bold= higher entity talking
bold+italics= higher entity thinking
italics=someone thinking
As the cover of fog laid onto the hidden leaf village, a strong feeling of evil crept up into the village, with further inspection we see a man in black hooded robe and a tiger printed mask with one eye hole, the man's sharingan blazed through the small hole, the man settled himself for a grand fight, the hooded figure razed his hand in an almost cinematic movement "summoning jutsu!" yelled the man, suddenly a large sealing array formed on the ground, then in a huge cloud of smoke...came the nine tails in all its glory.
But before that, there is a young boy by the name of naruto namikaze son of minato and kushina namikaze, tho he never did feel that way, you see.. Naruto always seemed distant to the family, maybe it was because they pretty much neglected him, maybe it was that they couldn't love him
Naruto was sitting down in his barren room alone as he tried to understand his life, currently he is only 7 years old, but already acts as if he was much older, naruto had a knack for reading books and learning new things, but the problem was that his parents had not yet taught him anything at all, claiming he needed to go to the academy first, but when he heard of a soon to be little sister and him being a brother….well maybe things will be better then.
Naruto crept down stairs for some water,but then all of a sudden BOOM followed by screams and trembling naruto hid under the kitchen table scared of what was happening, or what he didn't know was happening. After a while naruto ventured outside to see what was happening, he then saw something incredible it was a giant fox with lots of talis and it was fighting ninja!
But then it suddenly disappeared and naruto not knowing what happen, ran towards where it was but suddenly stopped when he saw a man in a cloak, "GOD DAMNIT FOURTH HOKAGE!"
Yelled the man "hello sir" spoke young naruto as he approached the man he noticed he was bleeding..something "are you ok?" the masked man spun towards the child and was about to kill him until he noticed his hair "who are you kid!" demanded the masked figure " i'm naruto namikaze" naruto stuttered out, the masked man then chuckled and said "ha this is almost too easy, when you awake, you are to remember this word" naruto was about to reply but suddenly passed out his vision went blank, a large vile of blood attached to a needle was then stabbed into naruto "hmm there, at least I did my second mission, now the old man can stop nagging about his grandson, better scram before more filthy leaf nin appear.
The cloaked figure then warped away leaving naruto on the ground, but naruto's eyes burst open revealing a blazing sharingan then his eyes slowly closed and he fell into a deep slumber
Tell me how it was guys, first story hope it is not that bad lol.