Ok…so I decided that I'm going to re-do the story. Maybe even make it less complicated, so please tell me how you like the re-dos.

Disclaimer: Anything that you recognize I don't own…so no suing please.

Chapter One

"Hey baby, how about you come home with me?" A guy said putting his arm around a girl about 4'6. She slowly turned to face the guy. She has purple eyes and long purple hair. She picked off the guys arm from her and threw it. Without a second thought, she swung her right fist landing it on his eye.

"A) I don't like you, and B) DO NOT TOUCH ME!" She yelled giving him a death stare. He took one look in her eyes and ran the other ways. Off in the distance she heard: "You will regret this bitch." She just rolled her eyes.

The girl that was looking in the direction that the guy ran was known as Hana Taylor. Hana was known to have a quick temper. When she was younger, she was in the leader of a gang. But when she was around 10, her mom and little sister passed away due to catching an unknown disease. It wasn't long after that, that she left to go travel the world.

'This is why I hate people' She thought to herself. She was in a small fishing village just passing through on her way to Central city. There were a few buildings and a few people walking around. They were giving her funny looks but she just rolled her eyes and walked away. She walked to the river and sat by it and stared off into space. Not too long after that everything went black.

Suddenly, she saw two figures. One figure was a little taller than she was, he had blond hair that was tied in a braid. He had on a red jacket and was wearing a black shirt and black pants. The other figure was hard to tell much about them. All that was known was that they were wearing a full suit of armor. It looked like they were walking towards something. She turned around and saw the sign to the town that she was in. As soon as she saw the sign, the vision was gone. She looked around, but nothing seemed out of the ordinary.

Hana didn't have time to think about the vision though. There was a heavy smell of smoke in the air and people screaming. Hana quickly got up and ran towards the smell. She came to a dead holt as she saw a two-story home was caught in a blaze. She looked around and saw a woman sobbing as she was being restrained by two guys. "My children are still in there!" she exclaimed. Everyone was trying their best to put out the fire. Hana located the front door and quickly ran and kicked in the door. She was greeted by flames. Hana took a deep breath and ran inside. The flames had quickly spread to the whole house. Hana heard children screaming upstairs. Without any hesitation, she ran up the stairs and found 2 children cowering in a corner. Hana ran towards them. There was a young girl no more than 6 and a little boy that was maybe 3. The girl was holding her brother protectively.

She knelt down beside them. She picked up the boy and let the girl climb on her back. She then kicked a door in and saw a window that had been shattered by the fire. "Close your eyes." She instructed the kids. She then ran through the room and jumped out the window. She landed a few yards away safely with both children. Who both ran towards their mother. Hana let out a sigh of relief. By this time the fire was almost put out.

While everyone was still worried about the fire, Hana used it as an opportunity to sneak away. She however, didn't notice that she was being followed. "It's not every day, you see someone risk their lives like that." A voice said behind her. Hana turned around and saw the two figures that were in her vision standing behind her.

"You well, neither are fires like that." She shrugged still studying the two figures in front of her.

"why didn't you just let someone else do it?" another voice asked and Hana had a suspension it was coming from the suit of armor.

"Because no one else was going to do it. Most people are too afraid of fire to even think about doing something like that, let alone and do it."

"What's your name?" The blonde guy asked interested and Hana just shrugged.

"Eh, names aren't important. Besides, shouldn't you be introducing yourselves?" Hana raised an eyebrow. The blonde guy was about to say something when they heard someone else speak.

"We are looking for a girl. She hurt my little brother, and so I have a score to settle." There was a guy that looked to be around 18 or 19. He was muscular built and had black hair. Standing next to him was the guy that was bothering Hana.

"There are lots of girls here. You're going to have to be more specific." A guy spoke up. Hana on the other hand was moving slowly through the crowd that had formed.

"You are right. There are a lot of girls in this village. The girl knows who she is, and if for some reason she doesn't show herself, then we'll just have to start hurting others and we will burn this town to the ground." Hana looked around and everyone in the village looked around at each other nervously.

Hana was about to speak up, but someone else spoke up first. "Why are you looking for this girl." Hana looked up and saw the two people Hana was talking to.

"Like I said, she hurt my little brother and I can't let her get away with this." He said darkly.

"How do you know she's still here?" The other guy asked and the guy laughed.

"Because she's not smart enough to leave."

"Or…maybe she didn't care enough to leave." Hana said walking out of the crowd. The Blonde guy looked a little shocked. "Your brother started it though. I don't like being touched…and he was kind of creepy."

"Wait…so you actually did hurt him?" The blonde guy asked shocked and Hana shrugged.

"Yes. I'm a lot stronger then I look."

"Whether he started it or not, I'm going to have to hurt you. Now be a good little girl and stand still." The guy said condescendingly and that was the last straw. Hana's temper got the best of her. Her eyes started to change to red, she clapped her hands together and put them on the ground and suddenly two metal pipes appeared in her hands.

"Fine, you want to try and hurt me then bring it. But I warn you, you're not going win." She threatened him, making him laugh. Hana Just ran towards him and punched him so hard it sent him back a couple of feet. He looked to be knocked out. She walked towards his brother who was whimpering as she walked towards him. She bent down so that she was looking directly in his eyes. "Don't you ever touch me again, or send your brother to do your dirty work" She hissed and could see him get paler as he looked in her eyes. She got up and turned around. Everyone was staring at her, the blonde guy that she was talking to earlier had his mouth opened in shock at what he just witnessed.

"WITCH!" The crowd screamed and Hana just rolled her eyes.

"Whatever. I don't feel like dealing with this, so I'm just going to leave." Hana said and walked towards to entrance of the town. 'People are stupid.' Hana started her journey to the next town. It was a good 15 miles from here, but there she could catch the train to Central city. Hana turned around with an annoyed expression. "I really don't like being followed." Hana looked at the two people who she has been talking to.

"You left pretty fast back there." The blonde guy noted and Hana shrugged.

"I've learned that once they start calling you a witch, its best to get out. But that's not why you guys are here is it?"

"Well, no. You still haven't told us your name."

"You really shouldn't go asking people their names if you don't give your name." Hana said rolling her eyes.

"Hi, my name is Alphonse Elric and this is my big brother Edward Elric." The suit of armor who was named Alphonse.

"My name is Hana. So, tell me, where are you guys heading?" She asked still studying the brothers in front of her.

"We were just heading on our way to the train station, we have to make a stop in Central. What about you?"

"actually, pretty much the same thing. Apparently, I'm causing too much destruction, so mustang wants to yell at me." Hana shrugged with an evil smile.

"Wait…how do you know mustang?" Ed asked surprised.

"I'm a state alchemist." Hana answered a matter factly. She turned around and started walking away. She turned around and yelled, "Are you just going to stand there or are you coming?" The boys looked at each other and followed Hana.

And that is a wrap on my new chapter one. How do you like it? It will be more action packed once they reach central! Please Review!