Sneak peek! Hopefully this will get people to review on my other story!


A teenager with pink hair scampered through the forest. She carried a smoothly carved bow on her cloaked back. She was wearing the clothes of an archer, but she had high boots, made for hog riding, and leather gloves. She ran through the forest, to no apparent destination. She was running back towards the village when she heard someone ask her a question.

"Who are you?" The voice asked.

Not knowing what or where the voice was, she drew her bow and started sweeping the area with her eyes.

"Now come on, im not going to hurt you!" The voice said, and she realized it was a male voice, almost the same age as herself. She didnt stop searching for the voice. "If it makes you feel better..." The voice said as she turned around, "Im right here."

There was a male teenager, with brown hair and relativley skinny arms. He had blue eyes and was wearing two bracelets on his left arm, one black, one blue. She had been trained to search enemies for possible threats. Those bracelets could come off and be used to smack her, which would really hurt considering they were made of some braided mateirial. The training had made her good at seeing possible weapons, but it made her extremely paranoid.

"Look, im not going to hurt you." He said, noticing her glare at the bracelets.

"How can i trust you?" She said in a rough, fierce tone. She usually wasnt trying to be intimidating, but she couldnt help it when she was frightened. She resumed holding her drawn bow up to him.

"Well... You cant." Super quickly, he drew two knives from his sleeves and jumped over the archers arrow. He landed behind her and grabbed her torso, and her neck. He put the knives in the right spots, and she couldnt move. "Now you're going to answer, whats your name?" He asked, in a tougher tone this time.

"A-Abbey!" Abbey said, she was afraid of this teenager, who was significantly taller than her. She only came up to the base of his neck.

"Abbey... Hmm... Whats your fathers name?" He asked.

" I'm not going to tell you that." Abbey said in a tone of defiance.

He pushed the knives deeper into her neck and her torso, and she started bleeding in both spots as pain filled her body. She saw a gash, located above her stomach.

"H-Hulk!" She said, as he pushed the knives harder. Blood was coming out of both of her cuts, seeping into her clothes.

The youth paused, and considered her answer. "Mothers name?"

"Anna!" She said, not wanting him to push the knives any deeper.

"Well... Sucks to be you!" He said. While she was thinking about his answer, he moved the knives away from her neck and her torso. Feeling relieved, she was going to ask what he meant, but the knives came back. Quicker than before. The knife that rammed into her torso, ruptured her stomach. The one aimed at her neck, pierced through. The teen pulled the knives out of her bleeding, injured body, and left. He walked a bit the opposite direction of the village, and turned. He opened his mouth, and she could barely hear him as she fell to the ground.

"Im sorry..." And then, in a flash of light, he was gone into a swirling vortex.

Abbeys life was flashing through her head. She remembered the time when she used to play with her parents, as a baby and child. She remembered training to level ten over the years. She had wasted all that time training, and now she was dying. She remained on the ground, her back sitting on a sharp rock. She adjusted her head, and saw the village. It was on fire, and the smoke could be seen from afar. She lurched out in shock, but lost all remaining energy doing so. She slowly faded into unconciousness, as her town, and her life, burned away.


Ooooooh! Awesome sneak peek, huh? Im going to wait until forty reviews to write the actual chapter two. This is chapter one, but im using it as a sneek peek. Enjoy, and please review on my other story(s)!