hey! i decided to redo into the wolves den. i was reading it and i was like...no wonder i only had 7 reviews i'll tell you this right now, sorry to those who liked it but it sucked! so im redoing it and so far its going MUCH better. ive changed some things like now Charlie is the dad instead of the uncle and their moving to Forks. sorry it just flows better this way if you liked the old way.
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Chapter one- Love like Bliss
Hannah's Pov
well here i am. Hannah Swan sister of Arial Bella Sw- ok enough of this crap.
the story you knkow is a lie. you got it? a big fat lie. Everyone knows the story of the great Bella Swan, vamp extraordinare. in love with dream boat Edward Cullen. mother of Renesmee Cullen.
heres how it went, Edward a freakin idiot and sonewhere in the middle of the story im about to tell you told Stephanie Mayer to write a book on him about his 'real life' with 'Bella'.
i would tell you more about what really happened but that in itself would ruin my story completely! so i guess i should just say the Bella you know is Arial, my sister and since im not Ari i will be telling this story in my Pov. oh how its a bit dark at first it was but...i wont sugar coat it in lies. so lets begin shall we.
our love was once-
bliss
then they left me
it was once pure-strong
they left me
It hurts now, how it hurts! Its like a needle. Knife even, stabbing into my broken heart.
They left me. the words lingered continuously on my now dark mind
I began to convulse in pain
They left me.
They said they wouldn't leave
Another stab of the serrated knife
They were my friends. how i actuallly belived that.
what friends leave you
alone
Stab
I-I loved him
Stab
He lied didn't he? He never…
Stab
They never cared.
I try to wipe the dark thoughts from my mind but its like a disease, growing and attacking, uncaring.
They left me…..alone
My days are spent, lying-waiting-watching, under that old oak tree. The very same that we would meet under. The one where we first met. Where I fell in love. Oh sweet love! How I longed for its tender caress. To feel blissfully ignorant and blissfully blind. To ignore all pain and thrive in it.
I think im broken…I cant do anything anymore. I don't hardly eat, sleep, talk. My mind's a blob of sorrow and longing hidden in a cold shell of a broken brown haired, green eyed girl.
His name was Conor….Conor Moon. I shivered at the thought of him and his big brown eyes. They always seemed to look at me like a goddess like I was some kind of beauty. I hardly thought so. They would always be filled with such-such soul! And his hair, black and messy, perfect to run your fingers through.
We met under the oak tree. I was sitting with my friend, Roxanne. It was raining, we didn't care. We thrived in the rain!
Conor came up to us, him and his friend Luke. They were surprised we weren't inside in the dry stuffy houses. We only laughed claiming we were far braver. It was their turn to laugh. No GIRL was braver then a BOY! After a series of bravery 'tests' we were in their group.
We were nine…over the past seven years we got close, meeting up at the oak tree everyday. Only not showing up when sick. And even if that was the case we would go help the sick one by bringing over gallon after gallon of pop and ice-cream…medicine as we called it.
It hurts remembering but- its all I seem to do
When we were fifteen Roxanne and Luke started dating. Conor and I were a bit uncomfortable with the two of us alone a lot at first but….
I shivered pleasantly at the memory
We got closer….probably more then Roxanne and I even. A month and a half later we were dating.
Our love was bliss. Nothing else can describe it. Everything was right in the world!
Then-…..one day he left. No note-call-goodbye….he left.
It was the start of my breakdown. I was alright as long as I had Roxanne still and Luke. But…they began to drift from me.
I admit now that I was a little to…clingy with them. Then one by one they were gone as well.
Tears began to glide like rivers down my pale sunken face.
They left me…alone
Mom woke me up, screaming at me…she says it's because she loves me. And that's the only way I'll wake up. She worries about me since they left-one year two months and thirteen days ago. Yes, I keep track. If you have a problem with it I'll have a problem with you. Im ok about it I guess. I talk more now, mostly shoulder shrugs and eye rolls but I am talking more. I haven't had a breakdown for months but mom still acts like im glass.
I guess she's right, as much as I hate to admit it. I love her, just not waking up so early.
I looked over at the clock. 8:00. ugh! It's a weekend I want to sleep until noon!
My ears heard my sister, Arial, singing downstairs. It irritated me to no end. My mom decided to join the uncanny morning ballad. I groaned, tumbling out of bed like a 'sack of potatoes' as my mom would say.
Yes, I was a klutz. I think it's genetic. My mom and especially Arial are total klutzes.
I fumbled down the stairs, used to their usual creeks.
My mom was ready downstairs with Arial, and four suspicious bags.
My head turned to Arial, wanting an answer. Her response was only a confused shoulder shrug.
"Honey, Arial and You will be moving in with your father." Mom explains
I smile "O alri- wha…what? Hold on what!"
Arial doesn't say anything only opening her mouth but her nerves overcoming her and she closed it.
"Yes" my mom nods "Phil and I will be moving around a lot. I don't want that for you. So I called Charlie. He's ecstatic your coming." She beams
My face turns into a full on scowl "y-you cant just ship me off like some…some package! And don't you mean dad will be happy to see ARIAL not me. She's his little angel."
Even though Ari is one year older he treats her like the baby. Im sick of it!
Ugh oh…mom mode. She straitened her back placing her hands elegantly on her hips. "Now you listen here young lady! You WILL treat my decisions with respect. You're already packed, and leaving today."
I groaned realizing this battle was won by the great MOM.
She softened, her eyes dancing with victory. "It'll be a good thing for you. Learn some new stuff, get new friends."
Ari awkwardly tucked her brown hair neatly behind her ear, smiling encouragingly at me. I smiled back half heartedly.
Mom smiled "I'm going to miss you girls" tears welled up in her eyes
Seeing that, I bit back the retort I had ready and nodded.
I didn't want to go…what if they came back. It was a silly thought, pathetic even but I needed hope. There was no way they were going to find me in Forks.
I was embraced in a quick but tight hug then ushered out the door right next to Arial.
Her face was alight in excitement, others who saw her would of said she looked bored but I learned there was a..Arial code of sorts you needed to learn to read her emotions and I was one of three masters. Me, dad and Billy. I laughed lightly. Mom had never been able to read Ari so she went with my emotions, I could do the hard to read thing but I like my emotions more-put out there.
We both got in moms car, she gave it to me as a 'im sorry' present. She didn't need it, she would ride with Phil. I loved the car, it was black new and shiny. It wasn't Ari's style though. She liked the old busted up crap cars instead.
I of coarse, drove. Didn't want Arial driving my 'baby'. It purred nicely and drove smoother then ice.
After hours of driving we saw the sign
Forks population 3,120
Maybe it wouldn't be so bad. I loved the weather, nice and wet it reminded me of-…..anyways Ari hated it, she loved warm, dry things and big towns. But I liked the homey feel to forks, so inviting.
Our house was the same as we left it. Charlie was waiting outside, arms spread wide.
We both walked over and hugged him; I couldn't help but notice how he hugged Arial longer. It hurt me slightly but I was one who was used to pain
"Come on in you two" he beamed
Ari nodded following him immediately, I lingered longer. Turning to stare at the trees. They seemed so inviting so-
"Hannah come on!" Charlies voice yelled out gruffly
I took one last fleeting glance at the woods and went inside
thinking
how love
is like
bliss
so how was it?
if you didnt read the top i sugest you do, . see now you even got me begging! pwease :3
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