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Call me Diablo
She sat on her porch and watched as the other kids in her neighborhood ran around. Her eyes always landed on the 10 year old trouble makers that were almost inseparable. She wanted to play with them, but her father would never allow her off the porch to go play with them.
The older boy must have noticed her watching him, since he walked over to where she was sitting. She looked at him hopefully and smiled.
"Do you wanna come play?" he asked stopping at the bottom of the stairs.
"I can't my dad won't let me off the porch. He says you are bad, but I don't think so," she said shaking her French braided hair.
He smiled widely, "I'm Dominic."
"I'm Angel," she responded beaming at him, "If I was able to sneak off the porch could I play with you and your friends?"
"Sure come on, we can start the game over here," Dominic said smiling and pulling her down as he looked around and ushered her to the other side of the street using his larger body to block her father's sight of her.
Angel smiled at they made it to where his friends were waiting for him, "Hi I'm Angel."
"Come on Dom, she's like what 5?" one of the girls said making a face at him.
"I'm 7," Angel snapped back glaring at her as the other girl and boy laughed.
"Angel this is, Letty, Vince, and my little sister Mia. She's 7 too," Dominic said putting his arm over her shoulders to point to each one of the people in his group, "Come on lets go play in my dad's garage. I'll show you a thing or two about cars," he said pushing his friends up his driveway and into the old garage at the top of the hill.
Angel smiled and walked with Mia as the ten year olds excitedly ran up the hill.
"You like cars?" Mia asked as they followed the boys in to the garage.
Angel nodded, "I like motorcycles too. They look like so much fun," Angel said beaming finally happy to be 'playing' with the other kids in the neighborhood.
Dom walked towards her and grabbed her hand pulling her over to the work bench and showing her the different car parts and telling her about them. Letty, Vince and Mia all chimed in and taught her more about the different types of cars and engines.
An older man walked in the garage, "Dom! What did I say about coming in here and working with my Charger?"
"That I shouldn't be in here without you around," Dom grumbled, "But I was showing my new friend your awesome car," he said perking up pulling Angel in front of him.
"Hello there chicka, I'm Dom and Mia's dad. Who are you?" He asked crouching down as the others held their breath.
"I'm Angel Suko, I live across the street. My daddy never plays with me, but Dom saw me and invited me to play with him and his friends," Angel said smiling.
He nodded and patted Angel's head standing, "Outside the lot of you, go on get going."
Dom and the others smiled and ran outside and began to place race car as Dom put it. The rules were simple, you were the car and you had to run and 'drive' beating the others over the finish line which was a stick in the backyard.
Dom was the reigning champ, or was until Angel beat him at his own game. As the sun began to go down Angel waved goodbye to them all thanking them for letting her play with them.
Angel walked inside and was scooped up by her father, "Where were you? Are you alright?"
"I'm fine daddy; I was playing with the boy across the street and him friends."
"I told you not to go over there. That boy is a bad influence; I don't want you going over there."
"But Daddy!"
"No buts, you will listen to me you understand."
"Yes daddy," Angel pouted as her father put her down.
The next day Angel sat on the porch her hair in pigtails as she watched the older kids come out to play. Dom motioned for her to come over and play but she shook her head.
He walked over with his friends and looked at her, "What don't you want to play with us?"
"Too good to play with us?" Letty asked snippily as Angel looked down.
"No, I want to play but my dad told me I couldn't go over and play with you," Angel said sadly.
"Okay, then we'll play over here," Mia said smiling as she held out her hand to Angel who took it and led them into her backyard where her father's meager garage was.
"So what's in there?" Vince asked pointing to it.
"My daddy is fixing up an old motorcycle. I want to help him but he never lets me…" Angel said shrugging, "Its okay I still watch him anyway."
Dom nodded and smiled, "Come on lets play racecar."
They all nodded and smiled running around the backyard happily. That was until Angel's father came outside and scooped her up.
"Get out of here you hooligans!"
"Daddy! I was playing with them! You told me not to go over and play with them so I didn't, they came over and played with me," Angel said crossing her arms glaring at her father.
"I told you not to play with them at all," He snapped and put her down, "Go to your room now."
Angel pouted and waved to her new friends, "Bye…"
Dom and the others waved back, "Bye Angel."
"Now get out of here you lot and if I see you on my property again I'm calling the police."
