Hello there! I Come back with prologue of story, which I started writing before "Great Orchestra of Christmas Charity"
It's only prologue so i'm not expecting you to write many reviews, but although that i'll still write it till the end.
Read & enjoy!
Heartfilia, in ancient and forgotten language, meant 'fallen from above'. Although Lucy never had forgotten about it. Never, from Great War in Heaven bllions years ago. Now her past and Lisanna's return are taking her personal happiness. Will she accept it and throw her life for the world's sake?
Prologue
Prologue includes present characters that will come across the story, but are unknown for many readers. If someone wants to know more about them I recommend reading series "The Fallen" by Thomas E. Sniegowski. Some information's copied from Wikipedia.
Aaron Colbert- 18-years-old teenager, he is a Nephilim, the child of a human woman/angel pairing, and that he is being pursued by a group of angels called the Powers. He is a son of Morningstar and Lucy's godson. It's said that he will bring peace on earth and in heaven and save everyone from suffer. His look will be presented in later chapters.
Verchiel- The bloodthirsty leader of the Powers. He is ruthless, cruel and brutal. He wants to destroy Aaron and other Nephilims and his brothers-angels, he don't hesitates killing humans either. His task is complicated by Lucy and her Walker team.
The Powers- The villains in my and original author's story. A powerful host of angels who act as enforcers, carrying out what they perceive to be the wishes of God, destroying what they see as being offensive to the Creator. They blindly follow Verchiel's every orders.
Camael- Former leader of the Powers. He abandoned his position of authority many millennia ago having grown tired of the violence perpetrated by The Powers' mission. Now he is Aaron's mentor. Lucy's old friend.
Gabriel- Aaron's speaking dog. (I don't know if I will put him in my story, but just in case).
Morningstar (Lucifer)- Aaron's father and Lucy's friend. Because of him, the Great War in Heaven started. After banishment he ordered Lucy to form forces against Powers and then Walkers was formed. He and Lucy seems hiding something before everyone. Something important, about war in heaven.
The Walkers –team formed to fight with Powers and to protect Morningstar's one and only offspring Aaron. They come from other worlds (something like Edolas) and they master's different powers.
I thought it would be fun if I added some characters which everyone knows (or just most of them XD), so here it comes, the 10 great Walkers:
Lucy Heartphilia – first Walker, immortal
Edward Elric (Full Metal Alchemist)
Faust Asutsuo (Necromancer)
Len Hao and Yoh Asakura (Shaman King)
Allen Walker ( -Man)
Mephisto Kucabara and Idamaria (Defense Devil)
Haru Glory (Rave Master)
Aang (Avatar: The last airbender)
Dominikov (Murder Princess)
Harry Dresden (Dresden files)
That's all if it comes to prologue. I don't have idea when I'll add first Chapter, but it's already written in my notebook. In the first place I want to say, that everything in there is fiction, I based on already written tale, with mixed by me characters etc. I AM NOT gonna apologize if i hurt somebody's religious feelings. I'm deist, so it's not touching me. If it's hurting you, don't read it then.
Bye ^^
~Kill Lisanna
