i've always been one to watch movies and create my own ideas with some plots. so, again i came up with this. i recently watched Whip it and its been playing nonstop and i love it even more characters are awesome and the whole message of it was just perfect. so i wanted to write my own little spin to it, its not all derby but my character will be playing the bad ass sport. so, here it is and i hope you guys like it. its a rough cut so bare with me. i hope you all enjoy and review me your thoughts.

"How many times do I have to tell you to fuck off! "

"Oh, he's getting it alright. " I watched Holly look out the door and start laughing.

"They're on the floor having sex. "

"You got to be fuckin kidding me! " Rosa threw her uniform in the locker.

"What do you expect, they always do that. " I threw off my bloody tights and examined the bruise on my leg.

"Isn't as bad as the one you got a month ago."

"Does it hurt? " Smashley walked over to me and touched it. Red goo on her fingers.

"Damn, it's even bleeding. " I grabbed a wash cloth and wiped it clean. Ignoring the pain that came with it. You usually get use to the bruises after a couple of months in Roller Derby.

"What you doing tonight, Lola? " I looked over at Rosa while she changed into her clothes

"I have homework and school tomorrow. " The girls groaned

"That's what we get for getting a baby on the team. "

"Bliss had the same problem, remember. The girl got accepted into a big college because of it. Let her be. "

I watched the girls nod their head. Bliss Lavender was a hero for me. I remember coming to watch her play a couple of years ago. She's the reason why im playing. After she graduated school she went south and left to Texas for school. Joined another Derby Team over there. That's where I stepped in, Bliss had speed but I had punch. There's something amazing about elbowing a girl on the face and feeling the blood graze your skin.

"You guys know you're my second family, I love you guys. "The girls awed while we formed a group hug.

"Good night, Lola. See you Friday. " I grabbed my bag and walked out the room. Looking off to the side Razor had his girlfriend pinned up against the wall dry humping her.

"Use protection! " The warehouse was still the same since that first night here. The first game Bliss had been in, and boy was she amazing. She was fast and small. Then I remember talking to her about it, she was breaking out on her own. Her parents wouldn't approve of what she was doing so she kept it a secret. Her friend Pash was hilarious, just super blunt and goofy. We shared a couple of drinks during the game. Even though I was 3 years younger. I was 14 then, they were 17. Now I was 16 going on 17. My parents were glad I found something I loved, and something to help get my aggression off everything else. Sure my mom and dad freaked out when I came home with a black eye and bruised body but once they noticed it made me happy. They realized it was okay. Bliss said her parents came to the same realization.

My white jeep drove over the dirt roads and into the street. It had gotten dark by now, the only thing that shined were my car lights and the stars. It was a pretty soothing car ride. Maybe just an hour away from Forks. Bon Iver was playing though; I could listen to this man all day. It was funny how on my way to the warehouse I was listening to rock, loud obnoxious classic rock and on my way home it was soothing music.

It wasn't long before imade it home. My two story house was bigger then any other house on our street. It did hold 6 kids and 2 parents. Looking up at the attic I could see him already waiting for me. His red eyes looking down on me. The faint smile on his face. It no longer gave me the chills, all that lovely dovey nervousness went away after the 5 month. We broke up after our 9 months but somehow he always came back, I always went back. My house was always loud and yelling, the feeling was warmth though. Only loved rushed through these walls. I looked up at the sign that said just that, made me smile.

Turning the cold door knob I could hear the to littlest kids and dogs start running their way over to me. 6 year old William and 10 year old Daniel hugged me deeply.

"Did you win? '

"Well duhh, it is your birthday. " Willy was missing one of his bottom teeth.

"Im proud of you! "Dad walked over and kissed my forehead. By the time I got out of his hug mom lifted up my shirt and inspected my body for bruises.

"It was a pretty chill game, I wasn't thrown across anything or on someone. "Mom nodded her head hesitantly. Sometime it's like she kne wi was injured.

