hi guys I took more writing lessons and got better. I hope its even better than the other stories.
One day Snoke was feeling bored and lonley.
''What is this feeling I need to feel again'' He said as a guy ina cool helmet came.
''Lord Snoke theres a guy you will like.''
''who is this man.'' Snoke said and the helmet guy took out a ball thing that made a light picture. It was another old guy that was still younger and he was handsome. snoke creamed his pants.
''he's the one where is he.''
''He lives in a big blue box with a lesbian or something'' the helmet guy said. Snoke was happy and used his force powers to throw the helmet guy into a door.
''Get me my ship I need to see this man for myself.'' Snoke then got in his ship that was huge. He punched a button that made it fly into space. He put the space computer to fly to the blue box. Then a screen came.
''Snoke rebels are attacking come here quick.'' Snoke reached his hhand out and killd the guy.
''No I must find and satisfy my feelings.'' Snoke the made the screen go away and his ship flew fast. He flew to the Earth planet where the Doctor was.
''I need a checkup from the Doctor.'' Snoke said as he liccked his lips. Snoke landed on the earth next to the blue box. He walked up to it and knocked on the door.
''Doctor I need a checkup'' The doctor oppened the door and snoke went in.
''Who are you?''
''I am Snoke and I'm sick can you help me?'' the docter noddd and sent him to the medical place. Snoke saw the lesbian lady and used his force powers and tricks to make her fall off a rail.
''ahhhhh'' she said.
''Why'd you do that'' the doctor said.
''because she lookes like a rebel scum.'' snoke said. Snoke and the Doctor went to the bed place where Snoke sat down.
''Nothing wrong with you.'' The Docter said. Snoke smiled at him.
''Not that kind of checkup honey.'' He siad. the doctor had a confused face.
''What?'' Snoke got up and grabbed his face and brought it close but then the doctor pushed him off.
''No I don;t like that.''
''but you will.'' Snoke said. he then used his force powers to bring the doctor in. He kissed the doctor moving his old guy tounge in his mouth. the doctor screamed but snoke kept doing it. He then used the force powers to make his clothes go away.
''what are you doing'' The doctor asked.
''Shh just let it happen.'' Snoke said as he used his powers to make the Doctor bend over.
''GIVE ME EVERYTHING!'' snoked yelld as the doctor tried to get away. but snoke's clothes went away and his wrinkly old body was there. The doctor fell onto Snoke's wrinkly dick and he thrusted it.
''Yes thisd is what I always wanted yesssssss'' snoke screamed. as he felt alive for the first time in so many years. He didnt know how long it was since he had a hoood man.
''Why are you doing this.'' the doctor said.
''because I deserve it thats why honey.'' then Snoke released his white water stuff into the doctors ass and dropped him.
''that was amazing doctor I'll be back.
the next day.
''doctor your pregneant?''
''yes and its getting very big.'' the doctor said as he sat on a table. He screamed as the babies came out of his butt. they looked like snoke and were all wrinkly and stuff.
''ahh there so ugly.''
''kill them bill kill tjhem.'' bill took a wepon and killd the ugly babies.
''good now no child support.''
To be continued?...