A.N - Well here is the re-write hope this one is better

Chapter 1

"She will never though the dangers that fill her life, the horror she has been hidden from and the fate that has been denied. Then again, that is what I wanted, I wanted my daughters to live a happy life, to smile as much as possible. However such things are not for free, my daughter's happiness must be bought tooth and nail. So I fight for her, shielding her from our family's retribution but I am not alone in this war, there are other who fight by my side and together we will keep her safe. Giving her the gift to smile her entire life upon this world."

Irisviel stood facing the black ocean stood in front of a silver car, a spiky black haired man stood on the opposite side stood perfectly still watching Irisviel.

"Hmm I need to return to our daughter, something is wrong." Irisviel said as she turned to face the man watching her.

"Hmm after you just raced back, is your bond so strong you can sense her across oceans?" Kiritsugu asked tilting his head to the side.

"You can call it mother's intuition!" Irisviel said with a smile.

"Well the Andromedons will be returning soon, they deserve some shore leave from this. Perhaps Illya could meet them?" Kiritsugu said as he heard the sound of a storm cloud race over head. "Hmm speak of the devils" Kiritsugu said with a smile as three young teenagers walked out of the shadows, two girls and boy. The boy was a combed blond hair with violet eyes. He wore a blue jacket with a yellow polo shirt underneath. He had blue trousers on, his eyes held mischievous intent while his smile hid an arrogant interior. The first girl was a silver hair similar to Irisviel, she even had the same crimson red eyes. She wore a black leather jacket, which didn't cover her stomach, she wore black leather shorts with a black skirt around the shorts. Finally the last girl was a pink hair reaching all the way down her back, she had bright blue eyes and wore a plain white dress.

"Ahh you three were successful I assume" Kiritsugu asked as all three knelt in front of him and Irisviel.

"We were, Lord Jubstacheit has no idea where Illyasviel is located he continues to search the European continent but I fear he will soon expand his reach, it may be best if we up our scale of warfare from simply hit and runs to dealing with him and his lieutenants" The boy said head still down, in his left hand he held a golden spear but it was shrunk to the size of a small pain can, it had a arrow head for the tip as well as decorated with all forms of symbols, spears, hammers, tridents and final a lightning bolt.

"Hmm so eager to kill someone Isander?" Kiritsugu asked, head tilted to the side.

"It not that but I agree with Isander. We can't keep this up forever" The pink hair said on Isander's behalf.

"I also agree with Eleonore and Isander, even if we could continue to fool him for a longer period of time eventually we'll run out of hiding places" The silver hair said she had a metallic gauntlet on her right wrist, it had a disc built into the forearm covering with 11 separate stones engraved into the disc, each stone had a different marking drawn on each stone.

"My, my you three do need a vacation!" Irisviel said as she stepped forward smiling.

"WHAT!?" All three said as once.

"Well Maiya, you three are all talking doom and gloom, we need to cheer you three up!" Irisviel said smiling. "So you three will be coming with me back to Japan with me, I am going to be checking up on my daughter, maybe you three could meet her!" Irisviel said with a smile. She turned to Kiritsugu who simply nodded in agreement while the three children stood with their mouths wide open in shock. "For only 12 year olds you three sure are wound up tight aren't you?" Irisviel said smiling.

Kuro and Illya stood facing one and other on the edge of the cliff face, Miyu stood in front of Illya wielding the power of the saber class card. "Can we not coexist? Illya asked Kuro desperately.

"You're the one who wished for everything magic in your life to disappear, for it to go back to normal, that means Miyu, Rin, Luvia and I" Kuro stated angrily.

"Your...your...right….I'm sorry" Illya said head down in shame, "It was a dumb thing I said without thinking, I didn't know what my words would mean to everyone"Illya said sadly.

"So what is your point?" Kuro asked.

"Just tell me, why do you hate me so much? What do you want?" Illya asked

"What do I want, I have told you, I want to eliminate your existence on this world." Kuro said.

