This is my very first fanfiction story, so sorry if it's really bad. It'd be really great if you could review and tell me what i need to change. :D
Disclaimer: I dont own Gakuen Alice and I never will.
The students moved around restlessly around the room, pacing back and forth as they "patiently" waited for class to begin. Fangirls flocked around Natsume and Ruka. Desperate cries could be heard.
"Natsume, why wont you go out with me?"
"Ruka, you look so cute! I'll do anything for you!"
"Awwwww, you both look so hot!"
Ruka and Natsume just stared coldly into space. The two harrassed boys anticipated and waited for the arrival of their Mikan. Then, Hotaru and Mikan finally came to class. Inchou jumped up, approaching Imai, excited for he wanted to tell her about his very exciting journey to the dentist. Hotaru gave him a cold glance and wondered what the hell he wanted. Mikan happily skipped to Natsume and Ruka. The fangirls gave her a cold glance, their faces green with envy. Meanwhile, Yuu was askiing Hotaru about her new inventions.
Mikan then bounced over to Hotaru, attempting to give her a big bear hug. Imai whipped out her new invetion, a new and improved Baka Gun, which would knock them out cold. She calmly glared at Mikan and pressed the trigger. The victim slumped to the floor, helplessly. Natsume jumped up, debating about attacking Hotaru for knocking Mikan out but then thought better of it.
Two hours later, Mikan awoke in the hospital. Inchou gave Hotaru a worried look.
"Hey Hotaru..."
"What do you want?"
"Uh...can you please not fire at me with the Baka Gun?"
"Are you an idiot?"
"I guess not..."
"Good, now leave me alone."
Mikan sniffled, her nose making that annoying noise of snot being sucked even deeper into your nostril. She wailed, flailing her arms uselessly around in the air, and ran out of the room, still in her hospital gowns and completely unaware of her injuries. During her flight to her favorite place, a sakura tree, she ran into Natsume.
"Oh... I'm sorry Natsume. Please excuse me." Mikan stuttered, tears overflowing her red eyes. Natsume simply ignored her. Seeing this, the already emotionally unstable girl gave way to more sobs as her chest heaved up and down. She thought they were friends yet he just coldly brushed her problems away, as if they were mere pesky flies.
She couldn't take it anymore and scurried away to her safe haven. Because of the previous injuries, her head still felt woozy as she stumbled along the path, occasionally bumping into poles, walls, and worried people. Once, she collided with Jinno-sensei, sending a jar of food for his beloved frog flying through the air. Students around them watched the small projectile sail through the air, almost gracefully, before meeting a stop at the wall. Dead carcasses of flies, crickets, and such scattered and littered the otherwise white floor.
Girls shrieked and ran away, their hands somehow fixing their oh so perfect hair. Jinno-sensei whirled around, his face a tomato red, and prepared to give a long lecture and punishment to the culprit but the dizzy Mikan stumbled along her way, totally oblivious of the disturbance.
There, she spent the rest of her night. Secretly, Koko was watching over her nearby from a bush. He was worried about his best friend.
The next morning, Mikan was restored to her usual cheery and bubbly self, bouncing off the walls, greeting everyone, and continuing to throw herself at Hotaru, hoping to catch her off guard. Imai smirked at the foolish girl's futile attempts and once again raised her trusty Baka Gun. Not even bothering to aim, she applied pressure, the powerful recoil traveling through her body.
Mikan sensed this and ducked in time, giggling madly at her genuis plan. Koko's quick eyes followed the pink bullet as it slowly made its way and finally made contact with the class representative's head with a Baka!
Hotaru looked up just in time to see an Iinchou doubled over in pain right before her amethyst eyes. Time stood still. Nobody dared to move.
Mikan finally decided to stand up and saw one of her good friend in agony. She rushed over, once again sobbing in the process.
"I'm... hic... so sorry Yuu! It's all... hic... my fault." the distressed girl cried. The victim was in too much pain to tell the brunette it was all okay.
Natsume scanned the area and noticed Iinchou's brown glasses broken under a desk. He shrugged and tried to erase this bit of information from his mind. Such useless facts didn't deserve to be in his genius mind.
Three days later, the doctor announced that Tobita Yuu's injuries have recovered and he should be out of the hospital in a few hours. Many students prepared a party and presents for returning class representative.
Meanwhile, Hotaru was going on a guilt trip. She tried to keep her persona cold, as to not show any weakness but she really did feel bad about hurting her friend.
Mikan, Natsume, Hotaru, Koko, and Ruka gathered around Tobita's white bed, nervously anticipating his awakening.
Slowly, he struggled to open his eyes. Sitting up in bed, he groped around blindly. Confused, the gang simple waited for him to find whatever it was he was looking for.
As if finally realizing where he was, his blood began to boil as his face turned a deep tomato red.
"WHERE IS IT?" he shouted in fury. Taken back, the group scratched their heads and looked at each other, searching for answers.
i no its rly short... sry i just let my fingers fly 4 bout 5 min
i now suddenly hav tons of story ideas!!!
thx 2 Dawn's Sorrow 4 editin
it'd mean a lot 2 me if u left a review thx