This is my first Max Ride story and I am sooo excited! I wrote a PJO one which turned out as a failure (-_-;), but please don't judge me by that!
Anyways, I am an absolute Max Ride fan, and I reallllly wish luck for the Fax couple!
Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride. That goes to Mr. Patterson. I am just a little fan of it XD
Max POV:
My head was aching like hell. My body was so stiff I couldn't move a finger. Every muscle of my body ached, and my lungs were burning. I groaned, noticing my head felt incredibly sticky. Blood, I thought.
I also noticed that my breaths were ragged and shallow, and I took effort focusing on my breath. Blinking a several times, I opened my eyes. Then my mind snapped. I sensed the familiar horrible smell of chemical. And I desperately desired this was a dream.
I was back in the School, the last place I wanted to be in.
"Crap," I murmured, loud enough for a whitecoat standing in front of me to hear, despite my hoarse voice.
"Welcome back, sweetie," the whitecoat in front of me said. I raised my fragile chin up, and began glaring at the whitecoat. Everything was still blurry, and I couldn't tell the whitecoat's face.
Then I knew. It was Jeb, the person I relied on and trusted the most for the four past years, the person who I wished were my father, the person who betrayed me over and over again. I glared at him harder, my eyes filled with anger and hatred.
"Hey, Jeb. I feel so welcomed." I said, sarcasm flooding out of my mouth. "So why did you capture me this time for? To make me into a torture like most of your son and daughters? To kill me with your lovely Ter Borcht?"
He knelt down in front of me, gave me a worried superficial look I don't believe anymore, and patted my head. I snapped, kicking him right in his torso. Too bad I didn't have much strength, thanks to him, 'cause all he did was a scowl.
"Max. You're out of practice. Well, fortunately, we're starting the training soon, so no worries." He looked at my eyes in pity.
"Well, I still have enough strength to kick you flying across this country, you jerk. And get away from me, or else I'll—"
"Max. There's no time for this. We brought you here because we need you. You exist for the need of this world. And this time, you are going to accomplish a much bigger mission. And that's why you're here."
I couldn't believe he was saying this. The last time he captured me was for me to save the world or something. Then my memory became clear. Because of that, I suffered so much, ended up losing my darling Angel, my mom and my half sister, and my… love Fang. I still had many tasks to do, and what the heck was I doing here? Oh, crap. No, crap wasn't enough. My head started aching more and more, flashing all my memories. I got angrier and angrier, and I smashed my fist against the metal floor. I couldn't even feel any pain; my mental pain was much worse.
"You know what, Jeb? I don't need you. And I don't want to save this damn world. And you can't make me. Because of you, my freaking life is so ruin! Can you just please get out of my life? Just forget that I exist and leave me alone!"
A stream of tears went down my cheeks. I immediately looked down and felt like an idiot, remembering my promise that I will never cry in front of Jeb.
I put on my brave Max-like face and looked up. I flashed him my best get-out-of-here-or-I'm-gonna-kick-you-in-the-soft-part look.
Jeb just looked at me, and sighed. He stood up, and without another word, walked out of the room.
I looked down at my fist. Blood was streaming down from it, and I grimaced. I thought, back at the School, alone, and being unable to get out to save the people I love, was just too much for me to handle at that moment.
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Sorry my description sucked. I am not much of a writer, but I hope that wasn't bad for a starter.
I am going to update the second chapter along with this! And please update—it lightens up my summer! XD