"So is that all that it takes for you to be happy, there is nothing you want for yourself?" Illya asked.

"Why should I tell you things like that?" Kuro replied with hostility. "Besides even if you knew what difference will it make, would you grant my wish, unlikely since your wish was to forget about everyone you've grown close too"

"I am sure I can, No I will make it happen!" Illya said defiantly. "So tell me!"

"No" Kuro snapped.

"Kuro" Illya pleaded.

"Not a chance you who's had everything from birth" Kuro said with poison in her voice.

"Why?" Illya said her very voice breaking.

"Because telling you will do no good, you would pity me and I have no need for that!" Kuro said.

"Lady Irisviel I have located Illyasviel but ugh I have no clue what the hell is going on here!" Isander said as he spoke into a silver flip phone. He stood from his vantage point observing the three girls talk, he noticed that the dark skinned one resembled Illya shockingly close.

"They are on the sea coast about 5 miles north of the city however it seems the situation is far more complicated than we knew"

"Explain?" Irisviel said worryingly as Isander recognized the familiar sound of a car engine starting.

"Well there appears to be two Illyasviels and they have a friend with them but all three girls are resonating mana, well the third one is strange almost like it is an improper summoned servant however I can't tell from this distance. Do you want me to engage?" Isander asked.

"No just observe, is there anything else I should know Irisviel asked.

"Well if I didn't know better I would say your daughter has become a character from one of Eleonore's umm animes she watches" Isander said.

"Hmm okay well I am on way way" Irisviel said as she hung up the phone.

"Now I think that is enough talk, it's time to end this" Kuro said "Illya there is one thing I wish for and that is for you to disappear!"

"Not gonna happen" Miyu roared as she lifted Excalibur into the air.

"Please stop fighting! We could...ugh" Illya was cut short with sound of a car launching over her head. The car slide across the open grass field before crashing into a nearby tree.

"Wow she really did hit the gas!" Isander muttered to himself as he slowly made his way closer.

"I come home to visit after all this time and you're not even home, well thanks to mother's intuition, finding you was a piece of cake." Irisviel said as she tried to get out of the car however the door was jammed as the car was recovering from being smashed into a tree, so many of the mechanics had stopped working such as the locking mechanisms, before she eventually kicked the door of it's hinges. "Yahoo Mama's home Illya!"

"Ma..ma..mama!" Illya stuttered.

"Dinner's almost ready so I thought I could come and pick you up!" Irisviel said with a smile, "Oh my goodness now why didn't you tell mama you have a twin"

"Um no she's just a look a like" Illya said, however Kuro shook her head angrily and drew her blades charging at Irisviel, she dodged Miyu and went to strike Irisviel, however Illya jumped in the way her wand blocking the strike. However during that commotion Irisviel subtly waved her hand down behind her telling Isander not to engage.

"Hmm I don't like sitting on the sidelines neither do I like watching someone attack Irisviel-sama." He muttered to himself. Illya pushed the blades back forcing Kuro to jump back.

"What was that all about why attack her?" Illya questioned.

"It's been a long time mother, I have missed you ever since you tried to erase me!" Kuro said with a snarl.

"What do you mean?!" Illya asked but Kuro jumped into the air and threw her blades at Illya and Irisviel.

Isander started shaking, his hand hovered over his spear, small sparks of electricity danced along the weapon. "Damn it, argh fine just watch how this goes!" Isander said snarling.

Kuro jumped into the air a bow and arrow materialised out of energy.

"Oh that is interesting, if I didn't know better I'd call that the power of EMIYA, hmm might need to contact Maiya later" Isander said as he watched Kuro unleash the arrow, it caused a massive explosion but Illya managed to deflect the shot by creating a pyramid out of mana.

"Why is every mana construct she creates pink anway?" Isander asked himself allowed.

Kuro gritted her teeth and tried to create more weapons but her power faded, she looked weak and tired.

"Kuro why do you want to hurt mama? This is going way too far? Do you even realise what you are doing?" Illya said.

