Okay so this is my first fan-fiction so please be nice and tell me how I did
He sat on the bench where they first met, where they had their first kiss, and where they said I love you for the first time. But those times were gone. It had been two months, two months since he lost his lover, his old team-mate, his friend forever, the love of his life, the only one whose opinion mattered.
It was pouring rain in the city, in the park, all over but the blonde didn't care, he'd been out there for hours, his body had long ago gotten used to the cold. The pain of his memories with his little raven hurt more than pounding water, the freezing cold, and even being by himself. The only person he needed was his little raven Sasuke.
He sometimes woke up thinking it was all a dream but that hope was always shattered when he looked over and didn't see Sasuke sleeping beside him. He wished that Sasuke would come and tell him he was a dobe for thinking that he would leave him. He wanted to go home with instant ramen and hear Sasuke groan at the thought of more ramen. But most of all he wanted Sasuke to come and hold him forever.
The poor blonde couldn't hold back the tears when he remembered how Sasuke would smirk, or how he reserved those rare smiles just for him, he even missed everyone calling him the girl in their relationship. All he wanted was for his raven to come back. Back to him. Back to life they had together.
Naruto wanted nothing more than to have his raven back or at least go join him but he knew that people here needed him, depended on him, just like he depended on Sasuke. He had to be here for his friends. Because that was the real Naruto. He was the guy who would be there no matter what, he was the one who supported you through everything, he was the one who you could always confide in, he was the one who looked at you for you.
As Naruto came to realize a black haired raven smiled down at him from heaven. He to wished he could go and be with the blonde but he knew now that Naruto realized that he could survive this with the help of his friends that Naruto didn't need him. He was saddened by the thought but that was quickly replaced with joy as he saw his lover, his old teammate, his friend forever, the love of his life, the only one whose opinion mattered smile up at him from his place beside his gravestone.
So how was it? Feel free to PM me with suggestions or just write them in your review.