Hello and welcome to my story. I have to tell you one thing first. I´m from Germany and like this my english language isn´t the best. I´m sorry for this, but know I hope you like it and you´ll laugh.

It looked very funny" said Saburo while the school celebrated in the hall of butterflies their win. „By a hair´s breadth you shot a judge and choked your horse and then you road almost till the next province.

This was a scene in the Samurai Book the way of the dragon and because I found they really funny I decided to make a parody of it.

Jack saw the judge raising the blower and made himself ready to start. Know he have to demonstrate Akiko that he is an real Samurai. His horse started to run and he tried to take his first arrow into his arch. Slowly he strained the bowstring and shot. He saw the arrow fly away from the target and to one of the judge. It was a very big look that he wasn´t get hurt.

Suddenly Jack was interrupted out of his mind as he saw the next target. He stand up to shot the next arrow but there he fell almost down and hold himself on his horse. He was so concentrate by not falling down that he haven´t realized that his horse wasn´t able to became breath.

Their he became the idea of standing on his horse like as on a ship and so he stand up and stand safe this time. The horse became breath again and ran faster. Jack strained his bowstring again and shot in the middle of the target. After one minute he realized that he have done it perfectly and began to smile, bit his horse didn´t stopped and ran into a wood. Full of panic Jack tries to hold the horse back, but he wasn´t able to do so. After a long while he saw the constrains of Edo. He saw a lot of Rohin who looked angry at him and tried to catch him. By luck he was finally able to turn his horse and ride back to school. As he came out of the wood again he was acclaimed by a lot of laughing children of his school. "Where did you want to ride?", asked Saburo who hardly cut not stand for laugh.