"We saved you some dinner, it's in the microwave. "

"I'm heading to my room, I've got to reread an essay before I shower and head to bed. " And my creepy boyfriend is upstairs. I wanted to say that. My parents thought I was done with Austin, they always said he was different and didn't fit in with my family. But they put up with him, except Noah. He hated Austin with a passion. Which sucked so badly? Noah was my best friend and my twin.

"Alright, but remember to eat! "Mom called out as I made my way upstairs. Making my way up I saw the 5 doors. The one straight ahead was moms; the other four belonged to my brothers. A little more off to the side were the two upstairs bathrooms. But mine was different. I pulled on the dangling beads from the ceiling and down popped out a staircase. I chose to sleep in the attic. It was quieter up here, sure it was colder then usual but I had blankets. Walking up I could already hear my record player began to play. I pulled up the staircase and locked it knowing my brothers would want to come up here; they always did after a game.

"I didn't know Willy's birthday was today? "He held up the present with his hand.

"I told you last week. If you didn't remember then that's your problem. "I took the present away and threw it on my old couch. The one I found laying on the curb of a road and thought it would look good with my other mismatched furniture.

"You still upset? "

"Well who wouldn't, you just blew me off. " I leaned over against the cushions under my window to close it.

"I had things to do. You know that. "

"I do, but I don't like it. " Other people's boyfriends, mine was extremely fast, extremely pale and dead.

"You never like anything I do. " His cold breath hit my skin but bounced off.

"Maybe I don't like you. " I turned back and walked passed him. I had two windows opposite each other. One looking out in the front and the other overlooking the back. My computer was by the front one. The black cover shined with blue because of the blue flowers that glowed.

"Well that can't be true, we always tend to come back to one and another. " He licked my neck

"You always tend to come by, especially after you get rejected by that slut. "

"Now now, someone is jealous. " He clicked his tongue and threw himself on my bed gently

"I was, until we broke up. Maybe next time you should keep it in your pants. "

I could see him rolling his eye behind my back .

"I am a man, I have needs… "

"You're dead, im pretty sure blood doesn't rush to your penis easily. "

"You wouldn't know, clearly. … " That struck a nerve.

"Im staying a virgin until im ready. For you to tease me about it is pathetic. What are you, 5? "

"Technically im 57, but my looks tell you im 19 " He smirked. I couldn't help it either. The guy was stuck in a teenage body. One that I found very attractive.

"What are you doing here anyway? "Opening up the computer document I begin to type away the closing statement when he came to sit on the desk.

"I'm leaving for a couple of weeks. I have to leave for awhile. "Even though I was done with Austin, I still cared for him. I looked up at him, his voice was one that I knew well even . Though I had only heard it a few times. He was worried and scared. I knew this shit head did something.

"Why, what did you do? " He looked out the window then at me.

"I told you about the Cullen's remember? " I nodded my head

"They somehow want me to join their clan, im not for it, obviously. " I shook my head at him. Another reason why he intrigued me, he was as much of a loan wolf like me. Both of us were fine with being on our own, sometimes we preferred it.

"I crossed a line I shouldn't have crossed? " I stood up and looked at him

"Is that why your eyes are red? " I felt my fist clench and crack.

"I haven't eaten in weeks, small little animals is all I could find. They really don't help. But that's not the point; the line im talking about is an actual line. I didn't know there was one but Jasper Cullen informed me. Anyway, I passed it and from what I here from other wandering vampires, they're looking for me. "

"Who's looking for you? "He sat me back down on the bed and unzipped my pants.

"I don't know, but the way he said it scared me. I know its something dangerous, so I have to leave for awhile. Maybe that way when I come back you'll miss me soo much you'll take me back, and I'll have something good to eat already. "My pants fell down to my ankles when he touched the bruise under my butt.

"You don't know how it feels to see you hurt. " His cold hands brushed over the bruise. His palm flatting over it. Causing the burring sensation to numb.

