Greetings Readers, Thank you all for reading the story, and I'd like to encourage you all to tell me of your thoughts and opinions of the story.

No worries here I already have a draft of the entire story, I'm only thinking if I should Lengthen it or Summarize the Story. Anyways I came here for the Literacy and

to be better at it, at least in writing. And only you guys can say that because beauty is in the eye of the beholder -Margaret Wolfe Hungerford.

I understand that people probably wont leave a review cause its probably bad enough but at at least I now have a decent amount of followers on this story.

You have every right to not leave or to leave a review I wont make a big deal out of it, but will only if you do leave a review

All your reviews be it opinions or criticism are very much appreciated, things like Vocabulary or Grammar or how the story should have been(I wont criticize) or

that the story is not interesting enough to read, also specially the friendly comments are very welcome.

these helps me understand other people's appeal and I'm completely open to any forms of criticism.