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I DO NOT OWN ANY CHARACTERS BUT LILY AND KIMBERLY


The two of them were both at Wes's house, upstairs, in the bonus room watching romantic comedies. Avery was laying on Wes's chest running her fingers up and down his arm tickling him ever so slightly while he was fiddling with her hair, both enjoying each others company. Wes had been waiting for a certain part in the movie. Eventually, it came. A sex scene came up and Wes was going to use this time to see what all Avery was willing to do and how far she would go. He looked down at her beautiful body and hugged her as tight as he could to show he was still thinking about her. Avery caught his gaze as they looked at each other. Wes leaned in for a gentle kiss, closing his eyes as he went down. The first couple kisses Avery enjoy but she felt she wanted more. She rolled over and lifted herself on top of him so her legs were wrapped around his hips. Wes's hands started to move lower and lower down her body until he got to his destination. He pulled away from her lips slightly giving them time to breath.

"I love you so much." Was all Wes could fit in before he was back, lips pressed up against hers.

Avery's hands went down his chest and back up again pulling his shirt forcing him to pull up and give her more. Avery couldn't have been any happier at this moment. She let go of his shirt and sat on his lap. She stopped kissing and looked into his eyes.

"Show me how much you love me." Wes grabbed her back and pulled her into him. No gap was between them. Every part of their bodies were touching each others. That was all Avery had to say to get him fired up.

"Can I?" Wes asked, playing with her pant loops on her shorts.

"Please." So with that Wes pushed his fingers into the back of her pants and played with her panties, pulling down her shorts as he went in deeper every time. Avery grabbed his shirt pulling him closer, showing him she wanted something more. She placed her hands on his abs and ran her fingers up and down his stomach, finally pulling up his shirt off his head.

By this point, Avery's shorts had been worked off of her and thrown onto the ground. Now another thing was being worked on by Wes's hands. Slowly making its way up, her shirt was another item on the floor too. Avery's hands went up to Wes's head and stayed there a while, playing with his hair before moving down to his pants zipper. Before Avery could even begin to unzip his pants Wes's six year old little sister, Lily called to him.

"Wes. Can I come watch a movie with you?" Her tone sounded like she had been crying earlier.

He quickly grabbed the clothes that were on the floor and grabbed a blanket which was next to them on the other couch. Avery looked into Wes's eyes again.

"To be continued." He said with a smile.

Avery smiled back, "Until then." and gave him a quick kiss before she layed down on his chest again. Wes wrapped the blanket over them, covering their exposed bodies.

"Sure Lily." Wes sounded caring and kind. That's what made Avery love him so much.

Lily came running into the room and hopped onto the second couch. "What the heck is on the TV?"

They had totally forgotten what they'd been watching. Wes quickly grabbed the remote and changed the movie to a random cartoon. Both Avery and Wes were so embarrassed their faces turned bright red. Lily giggled at them and watched Tom and Jerry on the television.

Wes leaned down to Avery and whispered in her ear, "Almost got away with it!" Avery smiled at him before they kissed each other on the lips softly.

Lily tried really hard during the show to keep from crying.

"What wrong Munchkin?" Lily looked down into her lap and played with her thumbs before looking back up at Wes. Tears filled in her eyes and Wes knew why. "Come here." Wes said concerned.

Lily quickly got off the couch and ran into her brothers open arms that had been welcoming her in for a hug. Tears fell down her face as she dug her head into his chest.

"What's wrong?" Wes was really concerned for Lily.

About a year ago, Wes and Lily's dad left to go on a mission in the military. Three months after, two men pulled up into their driveway and told them that their father had perished, but died loyalty defending his country. Since then their mom had started drinking, smoking, and had become an abusive parent.

Wes pulled away from Lily and looked at her face and noticed that there was a hand print on the side of her cheek. As Wes tried to touch it Lily cried at the pain.

"I am so sorry Munchkin…" He pulled her up onto the couch with Avery and him, giving her a hug and stroking her back assuring her that everything was going to be okay.

Avery looked down at Lily's legs and realized the hand print on her face wasn't the only thing that had happened to her.

"Wes! Her legs..." Wes looked down at her legs and saw that there was bruises that had already surfaced and purple and red spots from popped blood vessels. There was also hand prints and belt marks.

"Lily what did she do to you!" Wes was furious!

"I was at the kitchen table, coloring in my coloring book. I guess I made mommy really mad because she asked me to move my colors somewhere else. I was picking them up and she screamed at me saying that I needed to hurry up and I told her that I was trying and she took of her belt and started spanking me and hitting me."Lily was trying to fight through her tears but no matter how hard she tried she couldn't hold them back from falling out.

Wes gave Lily to Avery. Not caring that he body was half naked, she took Lily in her arms and tried to calm her down but Lily was too distraught that she couldn't.

Avery looked at Wes and mouthed, "What are you going to do?"

He stormed off down the stairs. All you could hear for the next hour was the two of them, Wes and his mother, Kimberly, fighting and arguing with each other.

"She needs a mom that she can go to for comfort not abuse!"

"I don't abuse that child! She deserves what punishment I give her and that is not your choice to tell me how I should punish my children!" Kimberly was obviously drunk. Wes had to take a few steps away from her because the smell of her breath was so strong.

Wes came up the stairs. He picked up Lily out of Avery's arms, her eyes bloodshot from crying so much.

"I can't live her anymore and let Lily suffer." Wes tried to be as calm as he could be.

"Come to my house. My parents will let you stay there until things settle."

Wes started towards the door, "Meet you in the car." Avery quickly put her clothes back on and ran outside.

XXX

The ride to Avery's house was really quiet. Nobody said anything to each other. Before long they finally pulled into the Jennings's driveway. Wes turned around and looked at Lily. A tiny smile coming across his face. All of the crying Lily had done made her exhausted so she was sleeping in the back of the car. He looked back at Avery and smiled at her.

Avery quietly spoke to Wes, "I think you have to best smile I've ever seen."

With a smirk, Wes replied, "I try."

Wes placed his hand on the side of Avery's face then slowly put his hand behind her neck and leaned in for a kiss. Avery loved it when Wes did that to her. The kisses became more intense as they went on. Slowly they would die down and then speed back up again. Avery would be running her fingers through Wes's hair while he would play with the bottom of her shirt. Avery separated from Wes and rested her forehead on his. Wes gently gave one last kiss before grabbing a dirty shirt on the floor in the back. After he put it on, he then woke up Lily. When Lily noticed where they were, she jumped out of the car and waited by the front door of the house for Avery and Wes.

Like a gentleman, Wes opened the car door for Avery so she could get out. As she stood up he placed a gentle kiss on her cheek and closed the door, grabbing her hand as they walked on the sidewalk. All that was left to do was to get Avery's parents to agree in letting Wes and Lily stay at their house.


This chapter isn't as great as other chapters I am going to do later on but I am still proud of it:P I hope you guys enjoyed it, GIVE ME FEEDBACK!