Angel looked at her window as her friends ran back across the street. She pouted and crossed her arms over her chest stomping around the room. She kicked the new backpack her daddy had bought her for school before smiling.
"You can't stop me from playing with them while I'm at school," she said sitting on her bed.
3 years later…
"I thought we solved this problem when you were younger! I told you not to go over there; I told you I didn't want you anywhere near that boy."
"Dad, Mia needed help with her homework. I went across the street and helped her with it," the now ten year old Angel yelled.
"She has parents to help with that. I won't hear another word about this, school lets out in a month and your going to live with your Aunt in Japan!" he yelled as Angel's mouth dropped open.
"WHAT? I'm not going anywhere! My friends are here!" she screamed and darted out of the room and down the stairs running across the street and into the 13 year old Dom as he walked out of his house.
"Whoa, hi Angel. What's wrong?" he asked seeing the tears in her eyes.
"My dad is sending me away to Japan at the end of the school year…" Angel sniffed trying not to cry in front of him.
"Come on in," Dom said opening the door he had just come out of.
"I thought you were going to play at Vince's?" his mother asked.
"Something came up," Dom said as his mother walked into the room.
"Aw what's wrong sweetie?" she asked crouching in front of the trying not to cry Angel.
"My dad is sending me away because I'm friends with Dom and Mia, Mrs. Toretto," Angel said as tears slipped out of her eyes.
She was pulled into a hug, "I'm sorry sweetie. Why don't you go upstairs with Dom and talk to him and Mia. I'll go get something to make you feel better."
Dom nodded and pulled Angel upstairs, "You go play with Mia and I'm going to call Vince and Letty and have them come over."
Angel walked down the hallway as Dom called his friends and told them to come over. She knocked on Mia's door and walked in when she was told to.
"What's wrong Angel? Did you forget something?" Mia asked looking at her friend.
Angel shook her head as Dom walked in behind her, "The crew will be here in a minute and you can explain what's going on."
Angel nodded and sat down next to Mia as Mrs. Toretto walked into the room with a plate of cookies, "Thank you Mrs. Toretto."
"Of course sweetie," she said as there was a bang on the door, "COME IN!" she yelled walking out of Mia's room and down stairs.
Letty and Vince ran into the room, "What happened Angel?" the both asked.
"My dad is sending me to Japan at the end of the school year."
"Why?" Dom asked crossing his arms over his chest.
"Because I was over here earlier helping Mia with homework when he came home, he said he thought he took care of this problem when we were younger."
"Oh like when he told us to get off his property or he was going to call the cops? But you still played with us at school?" Letty asked frowning.
"Yeah, I don't know why he doesn't like you guys. You all are really nice; I mean yeah we get into things but its fun."
"He's just a jackass," Vince said and Mia looked at him in horror, "What? That's what my mom calls my dad all the time."
"That's a bad word, don't say that," Mia said shaking her finger at him.
"Anyway, what are you going to do?" Dom asked.
"I can't not go…" Angel said sighing, "So I guess I'll give you my new phone number and e-Mial address so we can still talk."
Her friends nodded and sighed, "Alright then, I guess we we'll do that and make the rest of your time here amazing," Dom said smiling at her as he grabbed a cookie.
The next month was rough on Angel's relationship with her father. She spent every night she could at the Toretto household, hanging out with her friends. Even when she was grounded she snuck out and went anyway, slipping out her window and into Dom's arms as he waited under her window waiting for her to drop.
Dom yawned as everyone sat on his floor drinking chocolate milk for the last time together, "So I say we do something so Angel won't ever forget us."
"Sure Dom, like what?" Letty asked leaning against his bed.
"I don't know… um how about we jack a car?" Dom suggested smiling, "I mean come on we all know how to do it, so lets go do it."
Angel nodded, "Alright, sounds like fun. You wanna come Mia?"
"Nope, I'm not going to be apart of this idea," she said shaking her head.
"Okay, see you when we get back," Dom said smiling as he opened his window and climbed out.
Angel and the others followed him to the junkyard and to their favorite old wreck that still running. Angel climbed into the old car's passenger side as Dom slipped into the driver's side and hotwired the car. The others climbed into the car and smiled as Dom drove the car around the junkyard and plowed straight through the front gates.