"Funny, you hurt me all the time. "His red eyes met mine one last time.

"Isn't it a little too cold to be wearing tights? " Noah eyed the leopard tights. The most amused expression on his face. Matthew and Franky riding in the front of the car.

"Yeah but I have a crazy ass bruise on my ass. My jeans will be too tight."

"I thought mom asked if you had any bruises? " Mathew looked at me throw the rearview window. Being the older brother at home he usually was the more overprotective on.

"Yeah she did, but this one doesn't count. "

"You know you shouldn't hide them all. "

"Look, I see the look mom gets when I show her a bruise. And roller derby makes me happy. Every time she sees one its like she rethinks about letting me play. "

"Do you really think mom would get rid of something that makes you happy? She didn't get rid of Austin? "Franky had removed his earphones and joined the conversation. He was a little more then a year younger then us. Noah stiffened up and looked my way.

"She and the rest of us put up with him even though we knew he was the reason why you got sick. But he could make you happy in a snap of the fingers. "

"Can we not talk about him, it really bothers me. " I grabbed my bag and jumped out of the car. Forks high is an ass wipe of school. Well, in my opinion.

"How long do we have until school starts? "

"30 minutes, you heading to Carver's? "

"Yeah, you guys coming? "Noah and Matthew shook their heads while Franky walked my way. The kid was already passing my height, but I was just 5 foot 1.

We walked down the street until we mad eat to the small café.

"You know, i thinks it's cool that you do what you love. It makes you happy and I like seeing you happy. "I smiled at my little brother. He was always the more open and sensitive of them all.

"Im glad you understand. "

"We all do, but it does freak us out. I mean you come home with jumbo size bruises. We don't want you hurt. "We bumped hips back and forth until we began to laugh. I wrapped my arm around his towering shoulder and brought him down to my level.

'What makes you happy? "

"Music, I think I want to start a band. " I let go of him and looked into his eyes. The blue shined bright in them, a passion late.

"Well, you got my approval. Even though you shouldn't need it. "We walked into the warm café. Sounds of grownup discussing about their kids. My kid this, my kid that, he's an idiot, she got knocked up., it was ridiculous.

"Well well, isn't it Lola Monster! " Sherri waved me over.

"Order two hot chocolates, I'll be back. " I handed Franky my wallet while I walked over to Sherri.

"Well, how was it? " Sherri was one of the first supporters of my roller derby carrier. She noticed me sitting here at the café for weeks, maybe months. She knew everything about me just by sitting down and talking to me. She became somewhat like an extra older sister. One that wasn't too far away. She had even gone to most of my games.

"We won, Yay! " I cheered lousily while she chuckled into our hug.

"I know you may have bruises on your body but I don't care! This is the season! "She shook my shoulders and faced me.

"Bruises, what the heck are you playing? " I looked down at Chief Swan. His mustache bringing back memories from when Austin and I would joke around. It was one of Austin's favorite jokes and impressions.

"Roller Derby. "The man next to chief swan eye's widening.

But before he could open his mouth Chief Swan spoke.

"You still with that boy? " Chief Swan had a way of pissing me off. Always was watching me like a hawk. Didn't help that my boyfriend bugged the shit out of him and tended to get himself into trouble. Especially with me by his side. Chief swan called us Bonnie and Clyde ever since we snuck into the school and ripped down the banners for prom. It was Austin's idea after I told him my hatred for school functions and how much bullshit I thought it was. He thought we should cancel it, so we went around ripping posters and he somehow was able to shut the doors completely closed. Thanks to his vampire abilities, that is.

"No, we broke up months ago. You won't be arresting me anytime soon. " Chief Swan dropped his spoon onto his plate and looked up at me.

I looked over at the man next to him. His long black hair was parted down the middle. An old ball cap rested on the empty chair. The man wasn't old but he wasn't young. His eyes held year's of knowledge.

