hello to anyone who is reading this. I am a Newbie in this of fanfiction so I hope that you give me some constructive comments.
I am doing this for two reasons First, to improve my English and second, to kill boredom. If you see an error, tell me. With nothing more to say, my first history begins.
I don't own Naruto or One piece.
Mariejoa
Columns of smoke rises violently into the sky and the sea of flames was covering the floor of Mariejoa was destroying everything in its path. The screams of the marines orders, the chaos of the nobles and the hope of those slaves who were running for their life wishing to feel again what they have longed for so long. Freedom
A tall and muscled Fishman with red skin and a black long hair and beard at the same color, kept running, evading the shots and jumping through the flames, his name was Fisher Tiger and is he who had caused this commotion, and had begun to free the slaves and destroy Mariejoa.
"Damn, things are getting tough around here and I have barely freed a half of the slaves" Tiger hissed. He could not do anymore, the marines were close and they sent some vice admirals to Mariejoa, if things continued as well, he had only one choice if he wanted to live. Flee. But his pride and honor not allow it, he wanted to free all of the slaves even if it meant his death and that he was willing to do.
Tiger kept running before entering another dungeon that held captive slaves, one by one was opening the cells, regardless of who is there, human or Fishman, but at his eyes they were all slaves. And that was enough reason for him.
When he opened the last cell and let the prisoners escape, he prepared to leave the dungeon and go to the next one, but someone grabbed his shoulder.
"You can not do it by yourself" said a hoarse voice and masculine.
Tiger turned to see who had spoken and he saw another slave who was of his same specie, a Fishman, but his body was limp and beaten, her hair was full of premature graying.
Tiger just grinned "I appreciate your concern, but now rather than worry about that you should concentrate on escape and reach the sea," said Tiger.
The other Fishman smiled sadly "I can not help you because I don't have all my strength, and if I tried to do it, I only be a hindrance to you," said the Fishman before pausing and continuing "But I know someone who can help you finish what you come to do here, "he said pointing to a cell that Tiger had found empty when he entered.
"That cell is empty, I checked it before," said Tiger
The other Fishman just shook his head "I have to use the time that you have given me, but I'll tell you something before I go," said the Fishman gaining the full attention of Tiger "enter in the cell and move the bed, you will see a wooden door leading to an underground dungeon, there is enclosed the person known by all the slaves as the champion, "he said before running to the door.
"My name is Brob, if you arrive alive to Fishman Island, say hello" Brob said before leaving for the door and be free.
Tiger stood looking at the door a few minutes, then he came into the cell and moves the bed, to see the door leading to the basement and opened it, only one question was on his mind.
"Who the hell is the Champion?"
Underground dungeon. Mariejoa
A long hall was all that was under those doors.
Three giant cells on each side and at the end one more cell of the same size, the bars were made of seastone and were located in horizontal and vertical patterns that left no space possible for slaves to escape.
"This must be the place to keep devil fruit users more dangerous" said Tiger as he approaches to a cell to see if he found the champion.
When he was in front of the cell, Tiger could hardly endure the revulsion that he felt. In this cell had about fifty corpses, piled one upon the other, the unwashed blood spots decorated the walls and floor. It was filthy and cruel.
Tiger went to the cell that was on the other side in front of which he had reviewed prior to see exactly the same. Also revised was next and when he went to check another one cell a voice stopped him "Do not waste your time Fishman-san. All cells look exactly the same"
Tiger heard the voice from the cell that was at end of the hall and witnessed an inhuman torture
That cell also had several corps on the floor, but the owner of the voice was what most surprised him. A human boy of 14 years had blonde hair but was dirty and full of mud and dust. His eyes were as blue as the water that was lit by the sunlight tree eve, but now had a blank stare. His chest and abdomen were bare revealing a well trained body for a boy. Also, in each of his cheeks he had three whisker marks.
This was not so bad, really bad thing was the position where he found himself. Was pinned by stakes in the hands and feet on the wall, about 25 feet above the ground, the stakes were made of seastone, like the chains that held his body fixed to the wall, holding him by the neck , abdomen and knees. It was a very cruel spectacle.
"I hear explosions and a free Fishman came here, could you explain what is happening?" Said the boy
"My name is Fisher Tiger" said Tiger
"Well, I did not ask for your name, but I still answer you. My name is Namikaze D. Naruto, nice to meet you. Now could you answer my question? "Naruto said exasperated.
