Me: Real fast I'll tell you that this is my first time and I love critics so please help me.
Duncan: Then you will love me
Gwen: Don't be so rude, Duncan
Duncan: Let's go make out
Me: Enough said guys, sorry about that but anyway hope you like it. (By the way I hate the new Duncan- Gwen thing, it's so gay).
Alejandro"s POV
Confessional
"Crap, I can't believe what I just heard it's outraging its infuriating. I heard Team Amazon talking about heather. They are all pulling they are votes together to vote her off. The truth is a really like her. I mean she's my competition, my rival, and my love. It figures I like the evil ones. I might loose from her. But anyway, there's nothing I can do unless… Good Bye!"
I have to make it to Chris before his elimination, he thought. I better hurry there is a way that maybe I can persuade him to keep her in the game. Good thing I've seen the other seasons off this show. I have learned everyone's feelings and traits. The more drama the more Chris is paid right? So if I know him at all then he only cares about three things
-His money
-His hair
-Torturing us (figures)
I hope I can convince him that it would make him more money to keep her in, but I'll have to make a deal. And I know I will end up regretting it. Dam Heather she has to do this to me. Go to hell Heather, he thought to himself.
(He finally made it to Chris) Dam this giant plane, he thought.
Smiling he said, "Hello Chris"
"Not now I have to get my hair ready for the elimination."
"Trust me when I say this might be a little more interesting to you if you just listen"
"Talk but Hurry"
"We might need to take this into a private room"
"I've got the feeling that this might be more interesting than annoying Alejandro?"
"It's a deal I have to make with you; it involves more drama, money, and torture for everyone." Alejandro said, not regretting anything.
"Fine, but sure should be worth the time, and cause pain to the passengers."
"It will, Guarantee"
When they got in a private room Alejandro said "Listen it's about Heather."
"What's your point, I have the feeling she will be kicked"
"That's why I'm here to tell you that disregarding her team's votes could, and will cause more drama."
"Not worth it though, I would love to see her and your face when she's kicked though, so I'm fine"
"What if I make you a deal, I'll make sure Duncan stays in the game, if you keep her in, and if you ever need me to manipulate someone…"
"Done"
Confession
"That idiot is keeping her in, thank you Chris my rival, and love being in the game, there is no way I will lose, plus seeing an intern gets kicked is priceless. Absolutely priceless for once that wasn't us being tortured by that bitch."
Me: I hope you like it viewers, remember I love critics so please you know what to do.
Duncan: Pummel you for talking about me and Gwen
Me: I'm done including you, jerk
Chris: Well this better be good
Me: By the way tell me if you like the whole including characters thing, and remember without criticism I cannot make any better chapters or stories. Please give honest onions, thank you.
Duncan: I'll probably be arrested again if I tell you
Me: sorry delinquents don't count
Duncan: I thought you weren't including me
Me: Please just everyone review
