth relaxed my mind, and i drifted into a well needed sleep.
I opened my eyes to see that the sun was out. I suprisingly slept the whole night without waking up. I stretched my mucles and crawled out of the hole that i slept in. It may have been a hole, but it was comfortable. I looked up in the sky, but the sun was directly strait up.
"Great" i said.
I looked around trying to figure out what dirrection i was heading yesterday. I started walking the same way. There was some rustling in the bushes behind me. I looked back and what did i see. A freaking grizzly bear. I turned around and ran as fast as i could. When the grizzley saw me, he ran after me. I was terrorfied. He was gaining on me. I heard breathing right behind me. Puff' Puff' Puff' then it stopped. I turned around, and saw that he stopped.
"Why did he stop" I asked myself.
I tripped over a tree root, and tumbled down the hill. I hit my head at the bottom and faded into Darkness...
how was my first chapter? my next chapters will be longer. this chapter was a introduction. please review.
