**LOTR is not mine, i just borrowed middle earth and a a few characters ;) they'll go back in good condition i promise!**
NOTES:
-4/12/03:
Reworked my earlier chapters to give the story more continuity.
- General:
Please forgive any grammatical or spelling errors as that is not my forte'. This was orignally going to be titled "the dark elf" but that name was taken by another fanfic in which the story after i read it had many similarities to my own. therefore i changed the story and renamed it. More chapters to come! Any and All comments and suggestions appriciated
- Chapter 4:
A HUGE thanks to Gayahithwen for putting my song about Daemith into Sindarin while I'm away from my resources! later it will be translated into noldorian
Also i stated the elves taught her noldorian when in fact it was more like they refreshed her memory, but since the reader does not know her whole story yet i felt it more believeable to say she was taught. indeed that's why she picked it up so fast. her orginal language was that of sindarin however and she picked up westron from her time in captivity.
- Chapter 5:
Yar this one took me a while to sit down and get motivated to write. I wanted to do Elronds character justice and i think i did that pretty well. and of course i repeat i SUCK at dialog LOL!
I developed the story of fimriel's capture in this one too. of course you can be expected to hear more of this when they arrive in lothlorien. haha you all might be surprised when you find out who she is!
-Chapter 6:
Well this one has been pondered over for a few days. I have Fim's story all worked out in my head, but i'm having a hard time with faroniel's. to me she just seems boring, but she isn't supposed to be! maybe the coming chapters will help me out more with her character
Translations:
- Fimriel's song about Daemith:
Oh Grey one run away
For I am beat down
Come back another day
And play a new round!
You run through the wood
As I once did
And you too should
Stay here Splendid!
Oh Grey one stay by
So that we may know
Each other again
And never let go!
NOTES:
-4/12/03:
Reworked my earlier chapters to give the story more continuity.
- General:
Please forgive any grammatical or spelling errors as that is not my forte'. This was orignally going to be titled "the dark elf" but that name was taken by another fanfic in which the story after i read it had many similarities to my own. therefore i changed the story and renamed it. More chapters to come! Any and All comments and suggestions appriciated
- Chapter 4:
A HUGE thanks to Gayahithwen for putting my song about Daemith into Sindarin while I'm away from my resources! later it will be translated into noldorian
Also i stated the elves taught her noldorian when in fact it was more like they refreshed her memory, but since the reader does not know her whole story yet i felt it more believeable to say she was taught. indeed that's why she picked it up so fast. her orginal language was that of sindarin however and she picked up westron from her time in captivity.
- Chapter 5:
Yar this one took me a while to sit down and get motivated to write. I wanted to do Elronds character justice and i think i did that pretty well. and of course i repeat i SUCK at dialog LOL!
I developed the story of fimriel's capture in this one too. of course you can be expected to hear more of this when they arrive in lothlorien. haha you all might be surprised when you find out who she is!
-Chapter 6:
Well this one has been pondered over for a few days. I have Fim's story all worked out in my head, but i'm having a hard time with faroniel's. to me she just seems boring, but she isn't supposed to be! maybe the coming chapters will help me out more with her character
Translations:
- Fimriel's song about Daemith:
Oh Grey one run away
For I am beat down
Come back another day
And play a new round!
You run through the wood
As I once did
And you too should
Stay here Splendid!
Oh Grey one stay by
So that we may know
Each other again
And never let go!
