Hey guys. I'm making my own Magical Girl series called Mahou Shoujo Minami-chan. If you want to know about the characters, then visit my DeviantART account, LovelyLadyRebecca. Here's the first chapter of this story.
Minami Kirasaki stood there near the ruined town. Standing in front of her was a woman with long black hair and wearing black dress. Minami didn't know where to go and what to do. Her family had been killed by the woman. Suddenly, she heard a voice. It was the voice of fairy, Maria, calling her.
Maria: Minami-chan! Don't give up hope! Here, use this wand and transform! Scream "Shining Sparkle, Charge-up!"
Minami: O-Okay.
Holding her wand up in the air, she screamed:
"SHINING SPARKLE, CHARGE UP!"
She changed completely. Her blond hair and green eyes became pink, a pink dress appeared on her and she was wearing pink boots. She was now Shining Sparkle, the Magical Girl of Kindness. The woman charged a beam at her which she avoided.
Maria: Quick! Use your Wand!
Minami used her wand and screamed:
"SHINING WAND!"
The heart in the middle of her wand became brighter. She aimed her wand at the woman. A pink beam came out from the wand and hit her.
Maria: Great! Now use your attack!
Minami used her wand again and shouted out:
"SHINING BEAM"
A beam of sparkles came out of it and hit the woman, thus destroying her.
Maria: Hooray! You did it, Minami-chan! Congratulations!
Minami: Yes I did, but...(to herself) Mom, dad and Momoka. They're all gone.
Minami suddenly got up from her bed and realized it had all been a dream.
Minami: Huh? It was just a dream? Thank goodness.
Minami brushed her teeth, got dressed and went downstairs. Her mother, Hitomi, was making breakfast, her father, Saito, was reading the newspaper and her older sister Momoka was already having breakfast.
Minami: Good morning mom. Good morning morning Momoka.
Saito: Good morning, Minami.
Hitomi: Good morning, Minami.
Momoka: Good morning, little sis.
Minami had her breakfast and went to school.
Minami: I'm leaving.
Minami walked to school. Halfway through, she met her best friend, Sakura Mitsuki. She was a girl with short black hair and dark blue eyes.
Minami: Sakura-chaaaan, wait up. I'm here.
Sakura: Oh, Minami-chan. You're later than usual.
Minami: Oh, that's because, I had a horrible dream.
Sakura: Oh dear. What is it?
Minami: I dreamt that my whole family was gone and the city was destroyed and I was all alone.
Sakura: Oh boy, that sucks. But I had a wonderful dream.
Minami: Let me guess. You got selected to run in the Olympics?
Sakura: Heck yeah! And I won Japan a gold medal too.
Minami: You sure dream big, Sakura-chan.
Sakura was a headstrong and tough girl with endless determination. She was an excellent runner and popular with the kids in her grade. Minami often looked up to her. But at times, Sakura looks up to Minami. They reached their class and sat down. Their teacher, Kaede Mitsuki handed out test papers. Minami got 90 out of hundred while Sakura got only 40.
Sakura: WHAT?! Only 40? C'mon mom, have some mercy. I'm your own daughter.
Kaede: Hahaha. Now Sakura, just because you're my daughter don't expect me to be bias with you. When I'm correcting your paper, you're the same as any student to me. You should learn a thing or two from Minami.
Minami: Don't feel bad, Sakura-chan. You'll do better next time.
Meawhile, trouble was brewing in the Fairy Kingdom, now completely ruined and ruled by the evil fairy, Lydia. Her loyal servant, Eric, had gathered information.
Eric: My Queen, I've found the fairies who escaped us.
Lydia: Good. Where are they?
Eric: In a place that is full of energy in the form of negative emotions like sorrow and regret.
Lydia: Good. Find those fairies and bring them to me. And if you can, try to harness some of this energy for me.
Eric: Yes, my Queen.
Meanwhile, Maria and Sarah, the two fairies who had escaped, were flying by. Maria was a little pink fairy whose hair was tied in two pigtails and Sarah was a little blue fairy with short hair. They were both running from Eric.
Maria: Did we lose him?
Sarah: (looks back) Ummmm...yep. Its safe to say, we lost him.
Maria: Phew.
Sarah: I can't wait to find someone suitable for being a Magical Girl. Then we don't have to run all the time.
Maria: But you know the qualifications.
Sarah: Yeah yeah, they have to have that stupid dream. But WHO would have a dream like that?
Maria: Sarah, Eric's over there. And he's seen us!
Sarah: Oh no. Lets RUN!
At about this time, school had ended and the children were going home. Minami said goodbye to Sakura and went on her way. Halfway through, the two fairies bumped into her. Seeing Eric at a distance, they retreated to her bag-pack.
Eric: Hey you, little girl. Did you see any fairies come by?
Minami: Fairies? Um, no.
Eric: Hmmmm...well, thanks anyway.
He kept going. When he was out of sight, Maria and Sarah came out of Minami's bag-pack.
Maria: Oh, thank you so much.
Sarah: You're not really supposed to see us but we really owe you one, ummm...what's your name?
