C.S. Lewis Stories: My version

Summery: After the Pevensies leave in the end of Prince Caspian, Prince Caspian sets off to look for the seven lost kings while also meeting a few unexpected people. After I watched the Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian, I just hated the fact that Susan and Caspian will never be together so I wanted to re-write it and make this story. This is based on both the book and movie and also some of my own creations. Please read and review so I know if it's any good. If you don't like the Susan/Caspian romance then I suggest you don't read this.

Disclaimer: Yeah I wish I owned this series then I would turn the movie plot to this story I'm writing.

Prologue:

Author's note: Everything in the first movie is the same ok so the story starts at the end of prince caspian. Oh and since the first chapter is at the end of the movie...there are a few spoilers.

"We'll go" Peter said. Everyone was shocked. Edmund asked "We will?" Obviously he didn't think they would go back to England. "Come one, time's up" Peter said as he turned to Caspian. "After all, we're not really needed anymore" while saying this he gave his sword to Prince Caspian. Prince Caspian smiled and said "I will look after it until you return." It was now Susan's turn to speak up.

"I'm afraid that's just it. We're not coming back." As she said that, Caspian's face dropped and his expression showed shock. Lucy was also shocked and asked "We're not?" Peter spoke up and reassured her that she and Edmund will be coming back and that it would only be him and Susan never coming back. Lucy was even more shocked and asked Aslan... "But why? Did they do something wrong?" Aslan told her that Peter and Susan have learned what they could in that world and needed to live in their own. After that, the four Pevensies said their goodbyes. Susan said her goodbye to Prince Caspian and gave him a kiss before leaving. The four walked through the tree and back into their world.

Author's note: Ok so that was the prologue here's chapter one basically after all of that and I know it was rushed but I knew you people wanted to get on with the story. Ok finally the first chapter.

Chapter One:

It has been a month in Narnia time and Prince Caspian still hasn't gotten over losing Queen Susan. He had to push away his feelings for sometime because he had another problem to face. In a few days, Caspian will set sail to look for the seven lords and to travel to the end of the world. (Author's note: obviously this is the beginning of The Voyage of the Dawn Treader. I didn't read the book but I know all the important stuff...well the stuff I need for this story oh sorry back to the story). Prince, or should I say, King Caspian was in his private study lost in his thoughts when his most trusted friend, advisor, and tutor came in.

"I see you have a lot on your mind, Caspian" said the professor.

"As king, isn't that quite obvious?" Caspian responded

The professor knew he was stressed but he needed to warn him about finding a queen to rule with but he thought he would save that for later. They got on the ship and were getting ready.

It's been about a week since they left Narnia. Lucy and Edmund are staying with their aunt, uncle, and cousin while Susan and Peter stayed with Professor Kirke. The professor became more like family to them after Peter, Susan, Lucy, and Edmund's parents died. Susan and Peter were only with him for studies. It was an ordinary day in England. Lucy and Edmund's aunt and uncle left for a few hours which meant that Edmund and Lucy were stuck with their obnoxious cousin Eustace. The usual fight was happening. Eustace and Lucy were mainly fighting until he insulted her by telling her she has no parents and that she is lucky to be staying with them. With that, Lucy left crying until she found a private room with only a picture of a ship on the wall. Lucy stopped crying and slowly walked up to the painting. Then there were bright lights.

Back with Edmund and Eustace... they had a fight about how Eustace is a spoiled brat. But the two of them stopped fighting so Edmund could look for Lucy and since Edmund was older, he brought Eustace with him so that he wouldn't wonder off and do something they would both regret. Edmund found Lucy staring at the bright light that was once the painting and grabbed her hand. The once empty room was once again empty.

Back in Narnia, King Caspian was setting sail just staring at the ocean. As the boat moved, he could have sworn he saw three figures in the water. When he realized that they were people, he jumped in to save them. He managed to get all three of them out and realized that they were queen Lucy and king Edmund of old. He was just confused when he saw the third person. Lucy and Edmund explained everything. While they were all drying off, Caspian couldn't help but ask about their sister, Susan. Since Caspian didn't want to feel disappointed in any answer they give him, he didn't want to ask. While they were catching up, Eustace just listened and tried not to whine or cry. All four of them wanted to know what was happening with Susan and Peter. None of them knowing that they might actually be closer than expected.

Ok so here's chapter one. I need reviews before I can post the next chapter but if you do like the story then don't worry. Now that summer is almost here, I have more free time to post everyday. The voyage might be a little short cause like I said, I didn't read the books but don't worry I have it all planned out.

So happy reading and please please please RxR!

-tin2lo