"Well, if you excuse me, I should be going to school. Unless you are waiting to interrogate me again, chief swan. "Chief Swan just glared at me. He knew I had a very good vocabulary and knew how to get under your skin. Something that annoyed him when he tried to arrest Austin and I but it didn't work, Austin made sure of it. The man next to him let out a chuckle but held it It when Chief looked his way.

"Not this time, Lola. "

Franky came over and handed me the drink.

"Well, it was nice speaking to you all. " Franky wrapped his arm around me while we headed to school.

Have you ever had that moment when you're doing something and it's exciting that's thrilling, even though you've done it thousands of times? My skates carried me down the street and into Lapush.

"There's a hill around the corner! "

The girls looked my way and nodded. Passing out flyers was a usual thing.

"Whose bringing the car? " Tammy asked

"Maggie is, after she drops off her little man. " Going down the hill was my favorite. In an instant we all lined up and connected arms. Our knees bent forward while we flew down the hill with speed. Rain slowly pattered against our skin.

"This is amazing! " Smashley screamed out while the air went past us.

"Let go and speed off in …

"5"

"4 "

"3"

"2"

"1"

"Last one there pays for drinks! "

The flat ground made a few of us stumble a bit, but knowing that we might lose money for drinks brought our head back into the game. I was right behind Rosa when I saw a car approaching behind.

"CAR! Behind us! "Rosa went left while the rest of the girls went right. She clearly didn't know the area, for the rest of us; it meant we finally had the lead. The red truck passed by in a hurry and down the same street we went by.

"Cheaters! " Rosa screamed

The rest of us skated until we made it to the diner.

"I win! " I cheered

"Rosa , you're paying for drinks! " Smashley opened the door and skated inside.

"Well, isn't it the Hurl Scouts. " Pops owned the diner here, and he helped sponsor Derby events. His daughter does Derby in Texas but she started off in Port Angeles like the rest of us.

"Hey, pops. Brought some flyers. Would really like it if you let them out for display! "Holly sang

"You girls know I will do anything for you. "He grabbed the flyers and set them up right for everyone to see.

"Alright, let's get our grub on! " Rosa skated off to the biggest table and threw herself on it. Smashley tried to do the same but flew right off of the table. The rest of us watched with laughter. There was another group of people here. They had the next biggest table. I understood why. They all were terribly big, not a horrible way but in height and muscle. The only small things around were their females.

"You alright, Lola? " Maggie pushed me towards the table and threw me down the seat.

"Alright, what you girls want, it's on the house. "

Another screams and hollers filled the air.

"Give me the biggest burger you got, a chocolate shake on the side and im done. " I stood up from the table ignoring the boos from my crowd. Flipping them off while I skated to the bathroom. I felt the table of Natives watch me closely, like was some sort of science experiment. A sudden cell phone flew to the ground in front of me, the chairs squeaked and I felt like I was going to trip over it. Luckily my breaks were working fine. I stopped just in time to pick it up.

The girl looked terrified for a moment. I held out her phone and when she reached for it she was shaking.

"I don't bite, they do , but im pretty harmless. " Using my head to point to my teammates and sending her a soft smile which made her relax, just a bit.

"Thanks, I like your hair, and clothes. "She looked over my purple mid thigh skirt, orange tights, black skates and my van Halen t-shirt.

"Thanks, good to see fashion isn't all pink. " She blushed slightly

"Lola. " She looked over the tattoo on my wrist before shaking my hand

"Kim. "

"Nice to meet ya, well if you excuse me I got something to take care of. " I skated past her and into the bathroom.

J.P.O.V

"Jared, come on. She's smaller then me. Im sure if she can do it. I can! "Kim whined

"No, you'll get hurt."

"I don't understand you sometimes. "In an instant Kim got off her seat and walked outside. Jared right behind her.

