Please enjoy MY first fanfic
Chapter 1- The Escape
'Sunagakure', a village with hidden secrets and many past mistakes once contained two stories of similar people. A boy brought into this world as an experiment to contain the Shukaku the sand demon, quite a famous story among the people. The second, a less famous story, of a girl whos heart was of three spirites, a great evil, a great sadness, and her own - Oni Sumei, the girl who would one day come to be known as the Angel of the Mists..
...In a twilight lightened path lining the border of a Cloud Country village swamp was a young mother and her beloved children, one a 5 year old and the other was yet to be born. Clad in a black robe blending with the darkness of the swamp the young mother ran toward the edge of the damp forest, there awaited a carriage to take her and her children from the horrors of her past mistakes.
Running with the guile of a ninja the young mother found herself falling and stumbling being quite out of practice. In this particular swamp there were many rivers and waterfalls many in which one could trip...
-the water came too quickly for her to take a breath so she went under, her son clamped firmly to her hip. she needed air as did the small apendage attached to her hip 'i've failed' she opened her eyes in the cold, harsh water to see a flash of dark hair 'i'm sorry my son' was all she could think before a sheet of black comming over her thoughts...
...A hint of light came through her eyelids creating a reddish tint 'what? why am i alive?' she began to think. 'this isn't where i'm supposed to be!' she thought frantically after opening her eyes into tiny slits. she saw that she was on a bed with a door noxt to her head, bed-side table, and a cradle onthe oposite side of the room.
'My baby!' She thought telling her muscles to move, but their responce was sending sharp pains all through out her body and up her spine.
"I wouldn't do that if i were you" a masculline voice came from next to her head, she turned to see a man in a full-body black uniform only showing his face and hands, he looked to be about 27 years old, seven years older than herself .
"You ripped many of your muscles and you've had enough time to heal so your body will now send pain signals to your brain, lucky you" his eyes reflecting a playful smile. She gave him a look of pure venom. "Who are you?" she spat. The man sighed 'Why do I have to do this again?'
"I have to ask you a few-" "Tell me where I am first" She cut in frostily. "To the point aren't you? Okay ,okay, you're in Tai-Lee, is that enough?" he responded playfully, as to deflect her harsh tone. She made a 'humph' noise and the questioning began.
The man introduced himself as Tsaku and took out a clipboard from seemingly nowhere " My first question for you today, whats your name?"
The woman's glare intensified "Sumei". Tsaku wrote some things on the paper on the clipboard. "Next question, where are you from?" He asked looking up with light brown eyes. Sumei looked at the celing trying not to pay attention to the man standing next to her. "Well?" Tsaku was growing impatient with this stoic young blond. "I'm from a village called Ocean Valley Front in the Cloud Country" she answered not moving her green eyes from the ever-so interesting celing.
He looked at her with amazment and giggled "Why were you in a river?" Tsaku asked knowing it would be a sore subject, slightly teasing her for it. "Why do you want to know something so trivial?" she looked at him furiously. "Just trying to make some eye contact" he answered plainly.
His eye suddenly creating a white rim around his pupils, Sumei tried to look away but found it impossible, he had her trapped. "Now that I finally have your attention I can tell if you are lying or not"
Sumei took this time to examine him more thoroughly - he had a black uniform that had a green and red sicle moon on it, he had a forhead plate on with flecks of bleach white hair comming from the top, the uniform's flaps hiding the top of his head and ears.
As she noticed his most prominant features in his face were his eyes, they were gentle yet intense enough to keep her from moving and they were so- "You sure are beautiful" Tsaku's voice broke through her thoughts.
"What! Thats all you have to say?" She shot at him, if looks could kill Tsaku would be dead standing. His face tinted pink and he closed his eyes for a moment, looked ack down at the clipboard before him and cleared his throat "Well, I have one more question for you" He looked up to ook her in the eye again .
"What is your son's name?" Sumei's face went white "Kyo, is he alright!" she cluched the clip board he was holding. 'She can move, unbelievable' Tsaku wrote some other things on the paper and turned to leave. "Wait!" tears were streaming down her face "Where is my son?".He closed his eyes and sighed,
"He is in ICU"
Sorry kinda short...
The others are longer...
If there are mistakes please tell me, i don't have spellcheck or anything so i need it
Me:yay i'll have the whole flashback thing done in a couple of chapters, please R&R and Gaara will make cookies
Gaara: What?
Me:(shoves into kitchen)
Me:Well depending on the reviews I will get the next one up asap n.n