"Are you the one who is called the champion?" Tiger asked again ignoring what Naruto had said
"ARE YOU DEAF? I already answered your question so now you answer the mine, what's happening?" Naruto said angrily.
"I just said my name, I never asked for yours" said Tiger indifferent
"…"
"…"
"Yes, I am the champion. You're a bastard, but I like you. Do you know? "Naruto said with a small smile.
"Naruto, I came to Mariejoa to free all the slaves that are retained by the nobles, right now everything is a mess up there and I managed half of my task" Tiger said in response to the previous question Naruto
"Did you come alone? It is impossible, you'll never achieve free them all, you should go now and be proud of what did you do, "said Naruto
"It is impossible to achieve alone, so I'm here to ask for your help. What is the origin of your nickname Champion?" Tiger asked interested.
Naruto sighed "The nobles are fucking insane, we do not have time now so I can not tell the story of my life, but the summary is as follows" Naruto paused before continuing, "I am 14 years old and 6 years of my life wasted being a slave, when I was 9 the nobles discover my strength and then they got me into the slave coliseum"
Tiger gulped
"The Coliseum is the place where those nasty balls of shit that think they own the world, they register their prisoners whether human, Fishman or wild beasts to fight and entertain their owners. in the 5 years I've been there I have been undefeated for three years and won the nickname the champion for that" Naruto said simply "ha, but I'm not entirely repentant, and thanks to that I could control my devil Fruit and improve the skills I had as a child, "said with a smile
This boy must be very strong. Say that with a smile thought Tiger
"Tiger how is currently Mariejoa?" Naruto said with a serious look now.
"There are flames all over the place, some of the freed slaves have decided to rise up and fight instead of running away, everything up there is chaos, the Marines also found there" said Tiger
"JAJAJAJAJAJAJA, you must be the craziest and brave person I've ever met, you caused all of that by yourself, let me help my friend, today I leave this cell" said with a big smile. "Oh shit, that rhymed a bit"
"So, do you want some help-?" Tiger could not continue, when he saw what was happening.
Naruto used his remaining strength to move his feet forward forcing the chain of his knees and thus allowing the stake to completely traverse his feet. Then, with less effort he did the same with his hands and grabbed the stakes were nailed to the wall. Pulling with his arms and pushing his body up broke free of the chains that imprisoned (in other words, is a movement like you do when you do the parallel bars exercise) and well, he just let go and fell to the ground tired and panting.
"Who was the bastard who discovered the uses of the seastone?" Naruto wondered really tired.
Tiger Sweat dropped. "Hey, are you okay?" Was all Tiger said
Naruto lying on the ground raised his hand with his thumb up "fast healing"
And then as if these were magic words, the hand that had risen, which had a hole in the middle began to heal, being completely fine in about 3 minutes. 5 minutes later, Naruto got up as if nothing had happened, wiped the dust off his pants which was black and was destroyed, and approached the bars, standing right in front of Tiger.
"You always could escape?" Tiger asked not believing that Naruto has been released by himself and he had never done before.
"Yes! Stakes of that shit called Seastone through my hands and feet, I would do it a lot of times just to they catch me again" Naruto said sarcastically "it hurts like hell, I would not do it again nor by 100.000.000 beli" Naruto took a serious face "Can you break these bars, Tiger?"
"The seastone is very hard" said Tiger with a smile on his face.
"You can break it. Can't you?" It was not a question, Naruto was sure Tiger could.
"I would need 10 attacks to break it" Tiger said before entering a fighting pose and gather strength in his fist, "Let's do something more faster and destroy all at once"
"Busoshoku Haki. huh? I never had anyone to teach me to use it" said Naruto away from the bars knowing what was going to happen "Teach me later?"
"Brat, I hardly control it, but if you need help with Kenbunshoku please ask" said Tiger ready to hit the bars
"Haiiiiiiiiii" said Naruto as if he were a small child.
"Busoshoku: ikarinoichigeki (Color of armament: Blow of Anger)" shouted Tiger as he crashed his fist against the bars breaking them into small pieces.
"Cry because your days of glory and power will not last for long, Dattebayo"
Remember, I want you to tell me where are my mistakes to improve. I say goodbye, I have to make my profile.
