*Re-write of bios*
Disclaimer: Me no own, got it?
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Superhero- Portal
Name: Dawn C. Knapp
Age: 13
Birthday: September 14th
Appearance:
Hair- blonde, middle back, in braid
Eye color: ocean blue
Skin: pale with very few freckles
Clothes:
Civies- Purple tank-top, black and white jacket, jeans, army styled black boots
As Portal- Purple long sleeved top, utility belt, black tights, black boots, black finger-less gloves, black mask
Personality: talkative (to peoples see knows), shy, energetic
Likes: science, math, kick-boxing, and playing the flute
Dislikes: fights, cuss-words, her parents
Fears: anything to do with swimming or the ocean
Background: As a young girl, Dawn's parents wanted their little girl to follow in their footsteps as scientists. Never having much of a child hood, Dawn became very shy towards a person, that is until she met Rachel. Once the two meet, Dawn can out of her shell, sort-of.
Once her little sister was born (when she was five) her parents became less demanding for her to become a scientist.
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Superhero: Owl
Name: Rachel B. Hopewell
Age: 13
Birthday: June 10th
Appearance:
Hair- tan with blonde high-lights, middle back
Eye color- pale green
Skin- flawless
Clothes:
Civies- dark blue long sleeved shirt, black jeans, white ballet flats
As Owl- Dark blue top, black capries, black wings (will be explained), owl styled black and grey mask, utility belt
Personality: fun, smart, impulsive
Likes: food, dancing, school, and food
Dislikes: video games, older and younger sisters, being told not to do stuff
Fears: Snakes, spiders
Background: Being the middle child, Rachel always felt like she had to compete for her parent attention. Whether it being school, sports, or dance, she never felt like she was never good enough.
When she met Dawn, she saw a girl that no one liked to talk to and a future friend.
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Allen county, Ohio
July 4, 3 P.M.
"Dawn, your friend Rachel is here!" Dawn's mother called from the hall way, upstairs.
"K, be right there!" Putting down her lab gear, Dawn race up the steps to great her best friend, Rachel. At the top she was tackled to the ground by said friend.
"Hola!"
"Can't. Breathe." Cried Dawn, barely getting those two words out.
"Oops, sorry." Rachel got off, "Wanna head down to the basement?"
"M'kay, just please don't touch anything till I get down there." Dawn said heading to the kitchen. Rachel grabbed her stuff and headed down the stairs.
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Kitchen
"Hey mom? When are you and dad heading for work?" Dawn called to her mother, who was stuffing random papers into her briefcase.
"Pretty soon dear, supper's in the fridge."
"Kay." Dawn then grabbed some food and headed down the basement steps when she heard a loud 'crash' followed by an 'I didn't do it!' Sighing, Dawn ran down the steps.
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Dawn's basement
July 4, 5 P.M.
After much needed make-overs and pizza, Dawn sighed and stated "Let's get down to business."
"Oh alright, let's do this." Taking off her jacket, Rachel began to unfurl her wings. Dawn grabbed a tape-measure and measured them. Rachel remembered the day this happened like it was yesterday.
Flash-back, two years
Dawn and Rachel are playing in Dawn's parents lab, just looking for something to do when Dawn calls Rachel over to look at something. The two pick up some random bottles and start reading them out loud, when a sudden tremor starts. The strange chemicals fall on the two and start to make a fizzing noise. Rachel grabs Dawn and races to the house.
Quickly changing out of the soiled clothes, they start to clean themselves, but the deed was done. The chemicals Dawn had spilt had given her the power to teleport, and Rachel wings and night vision.
End Flash-back
"They've grown one foot in two weeks, pretty good." Dawn said, breaking Rachel out of her thoughts.
"Wonderful, when do you think they'll stop growing?"
"Pretty soon, about a month, give or take a few days. Wanna see our Halloween costumes?"Dawn said turning on the TV to cartoon network.
"Sure, why not." Rachel said sitting down. Dawn then calls for her dog Princess to grab her slippers.
"Why did you tell Princess to grab your slippers? I thought you wanted your Halloween bag."
"Because my slippers are IN my Halloween bag, duh."
"Anyways, what are we watching?"
"I don't know, some show called Young Justice." Then all of a sudden the TV starts giving off a green glow, Rachel glances over at Dawn only to see that her eyes where glowing white. The last thing she remembered before blacking out was Dawn's dog carrying the bag that held Dawn's Halloween clothes.
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So sorry that took so long, is it better or worse the original?
Please review!