Minami: I'm Kirasaki Minami. But you can call me Minami. Was that guy after you two?
Maria: Yeah. I'm Maria and this is my friend Sarah.
Sarah: We're from the Fairy Kingdom. But now its ruined! Its completely under the control of the evil Lydia. We escaped when she took over.
Maria: Now we have to find someone suitable to become a Magical Girl.
Minami: A Magical Girl? Oh, you mean like the ones in Precure?
Maria: Well, kind of.
Minami: So, have you found anyone yet?
Sarah: We wish we could say yes, but...
Maria: We've had no luck so far.
Minami: Oh, that's too bad. But y'know, I think I've seen you somewhere before, Maria?
Maria: You have?
Minami: Yeah. But I can't put my finger on it. Hmmm...oh yeah. I remember! You're that fairy from my dream!
Maria: Your dream?
Minami: Yeah. I had a dream last night and you were in it. You're that same fairy.
Maria: Sarah, do you know what this means?
Sarah: Yeah.
Maria and Sarah: We've found a suitable Magical Girl!
Minami: You mean me?
Meanwhile, Eric was standing in the train station. There were high school students waiting for the train. Many of them were stressed out, either by the amount of homework they've gotten or their test results.
Eric: I can feel so much energy here in the form of something humans call 'stress'. So what if I couldn't find those fairies? I can harness this energy for Queen Lydia.
Eric uses his wand to harness their energy. The students fell to the ground. They felt weak.
Eric: This should make up for me not finding the fairies.
Meanwhile...
Maria and Sarah: Oh please, Minami?
Minami: Its a nice offer but I...I can't. I don't think I can do it.
Maria: Of course you can, Minami. Just believe in yourself.
Minami: I...I really want to help. But I'm unsure. I'm afraid I won't be able to fight. I'm so sorry.
Sarah: We understand. We'll look for someone else.
Maria: Sarah, I sense something.
Sarah: What is it?
Maria: Something bad.
Sarah: Its got to be Eric.
The fairies fly off. Minami went running after them.
Minami: Hey you two. Wait up!
They ran until they reached the train station.
Minami: What's going on?
Sarah: The negative energy is being harnessed from those people.
Eric: (looking back slowly) There you two are.
Maria: Oh no!
Eric: You. You're that girl from before. Oh, I see what's going on. You're just hiding those fairies.
Minami: N-no. I...
Eric: Didn't your parents teach you to always tell the truth? And there you hid the fairies from me. Both you and the fairies will be punished for this.
He used the negative energy to summon a corrupted fairy.
Eric: Teach those fairies and that girl a lesson.
Corrupted fairy: As you wish.
The corrupted fairy flashed lightning bolts at all three of them. Minami and the fairies ran about frantically. At one point, Minami almost got hit by a lightning bolt.
Minami: Maria, why are you crying?
Maria: That's a corrupted fairy. He was someone we once knew! But now he's...he's like...that!
Minami: Are all the fairies back in the Fairy Kingdom like this?
Sarah: Yeah. Lydia has corrupted them all! LOOK OUT!
Another lightning bolt almost hits them but they got out just in time.
Minami: That's...that's horrible. If being a Magical Girl can help those poor fairies...then I WILL do it. I'll become a Magical Girl!
As she said this, her heart glowed a bright pink.
Maria: YES! WE'VE FINALLY FOUND OUR MAGICAL GIRL!
Maria threw a pink wand at Minami.
Maria: Hold that up and scream "Shining Sparkle Charge Up!"
Minami did just that. Her hair turned and eyes turned pink. Her hair became long and was tied in a ponytail. She had a pink outfit and pink boots.
Eric: No! That can't be!
Shining Sparkle: I am the Magical Girl of Kindness! Shining Sparkle!
Sarah: YES! YES! AFTER A LONG SEARCH WE FINALLY FOUND HER!
Shining Sparkle: (to herself) Its just like in my dream.
Eric: N-No no! This isn't happening!
The corrupted fairy shot more lightning bolts towards Shining Sparkle, which she avoided gracefully. Now, he shot a really big lightning bolt towards her. For a second, it looked like Shining Sparkle had been hit. But she recovered quickly.
Shining Sparkle: (to herself) Maybe I have some of my powers from my dream. I'll try out the Shining Beam.
Shining Sparkle took out her wand and pointed it towards the fairy.
Shining Sparkle: SHINING BEAM!
Sure enough, a beam of sparkles came out and hit the corrupted fairy. It was sent back to the Fairy Kingdom.
Eric: No! NO! This is only the beginning, Shining Sparkle! I'll be back! I promise.
He leaves.
Maria: YEAH! YOU DID IT!
Shining Sparkle: I...I did? Hahaha, I did.
Later, Minami reaches home.
Minami: I'm home.
Hitomi: Why Minami, you're very late today. I was so worried. What happened?
Minami: Oh, I just got caught up in some work at school.
Minami went to her room. Maria and Sarah were there.
Maria: I knew you could do it, Minami-chan.
Minami: Heh heh. Y-Yeah. Maybe being a Magical Girl isn't so bad after all. At least I can get to help people.