Author's note
There are some things you must know about me.
-I don't do this just so others can comment about my paragraphs or my punctuation so if you are here to comment or to criticise my work you can quite frankly go piss off. Why you may ask well because I do this because it helps take me away from the sheer thought of school knowing that here this is my own work and it's the way I want it.
-this as you may already know is a story about lord of the rings. But not as you know it, this has been a while putting together I mean come on how long is history again? This is technically the same story line from the book but there are two new characters in this story both are female cause I mean, well there aren't enough chicks in this story. Both are Elves one by the name of Fariel and the other by the name of Mithriel.
Fariel is from Mirkwood and has pretty much the average elvish family but you could that she's an elf that has a different personality from other elves of her kind. She is maybe the only acquatence that Legolas (even though she is his cousin's cousin) has outside of the walls he lives in for she was quite athletic and she felt sorry for him stuck up in the palace so she would climb through the window (she choose a different window each time) to bring him news of the others of his age and though she could be annoying he was grateful for her friendship (even though he never showed it). The two were first acquainted by a family gathering and well their cousin's cousin is the coolest elf in their family so all the other cousins were playing games with him including Fariel and Legolas when they were going of( to play hide and seek) Fariel wondered why a young 10 year old Legolas was looking around franticly so Fariel said " if you cant find a decent hiding place I'll find you one" and with this she dragged him around to the other side of the castle when he suddenly said "you know I do live here I'm pretty sure I can find my own way around" and with this the young prince left and then Fariel said well aren't you going to take me to the best hiding place there is in this place" and he replied " no, cause then you would tell everybody where it was and then it would no longer be a good hiding place" and with this he left and Fariel who was so enraged by his went and climbed out the window and went home which was only a couple of houses away and then when everyone in the family that had come from far away left and that's when Fariel took pity on him and started to climb through the window to tell him news around Mirkwood.
Mithriel however is a completely different character. Her father was a dark skinned elf and when he was of age was banished from their kind. Her mother went with him for she saw the good in him and knew that he was banished for just being different. They stayed near the forest of Fangorn when Mithriel was born her mother died and she was dark skinned but not as much as her father she was a lot fairer than him, he saw the twinkle in her eye that told him that she was different from other elves, even from himself. When she was just seven orcs raided their home and in the process her father died. With nowhere to go she went into the forest and there she met Tree beard who from then on took care of her. Soon she learnt of other places and people, she longed to meet them but was afraid of what they might say. She stayed with tree beard until she was twenty five for that was when she met Elrond he saw her one day flitting through the forest and so he followed to find a young what seemed to be an elf clad in clothes of ranger fashion (including pants) he enquired after her and she poured her soul out to him and she told him of her father and after the story Elrond took pity on her and took her to Rivendale as his daughter. She stayed there for a long time she learnt skills of elves like archery, and from the help of Elrohir sword fighting. She also learnt the workmanship of making swords, knifes, arrows and soon she came up with her own weapons including what we would call today "ninja blades".
She spent a good 1000 years just learning about pretty much everything but apart from Elrond (who was now a father figure) she couldn't get close to anyone else, probably cause she learnt how she was so set apart from everyone else. She began to be more reserved around Elrond's sons and when she was preparing to leave she learnt how to make clothes with complicated stiches to make sure that they never came lose she had a spare pair of pants ands tops and when she left when she was 1445 years old she went to travel the west of the lands where she met the men of the north (who are of course rangers) who taught her more skills in the art of battle and in the properties of healing. She stayed with them for a while and then took leave to travel more of the west, there she learnt more skills from the men of rohan and the skills of the horse masters (even though she rode without a saddle).but all of them saw the same thing that Elrond did she, would only get to know who she first meets with and then she would shy away from all the others. Many of those that knew her story took pity on her for she was to roam the lands alone or so they thought.
This story solved some of the problems that people had with them like the racism issue, the issue of tolkien being anti feminist and just the fact that there wasn't enough roles that involved chicks. This is the authors note and also I'm sorry if there is a similarity with anyone's stories I didn't mean to I've never even been on fan fiction to read the stories, cause well I haven't had the internet until a couple of days ago.
Peace out.
