This is my first FanFiction, so please review and help me make it better, or point out any mistakes iv'e made. I will need new characters in the future, so I can except some OCs.

Allegiance:

Riverclan

Leader: Deerstar-light brown she cat with white spots and amber eyes

Deputy: Nightshine (queen, temp deputy is Mountainshade)

Med cat: Waterwing-silver she cat with white speckles and light blue eyes

Med cat apprentice: Owlclaw-dark brown tom with amber eyes

Warriors:

Mountainshade (temp deputy)-dark brown tom with black stripes and tail and amber eyes

Apprentice-Snowypaw

Larkflight-light brown tabby she cat with leaf green eyes

Apprentice-Wildpaw

Brightwillow-light brown and white tabby she cat with golden eyes

Solarwind-golden tom with darker speckles and teal eyes

Apprentice-Dartpaw

Stormspeed-dark grey tabby tom with icy blue eyes (Shimmerkit, Sleetkit, Ravenkit and Rowankit's father)

Spindleheart-light grey tabby tom with golden eyes

Oceandusk-dark brown almost black she cat with ocean blue eyes

Apprentice-Mossypaw

Whitewater-silver and white tabby she cat with white eyes, blind

Moonstrike- silver she cat with black stripes, dark blue eyes
Apprentice-Emberpaw

Icewhisker- white tom, gold specked green eyes

Apprentice-Riverpaw

Lilymist-light grey she cat with pale ginger ears paws chest tail tip and green eyes

Rayshine-golden and white tabby she cat with white paws and blue-grey eyes

Apprentices:

Emberpaw-black she cat with ginger/red paws and chest fiery amber eyes

Wildpaw-silver and white tabby tom with dark grey eyes

Mossypaw-pale brown tabby she cat with green eyes

Dartpaw-thin grey tabby tom with amber eyes

Riverpaw-light grey she cat with darker grey and black stripes white underbelly and blue eyes

Snowypaw-fluffy white she cat with light grey ear tips tail tip and paw tips with blue-grey eyes

Queens:

Pearlheart-white she cat with violet eyes

(kits: Pinekit and Pepperkit)

Mate: Mountainshade

Vaporstorm-pale grey she cat with blue eyes

(Kits: Expecting)

Mate: Solarwind

Nightshine-black long legged long tailed she cat with silver eyes that have blue speckles (Deputy)

(Kits: Shimmerkit, Sleetkit, Ravenkit and Rowankit)

Mate: Stormspeed

Kits:

Nightshine & Stormspeed's Kits:

Shimmerkit-black long legged long tailed she cat with silver eyes that have blue speckles

Ravenkit-black long legged long tailed she cat with icy blue eyes

Rowankit-ginger tabby tom with golden eyes

Sleetkit-black and white patched tom with golden eyes that have teal speckles

Pearlheart & Mountainshade's Kits:

Pinekit-dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Pepperkit-Dark brown and black tabby she cat with white belly and chest with violet eyes

Elders:

Flameflight-ginger tabby tom with golden eyes

Dewfeather-light grey and black tabby she cat with silver eyes

Webflight-light grey tom with pale blue eyes

Chapter 1

"What?!" Shimmerkit started awake as she heard her mother's shreek, "Sleetkit's blind? But how can he be BLIND?! No one in our family has ever been blind."

"Calm down Nightshine," Shimmerkit yawned and recognized the voice as Waterwing, the medicine cat. "You've woken up all of your kits, you're scaring them, look at how Ravenkit and Rowankit are cowering into your belly fur, they're shaking Nightshine, you need to calm down. Sleetkit will still be able to be a warrior, just like Whitewater, his other senses will be stronger than anyone else's. Trust me, he'll be okay."

Shimmerkit heard her mother sigh in defeat, "You're right, Waterwing, I need to stay calm and strong for them and for the clan." She curled tighter around her kits.

"Ok, good. Now can you eat these borage leaves? They are for your milk." Shimmerkit heard some rustling as Waterwing pushed the borage leaves towards Nightshine.