I looked towards the restrooms. She smelled like coconuts. Her hair was wavy and a dark reddish brown almost black. It's messy form looking beautiful as it floated down pass her shoulders. The different colored strands in her hair stood out. The blue, pinks, and purples varying in colors. And Kim was bigger then her, in the height ration. This girl, Lola, was shorter; she had meat on her bones to accommodate the curves she had. But she was still equally thin. My heart was beating for her to exit out. Then when it swung open she skated out. For one second her eyes met mine. My heart skipped a beat. Her eyes were beautiful, her left a bright icy blue and then her right a rare steel gray with hints of green in them. It was like I was staring into her soul. Her skin was a light peach; her cheeks had a natural blush. A cute button nose that looked a bit red, her lips full and a distinctive pink. I could see us together, her and I. the feeling of her body and mine close together, and I could see us laughing, smiling. My heart tightened up suddenly, my stomach began bubbling up like crazy. It felt like pain at first, seeing everyone in my life pass by. Dad, mom, Rebecca, my pack, Bella they all disappeared. Every emotions I felt for them didn't exist. Then the pain left and all I saw was this girl. This girl I barely met or even talked to. She sat here masking herself my every thought and hope.

"Alright, I thought I heard screaming matches with Razor and his girl but the ones outside are by far the best! "A tall lanky red head walked in .her eyes already covered in makeup.

The pack let out a grunt knowing exactly what she meant. Jared was a little to over protective of Kim.

"Any of you guys gotten some bad breaks? " Pops seemed to like these girls.

"No, but Lola here has gotten some major bruises. Show him the recent one! "The loud one with orange hair and colored strand turned Lola around and spanked her butt. Something I wish I could do. I shook away the thoughts when I saw her pull down her tights. The pack watched intently as she began to reveal a grapefruit size dark purple and red bruise a litter lower then her butt. The look of it made me sick. I felt my hands start sweating

"That one has to be a bleeder. " Pops examined the bruise and grinned. That's when I noticed they all were. She pulled up her tights and nodded

"Just a few drops of blood but nothing major. " To see her smile and think her bruises war okay pissed me off. She can't do that to herself.

"Jacob, out now! " Sam ordered pulling me up and out the door. I looked back and met my Angel's eyes. She was confused at first but then she turned away and smiled down at the girls.

L.P.O.V

"Alright, now move that to the side! " I watched Noah and Matthew adjust the happy birthday flyer while dad started up the grill.

"You okay, kid? "

"Yeah, just tired. " I placed the streamers around the wooden polls making sure not to rip it.

"You did good last night. "It made me happy to see my father proud of me. He was actually okay with me playing Derby, he said it was better then football.

"Thanks, im glad you guys went. It felt good. "The red and blue streamers matched the other party supplies. I was glad I got streamer duty. I originally had balloon duty but last night I fell on my fingers, it was an awkward fall but I couldn't move them. They were just swollen from the bending and crunch. Franky took that job. Luckily mom bought a helium take so it wasn't just limp balloons filled with Franky breath.

"How your fingers holding up? "

"Good, the wrap helps. I give it a couple days until I can move them equally. "

"You were always a fast healer. Now come on, help me with the chairs. " Mom always threw parties for us, every birthday we had been filled with candy bags, cake and presents. Willy was excited about it; he couldn't wait until this day. He even said he'd shower everyday if we sped up the week. Right now I knew he was upstairs taking a bath. The rest of us setting up. Dad had invited his friends, mom did the same. We kids were allowed to but I usually opted out. Our backyard was pretty big, we had a swing set for the kids, a sand box and a trampoline. Dad always was the one to jump on it first; he was as big of a kid as we were.

The tables were aligned the way mom wanted them, and then covered by either red or blue table cloth.

"Alright, can you go pick up his cake. I would go but… "

"You don't have to explain, I'll be back in 10. " I kissed moms cheek and then dads before grabbing my keys and pulling Franky away from the tank.

