BITTER LOVE


A/N-

Zoor said she wanted an update party and since I don't hav one ready I decided to post this little piece .I'm kind of weird when it comes to poetry so bear with me.


Once….

I loved the soft light that shone on a hazy winter's day,

the crisp feel of the wind caressing me,

the shelter of my snowy paradise,

the warmth and love stowed deep within it.

But then came love,

Bitter love, harsh & unkind, rude & hurtful love,

Hurting, thrusting, paining, searing love.

Stretching your fiery arms around me,

Telling me you'd not burn me, hurt me, scar my soul.

And like a fool I believed you,

Put my trust in your deceptive warmth,

Snatched my heart away from those who cared

And put it in your eager hands,

That so quickly turned & broke it.

But fool I still was

For I put those broken pieces in your hands again

Hoping that it'd be different this time,

That that they'd heal

But you crushed them again

Till I knew that they'd never mend

And this time I could see your hands bleed too.

Damn you love,

For now the winter's light looks shaded & forbidding,

The wind cold & biting,

My paradise is a barren wasteland,

It's warmth replaced by the cold that surrounds it.

I know not whether I love them anymore,

For now ….

I love you…


It kinds of sound bad to me so if you wanna tell me what xactly's wrong( or right) reveiw