I want to see what borage leaves look like! Shimmerkit thought. Her eyes opened and she gazed around in amazment, there were colors! And Light! She looked over at Waterwing, she was silver with white speckles. Shimmerkit stretched her neck up to see the borage leaves, they were green and round with little stems holding them together. Suddenly, Waterwing whipped her head around staring right at Shimmerkit, her eyes were light blue. Then Waterwing's eyes softened and she smiled.

"Nightshine, look, Shimmerkits opened her eyes, they're like yours."

Shimmerkit's mother shifted her head to look down at her daughter, then she smiled widely. Her eyes were silver with blue speckles in them.

"Shimmerkit, what do you think about what you see so far?" Her mother asked.

"There are so many colors!" Shimmerkit said, widening her eyes at her mother.

"I know, my young daughter, and there are so many more." Nightshine purred.

"Whas happenin…?" Asked Rowankit, blinking open his golden eyes for the first time. Nightshine purred even louder. Rowankit widened his eyes and twisted around in circles to look at everything.

"Ravenkit!" Shimmerkit squeaked, "Sleetkit! Open your eyes! There's so much to see!"

Ravenkit opened her eyes, they were icy blue, "I'll open dem ina secon…" She said quietly, closing them again.

Shimmerkit and Rowankit snickered at this and Nightfrost's eyes sparkled with amusment.

"Ravenkit," Shimmerkit giggled, "You just did open them."

Ravenkit's eyes opened again and she smiled, "I knew that, I was just erm… tricking you… yeah, thats what I was doing!" She smiled and laughed.

"I think I'll go and get Sleetkit from Owlclaw." Waterwing said, smiling slightly. Shimmerkit had almost forgotten that Waterwing was there, and she just realised that her small brother wasn't in the nest with them.

"Thank you, Waterwing." Nightfrost said, looking at her. "He will be okay, right Waterwing?" Nightfrost whispered.

"Yes, of course," Waterwing said, dipping her head to the queen,"I see no reason that he can't become warrior, if he works hard enough."

"Okay, Waterwing, thank you." Nightshine said again, "And could you see if you could send Stormspeed in?"

"I'll see what I can do." The medicine cat responded, ducking through the nursery entrance.

"Mama?" Ravenkit asked.

"Yes, sweety?"

"Who's Stormspeed?"

"Stormspeed is your father, and my mate." Nightshine said, addressing all of them. "Here he is now." She purred.

A dark grey tabby tom was approaching them, a huge smile on his face, his eyes, which looked like Ravenkit's, were bright with joy and happiness. Shimmerkit remembered scenting him before.

Rowankit suddenly leapt out of the nest and pounced on Stormspeed, who purred and batted at him, gently with a forepaw. Ravenkit and Shimmerkit exchanged a glance, before launching themselves at their father. He laughed and fell on his side, gazing lovingly up at his kits.

"Yes, you three and your brother are most definently going to be wonderful warriors of Riverclan." He purred.

Nightshine walked over and touched noses with her mate, before picking Ravenkit up in her jaws and walking back to the nest.

"Mom!" Ravenkit protested as she was dropped into the mossy nest.

Stormspeed picked Rowankit up and Shimmerkit trotted at his heels, not wanting to be carried. They nestled down against their mother and Shimmerkit yawned, then so did Ravenkit and Rowankit.

Stormspeed licked each of his kits on the head and touched noses with Nightshine.

"I love you." He said to her.

"I love you, too." Nightshine purred as he walked out.

A few moments later Waterwing walked into the nursery carrying Sleetkit. He was white with black patches and he was, by far, the smallest kit. His eyes were open, they were gold with teal speckles in them. But they were kind of… misty.

Oh, wait. Shimmerkit thought, Sleetkit's blind… But I don't care! I still love him! He's my brother.

"Hi Sleetkit!" Shimmerkit yowled, waking everyone up, as Sleetkit was set down next to her. He looked at her, his eyes wide, then he smiled.

"I'm blind not deaf." He laughed. Shimmerkit and Ravenkit burst into laughter and so did Rowankit, then after glaring at them for a while, so did Nightshine. "Good night, my beautiful kits." She said, curling around them as they snuggled closer. "You'll see the camp tomorrow.

So, yeah. Theres the first chapter. Please review! It'll help me be a better writer and make the story better! I'll reply to any reviews at the end of each chapter, and I will will try to update at least every two days!