"Come with me. "

I hopped into my jeep and drove off to the story.

"Can you drive correctly with your hand all bandaged up? "

"Yeah, it hurt but whatever. "

He stayed quiet for awhile.

"Are you and Austin back together? " My foot hit the reach suddenly. Luckily it was just to park.

"What … "

"No, I know you still talk to him. He called the other day when you were n the shower. You should really change his caller Id on your phone. "

I let out a breath and shook my head.

"Do you remember Michael? "

"Well obviously, he was cool. "

"Remember how hard it was for me to forget him, it still is. "

"But he was your first love, not some jerk that cheated on you. "

"Austin and I had our run, Michael was different. He was religious and he was safe. But I loved him so much. But he wanted me to be something I wasn't. It was hard to breakup with him, especially before he went off to his mission but I don't want him to be with someone that wasn't fully happy. Austin was different, he was just like me, and he craved fear and adrenaline. And I needed that, especially after Michael. He mended my heart because he showed me a different Side of me I wanted to see. A side of me no one ever saw. I did some crazy things but I don't regret any one of them. They made me who I am today. Austin is hard to forget because he gave me light to see who the real me was. Who I am and he didn't judge me for that. I fell in love with him. And that did go away after awhile but … it's hard to get rid of someone you share so much with. It's like two lost souls that meet someone that understands, you don't want to let it go, no matter how poisonous it could be. "

Franky looked like he was taking it all in.

"Are you with him, or not? "

"No, and I wont be but I do care for him. " Franky only nodded

"I just don't want to see you sick again, it was hard enough the first time. " We hopped off the car and walker inside the bakery. It didn't take long before we paid and went home. Franky singing along to my Led Zeppelin Cd.

The white box filled my arms, the cake was massive. I wasn't even sure it would fit through the door. Carrying it inside me heard dad chuckling in his office.

"Here take the cake to the kitchen, be careful. " Handing the cake to Franky I walked inside dad's office. The same man I saw with Chief Swan at the diner, and the same man form La Push was sitting here joking with dad.

"Lola, this is Billy Black. An Elder from La Push. "The man smiled at me. One of the brightest ones I had ever received. It looked like the man was receiving a noble peace prize.

"We sort of met, sorry for not properly introducing me. "

"I don't blame you, im just a native in a wheelchair. Nothing special. "He joked

"You're an Elder, I think that's special as it is. "

"You get the cake? " dad asked

"Yeah, it's massive. Mom went a little psycho with it. "

"Your mother is a psycho, that's why I married her. "

"Or she threaten to kill you or chop off you genital if you didn't say I do. " Billy wasn't sure what to do but the way his eyes glistened over I knew he was waiting for my dad reaction.

"A little bit of both. "Dad chuckled.

"Billy, it's alight for Lola to joke around like that. She's always been a bit … blunt and vulgar. ITs her humor style. "

"I didn't want to laugh if you didn't approve. " He confessed still looking me over.

"I approve it, she has my sense my humor! " Dad explained

"I should get going, mom's probably upset im not helping. "

I walked out and grabbed a cookie from the tray. I looked outside and saw the man from the diner. The very tall one with the dark brown eyes. He had walked out looking furious, after that I ate my burger thinking of him. His eyes were just … captivating. The guy was trying to figure out how to use the helium tank. I dropped the cookie and made my way over to him. I grabbed a black balloon and push his hands away from the gray tip.

"I'll blow them, and you'll tie them up? " He quirked a brow and blushed through his russet skin. The balloon began to inflate and I laughed.

"I didn't mean it that way, unless … "I smirked up at him and handed him the balloon.

"As much as I would like that, I don't share. " His fingers brushed against my hand and the shock coarse through my body.

"You arn'tsharing, you're tying. "

"You'd be surprised. " He waited for me to finish inflating the other one.

