I was watching Beyblade and this is just something that happened to float through the empty void inside my head. Like it or hate it please R and R as honest opinions are always welcome.

Disclaimer: I own nothing! Kay?


I Caress

To you not adoration nor even affection now, but,

A tear,

A timorous consciousness of betrayal,

As shameful images of lust resurface,

Your once perfect mask becomes distorted,

Your true inner reflection flashes its ugly face,

Yet still I remain impaled upon your grace,

Fixated,

Why did your heart have to be made out of stone,

My pain you wrongfully possess,

Remains insomniac,

Overflowing to ripples of hot regret,

The sculpture so carefully modelled melts,

I'm afflicted - addicted,

The once dizzy extremities to which we soared,

Now damage and delete,

I plunge, gently at first then headlong,

Down into a sea of self-pity,

Formed of salt tears,


About

I the focus of this poem kept changing. It started as Black Dranzer, then changed to Kai, then Tala and then Dranzer. So I don't really know what this piece is saying if you figure it out please let me know.

Please R and R I'd love to know what you thought.

Big luv see ya

Lamanth