hi people, this is my first story,

i hope you like it.

let the petals fall

I want to thank him for caring


"I must run, far away, i dont care about the rain, i dont care if i die, i need to run, away from them!" A pink short haired, milk coloured girl with the mostintence teal eyes you have ever seen, was runing though a woodland, crying and covered in blood.


In the hidden village of konoha, a dark messy haired boy, with oynx eyes (yes you gessed it) was walking with his foxlike, blonde friend. "Ramen, its my favourite meal, Ramen, uh... da da da da daa, Ramen, OH YES RAMEN, LETS GO HAVE SOME TODAY!" Naruto was singing his own theme song about Ramen, and was annoying Sasuke so much! "Naruto you baka, shut up! You've been singing that song for weeks! And lets face it,... your not a good singer."Sasuke said looking rather pissed of, but in the corner of his mouth, a tiny smug smile had creped up from that last comment."Shut up you teme, hey speaking of ramen...". "No thanks baka, im not hungry". Sasuke could see that coming. "im just going to have a walk, ok?"


'I'm away from that loser, finely!' Sasuke was walking in the woods, he needed to get away from every thing; Ramen, Fan girls, Ramen, Missons, Ramen. Sasuke was very handsome, the best looking in the village, all the girls where after him. He was strong. He had pale skin and messy black hair with tints of blue. He got it from his mother Mikoto, she was very beautiful. Sasukes clan, the Uchiha clan, had been killed by sasukes brother Itachi, which Sasuke killed not soo long ago. Now Sasuke knew what he had to do, he had to start his clan again. But he didnt want another fangirl to be his bride, that liked him for his strenth or his good looks. He needed some one, who could see his pain and what he went though, some one with her own views, her own will. A fighting sprirt, but yet as pretty as a flower.

'As if there was a girl like that!' . He was all alone, and had been for so long.


Mean while, the pink haired girl, was screaming! She was being chased by men in black capes, with masks, and on the back of the capes was a gold logo, it was of the king.

"GET WAY FROM ME YOU BASTERDS! YOU WILL NOT EVER GET ME TO COME BACK! NOT AFTER WHAT HE HAS DONE, TO THEM!" She screamed at one of them. Suddenly one of the masked men came up behind her, and took out his balde, and slit her arm, badly. She screamed at the pain, she could not understand why it hurt so much. "I... this pain, it isnt from a normal balde, it hurts too much, why...?' she asked herself, she was now on the floor, tears flowing from her eyes witch fell to the floor and mixed with the blood from the deep cut in her arm. "The king said to bring her back, i dont think shes worth all that trouble!" the masked man said to his fellow huters. "I say we leave her here, by the looks of her, shes too tired so she cant go far, and she cant heal her self because shes used too much of her chakra already." And they left her there, alone, in a pool of blood.


Sasuke was thinking, about his clan. "Mother, Father, i wish..." his head was down, but if some one was watching, they would of sworn he was crying! "I have no one, what should i do now! I thorght... by killing my brother, i whould... be... happy. Now, i have no goal in life, i have no light!" At this moment he heard a girl, screaming. He looked up, then he ran though the dark green area, untill he reached a girl sitting down on the ground that was covered in blood. She was very beautiful, even in the state she was in, her pink sholder lenth hair was every where, her skin was covered in bruses. But the one thing that caught his a attention was "Her... eyes" they where a wonderful shade of teal green, and yet they held nothing but sadness. "What happend to you?" he asked, she said nothing, she was in too much pain to talk. But Sasuke could see what was wrong with this fallen angel, the deep cut in her arm was causing her to lose blood."Dont worry, every thing will be ok, I promise"

He picked her up, and ran as fast as he could to the hospital, but in his arms the pink haired girl could still see her hero "hes, soo handsome! i wish... i want to live to thank him, for caring for me" and with that, she blanked out.


Nia: well thank you for reading my first chapter of this. tell me if its good, or watever!(oh and if there are a few spelling problems, im sorry! and teal is this blue/green colour, if you didnt know)