Dom drove the car back to the junkyard as the first rays of light hit the horizon, "Come on we got to run home."
With that the four of them ran back to Dom's house, Angel quickly darting to her house climbing the tree beside her window as she slipped into her room and closed the window. Grabbing a change of clothes she walked into her bathroom and took a shower to explain why she was up so early.
Her father was there with their SUV, all her things already packed into the car and ready to take her to the airport. Dom and the rest of the gang was standing there looking at the SUV.
"I'll miss you guys," Angel said hugging them all and giving Dom a kiss on the cheek, "Thank you for letting me play with you guys, it was an amazing 3 years. When I come back to the states I'll look you up."
Dom nodded blushing slightly, "See you Angel, good luck in Japan."
Angel nodded and waved good bye to her friends as she got into the SUV.
"I thought I told you to stay away from them."
"They are my friends. I would never leave my friends like you wanted, I love my friends," Angel huffed and looked away from him.
He frowned and left her alone, "I expect you to be on your best behavior and stay away from who ever your Aunt tells you to."
Angel didn't respond to him as she stared out the window watching the road slip under their car.
He sighed and didn't say anything more as they got to the airport. He grabbed her things out of the back of the SUV and walked her into the airport terminal.
"Your aunt will be there waiting for you with a sign with your name on it. Have a good time sweetie I'll come visit you on holidays."
"Whatever. I still hate you," Angel snapped grabbing her bags and walking off to board the plane, the non-stop 18 hour flight to Japan.
Angel drifted off quickly still worn out from the all nighter she had pulled with Dom and the others. When she woke they were touching down in Japan, yawning she stood and stretched keeping her book bag with her as she grabbed her little purse and walked off the plane down to where the sign read baggage claim in English under the Japanese.
She slipped through the crowd and smiled grabbing her bags of the belt and wheeling them towards the other people with signs. Her smile quickly dropped as she looked at them and none of them were in English.
"Shit… I really hate my dad," She muttered as she looked at the people waiting not knowing which one of the signs read 'Angel'.
She looked around and sat down on the waiting chairs tapping her chin, trying to think of something that she could do to pass the time. Dom would have already snagged a segway and would be on his way but she wasn't Dom and she didn't feel like getting in trouble yet.
Huffing Angel crossed her arms and watched as the people passed her by, "What a lousy way to spend the start the summer."
"Angel? Angel Suko?" A woman asked in perfect English as she came over.
Angel stood, "Yes?"
"Come on I'm your aunt Suki. This is my step-son Han, he's a few years older then you."
"Hi I'm Angel it's nice to meet you," Angel said looking at her step cousin.
"Hi," Han said shortly as he took in the girl that was going to be living with them now.
Angel didn't shift as he looked her over, "So can we go? I feel as I've spent enough quality time with the airport."
Her aunt laughed and motioned her on, "Come on then Angel. Let's get you and your things home."
Angel nodded and grabbed her stuff before following the bored looking Han and his step mom. She was curious if he was her real cousin, or her step cousin, he seemed cool either way. She looked at all the cars and smiled at the man driving the car they approached.
"This is your step Uncle Jah, he doesn't speak too much English so Han and I will teach you Japanese, since you'll need it to get around."
"Thank you," Angel said nodding.
After the bags were all loaded up, Angel followed Han into the back seat of the car as her Aunt got in the passenger side. Angel looked out of the window and smiled as the beautiful city spread itself out in front of her.
She looked at the small house and nodded, go figure Japan would have little houses to go with the giant city. Angel stepped out of the car looked at what was going to be the rest of her life until she got enough money to go back to the states.
"Now I know you just got out of school, but school here will start up in a few weeks. I already have you enrolled there, and you'll be in a few special classes until you learn enough Japanese to get by in classes," Aunt Suki said patting Angel's shoulder as she walked to the door carrying one of your bags.
"Okay…" Angel said not knowing what to think.
She followed her Aunt into the small house and swallowed, no wonder her father had packed so little.
"Here is your room, Han's is right over there, mine and Jah's is across the hall," Aunt Suki said putting your bag on the made bed, "Well you get settled in and I'll make us some supper."
"Thank you Aunt Suki," she said politely as she put the rest of her bags on her bed.
Han wandered into her room and nodded, "Come on I'll show you around."
Angel nodded and smiled at him, "Thank you.'
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