Well this is my first upload to fanfiction and my first story so please review positive not negative.

this story takes place after season 2 of hoa. i don't own any of the charecters from hoa if i did there would be neddie, jabian, patrome, and mickara. well now own with the story (Nina's POV)
Im just getting out of my cab in front of Anubis house hopeing for not another mystery during this year at Anubis house we can have a normal year,but nothing at Anubis house is normal so i didnt keep my hopes up for that long any ways. like i always do when i get to Anubis house i stop in front of the door and i just breathe for a while before walking in. (Fabian's POV)
Every one has got here except for my precious Nina. i cant wait to see her after not seeing her all summer and after that mystery last year and finding out Eddie of all people is her osirion i just want to keep her all to myself and not let that Eddie even 5 inches from MY NINA! I know what you guys are think aren't you going a little over bored about the whole osirion thing well maybe but i just have the stranges felling that my Nina might be starting to develop feelings for that knuckle head of a guy.I dont know what i will do if Nina left me for him and what will Patricia do. ok thats a lie i do know what i will do most likely i will get together with joy and create jabian and Patricia most likely will get together with jerome and create patrome if that happens then mara will get together with mick again and the there would be mickara. wow if Nina and Eddie get together there would be allot of changes in Anubis house.
I was so lost in taught i didn't even notice Nina walk in the room and when i finally notice she is her i see her hugging that knuckle head Eddie.
Ok please tell me what you think about my first story and yes people i ship neddie fabian is just to wierd and plus look at eddie and nina and tell me they dont look like a cute couple. sorry for my endless talking about neddie and all but please review i need to know if i have a skill at writing or not and if you dont like then wait until the next chapter it will be full of drama and sorry for it being so short i will try and make it longer next time.