HEY, this is my first story. I had some help though,my friends Raye and Nataliecontributed towards this amazing story, it was me being retarted at frist, but then I really got into it!

Yes, I know it startsout talking about a banana, but it gets SUPER interesting.

Chapter 1

I was having a hard time peeling my banana that I was holding. My name is Lynnette, and boy am I lonely, sometimes. As I finally got the brown-pointy part of the banana peeled, I saw that the top was mashed down, like in cartoons when someone dropped an anvil on there head , because I had been trying to open it for a while and had ended up deforming it. I really don't care how it looked. So I ate it taking several bites, looking like I was a starving monkey. I love bananas, but I could never open them, they usually looked mashed every time. "I feel weird, boringly weird." She said, leaning back in a chocolate colored chair. "I'm so bored, there's nothing to do nowadays." A boy walked in. It was only Garret, her older brother, he was seventeen, and she was fifteen, on July 26, she would turn sixteen, being able to drive, 'only about two months from now', she thought.

Garret looked silly, with his wild brown hair, and squishy looking face.

"Hey, you ate the last banana." Garret said with a sad look on his face, "I haven't got to eat one yet."

"It's because your slow and don't think as quickly as me." She said, sticking her tongue out at him.

They always joked around like that, but someday someone would get hurt. She got up from her chair and walked to her room, where her colorfully painted green and black computer was. She automatically turned on the monitor and clicks an icon. She signed into AIM (aol instant messenger). She was talking to her friend Maddy.

"Hey Lynnette, ya want to go to the movies?" Maddy typed.

"Sure, which movie, what time, what movie theater, and who with?" I typed quickly.

"Well, I was thinking along the lines of a scary, with a friend with 'benefits', at around 9:00P.M." Maddy typed. She was a fast type, but not as fast as me.

"Sounds good to me, I'll be there." She clicked the close button and turned off the computer. She was in the shower in a mere five seconds.

When she stepped out she saw her foggy reflection in the mirror, and wrapped a towel around herself. She quickly put on some eye makeup carefully not putting so much on. She didn't want to ruin the gorgeousness of her green protruding eyes. Lynnette's best trait was probably her eyes, they were green with orange-gold circles around the center. Her hair was brown-ish, a light color brown, the length was about to her shoulders , but just below her chin. She was 5"4 and was about average weight. She was beautiful, but she thought she was ugly inside. She was always alone at home until her brother got home.

So yeah it was super short,but more is on the way and it get more and more and more interesting trust me your gonna want to read the rest. And if you have any tips or anything that might help me please feel free to help! And I want your HONEST oppion on this when you review.

SUMMARY section2:

The next section isabout how Lynnette trips and falls into a water fountain drain, and meets a furry little pink teddy bear, is it a dream or not? we'll see in the next section.