Chapter 1- Wise words

The young wolf crashed through the wilderness, his breathing and heart rate rapid. The only thought going through his mind was '' keep running'', ignoring the pitiful screams and protests his muscles made. He pressed on. A white blur racing through the forest.

No matter what the wolf did he couldn't throw his pursuer off track, the pursuer a black panther that went by the name Dusk. Dusk for his part moved with grace and agility and was closing the gap between the two warriors as the seconds passed. The wolf ignored the scrapes and cuts that were etched onto his battle worn body, clearing a ditch with a single jump the other side greeting him like a hand. The wolf hit the ground hard rolled and was up running in the next eye blink, before the wolf had gone more than 3 steps when a shuriken stuck him and pierced the back of his calf tearing through his muscle and immobilizing his leg. The wolf collapsed onto one knee unable to run anymore. This is it he thought, this is where I'm going to die. I have failed….

The panther approached the wolf briskly, not even seeing him as a threat.

'' I'm going to enjoy killing you, Snow, how does it feel knowing you couldn't protect them. Do you feel pathetic?''. Snow looked up at Dusk hatred and anger woven into his eyes and face as much as Snow disliked the warrior in front of him he was right Snow did feel like that pathetic and weak and now powerless. The blood had already started to paint the grass a deep crimson as his leg shook from the strain. Dusk reached down, picked him up and threw him against a tree, the impact casting splinters and bits of wood everywhere. Snow used the tree to help him to his feet shifting his weight on his good leg got into a stance and waited for Dusk to get to close, Dusk sneered and pulled out his katana, a gift for his promotion to general and charged at Snow darting low toward his already injured leg, Snow went low to block the blades destructive blow and saw Dusk grin. Snows eye went wide, a feint before the wolf could react to the change in tactics the blade of the weapon pierced his chest impaling him to the tree. Dusk watched as blood socked Snows black vest casting a darker shade of black and watched as Snows vision faded in and out just like his life.

'' I'll be taking that then'' Dusk said to snow reaching for an amulet that the young wolf wore. Snow didn't want it to end not like this in one final desperate attempt to stop Dusk he grabbed his arm a weak grab but still an effective one. Dusk grabbed his katana by the hilt and dragged it out of Snows body, Snow let out a scream.

'' I'M GONNA KILL YOU'' Dusk bellowed raising his weapon to make the finishing blow.

'' Leave him alone, and fight someone who can defend themselves you coward'' a females voice called out, Dusk turned and smiled a wicked smile.

'' Well, if it isn't the master of the tiger style'' said Dusk getting into a stance. Snow looked up all mustering all the strength he could to see his saviour he only saw a flash of orange and black as the wolf blacked out and moved no more…

( Authors Note : Tell me what you guys think this is my first fanfic story and would like to know how to make my story better thanks )