This is just a trail/intro to my Night World story here. I want to see if I should write it or not. It's all up to you guys. You read and review and tell me it sounds like its good enough to continue. Granted this will be a short story but this is like a summary and pretty much sets the tone for the rest of the story. So R&R please.

Key:

"Regular talking"

"emphasis"

'Telepathy'

Thoughts

Change in point of view

-*- scene change (sometimes I will state the change, it will be like this; -*- "…" -*-)


There is talk of a creature so powerful that it can single handily stop an army in its tracks. This creature does not belong in the world of humans but of the Night World, a secret society in which many other creatures live in. The Night World though in fact is not a place, it is all around you. All around every being, it is part of the human world, it completes the world. In this society there are vampires, witches, werewolves and shape shifters. There are also the humans that know of the Night World, most of them are known as hunters, others as a danger, others as soulmates. But the creature I mention is none of these; in fact it is much more. So much more that its life will determine the chance for other lives to survive the Apocalypse that is to come. For years its life was a secret, its existence was a secret. One day the secret got out, and it spread throughout the Night World. Now, moments before the Apocalypse to come, the inhabitants of the Night World race to see who can find it first and use it in the war to come.


I understand that it was short but as I told you before it's only a trial. Please review and tell me if I should continue.