"My names Lola, and you are? "

"Jacob Black. "

"Oh, your Billy's kid. Awesome. "

"Yeah, you're Richard's kid? "

"Nah, I just like to show up in random houses and blow up balloons with monster like tan males. "

His chuckle made me laugh. Then I noticed I wasn't feeling tense or worried. I felt calm, like when you lay in a bed and find the most amazing spot ever. That warm feeling that fuzziest up you whole body.

"That's a weird hobby, do I compare to the rest of monster tan males? "

"Nah, you're kind of ugly. " He stopped what he was doing and looked at me. After noticing my smirk he eased up.

"Well, you're uglier. " He didn't look at me when he said it.

"Did you just call me uglier? "

"Yupp. "He looked over at me as he popped the P.

"Don't you think that im the one blowing and you're tying I can at least get some blow action, you though… You have to tie it because it will just float away. "Jacob looked down at me. His grin was just like his fathers, a more beautiful smile.

"These balloons will never leave me the way I tie these up, you though, will only last a while before you can't blow anymore. Then they will leave and deflate"

And there he was the first guy to shut me up. I began to laugh softly before talking.

"You know, I don't meet a lot of people who could shut me up like you just did. " Jacob and I had over 3 dozen balloons done by then.

"Where does that get me? " I passed the last balloon to him and sat up on the table while he tied up the balloon.

"Where do you want to be? "He quirked a brow before dropping the balloon in the large basket

"Well… "He was walking towards me but mom jumped in.

"Oh goodie, you guys finished faster then I thought. " She took the basket and pushed it inside.

"Noah, Matthew! " I could hear my brothers groaning.

"As you were saying? "

"I rather not say, it was pretty crude. " his blush hadn't gone away since I first saw it.

"Like your face? "His grin could make my heart come back to life. So take notes people, if I die bring this hunk of a man to me and make him laugh.

"A little less like mine but exactly like yours. "

J.P.O.V

The coconuts and lilac radiated off her skin. She wore a red knit sweatshirt that covered the black and white pokadot shirt I could see peeking out from the bottom. Her black, see through tights helped covered up her black short wearing legs and her black shiny business like shoes made her look adorable. Plus the bowler hat she had on made her looks cute. Her lips painted a bright red to match the sweater, her eyes as dark and beautiful as I first saw her. Every time she looked down her lashes touched her cheeks.

She was beautiful. And she was funny. The first crude joke she told got to me, gave me images but she took it all into stride. She made jokes about it and she loved to tease. I could see in the way her body movements.

"There you go again, you genius basterd. " She flicked her nails a bit before turning to me.

"How old are you? "

"18, you? "

"Im turning 17, next month. "

"Nice, a minor."

"it's considered rape you know. "She suggested teasing me

"Not if you're the one practically begging for it. " Her heart beat was speeding up. It was loud and beautiful.

"Lets get this correct, you're the one here thinking of me blowing, you want this. " She motioned down her body. And I couldn't help but look at it. She was especially gifted in the chest and butt area. Lucky dog, me.

"No, no. you want this. You want this entire 6'7 foot ass. "

Her eyes widen up a bit more and she began to laugh hysterically. Her nose scrunched up while she giggled

"Are you really that tall? "

"Yupp. "

"Impressive. "She looked away from me and watched over the tables. The wind blew her hair back. The colored strands catching my attention.

"I like it. " I pulled softly at a blue one and held it in my hand. Her hair was soft.

"Me too, I had only one strand but over time they seem to multiply. "She leaned up closer to me. Our faces only inches apart. She way spooking down at my lips then my eyes. I saw her. Those blue and gray eyes melt into mine, the softness and intensity she carried with her. She pulled away suddenly and shook her head.

"Im not that type of girl. "

i always explain my characters after the first chapter, i wanted to rewrite an old character of mine in a more mature way, and she's a bit more rough and tough like some the of the characters on Whip it. it's the whole strong , independent vibe that im currently digging for story types. So, like or no? Review, sexy's.