"You don't understand? You don't know how you feel?" Kuro said weakly.

"I understand, at least I can tell you are in pain" Irisviel said as she walked forward towards Kuro despite Illya's warnings of danger. "Now then come here Illya" Kuro growled at that statement and charged forward.

"But first you need to be punished!" Irisviel said and with a hand gesture to Isander telling him to strike, Isander grabbed the spear, it grew in size from a small can to the size of a hockey stick, he pointed the arrow head towards the sky and black clouds appeared far too quickly. Kuro gasped in fear as a bolt of lightning stroke the ground next to her knocking her unconscious.

"That serves you right, you know better to attack people with deadly weapons!" Irisviel said as she poked Kuro's cheek.

"Mama what did you do?" Illya asked looking frightened and confused.

"Oh while we're at it you should probably be punished too!" Irisviel said with a smile, as she gave the same hand gesture, however this time Isander was a little hesitant to drop a bolt of lightning on Illya.

"What umm what do I do? What do I do? Wait if I don't do it I will be next crap!" Isander said to himself as he raised his spear again and black clouds formed.

"Ugh...wait what?No….No!" Illya said before she looked up and the last thing she saw was a bolt of lightning.

Irisviel dropped Illya and Kuro at Luvia's mansion. "Would you two mind doing me a favour and watch those two I will be back shortly I just have to run a few errands." Irisviel said with a smile towards Rin and Luvia. She turned her back on them and walked off, she got back into her car and drove off but only until she was out of eyesight. "Okay Isander, what do you know about 'Kuro'?" Irisviel asked.

"Well from watching her fight earlier it is safe to assume she is somehow manifesting the powers of the counter guardian EMYIA, and what is slightly more worrying is that she seems to be an improper servant, meaning she hasn't got a true vessel, so that is why she seems to burn lots of mana daily." Isander said as he walked from the shadows, his staff retracting to the size of a small can again.

"Hmm has Maiya tried contacting the throne of heroes and speak to the hero of justice about what is going on?" Irisviel asked.

"She hasn't yet but that is because she is overseeing the new base of operations for were we shall be staying" Isander said plainly.

"And here I thought you guys were here on vacation" Irisviel said.

"Sorry" Isander replied. "You better return they should be waking up anytime now."

"Oh well I will contact you guys later, just I know try to have some fun" Irisviel said smiling.

"It had been three days since that event Kuro now lives with Irisviel and her family, they treat her as a younger sister, it turned out she is a split personality formed from the memories of Illya with the knowledge of the holy grail which Irisviel- sama sealed away near enough 10 years ago, unfortunately this has caused a major problem for us as in order to save herself she activated a part of the holy grail ritual inside herself. Which is like a big blinking beacon for those who know of the grail" Isander stated to Eleonore and Maiya as they sat in a beautiful white painted walls, at a wooden table. They were in a small newly built detached house, they were the only occupants inside however. The walls were bare, there was nothing which gave hint to character or emotion.

"Hmm well I thinks it's good that she is alive but I also understand where you are coming from, even if he is on the other side of the world, there is little chance he did not sense that burst of power!" Maiya said.

"Hmm we should establish wards and sensors, maybe even security cameras all over the city." Eleonore said. "Isander should I create my familiars and have them patrolling the city until such measures have been put into place?"

"Yes that is a good idea, also we have been informed by our holy church ally in the city that one of the mages association enforcers has entered the city...umm who did she say it was...um ah yes Bazett" Isander replied.

"Why is she here?" Maiya asked.

"I believe there is a power game in play at the moment within the association, so whoever has ordered this probably wants the class cards for something." Isander replied.

"Hmm that is troubling, the existence of such cards concerns me, it seems like the heroic spirit are enslaved for a lack of a better word and furthermore Kuro's entire existence comes from those cards, if they want them, then that means.." Maiya stated looking at her gauntlet.

"They are probably planning on killing her….yes you are right so, as bad as we already have it, we are most probably gonna come to blows against that enforcer" Isander finished.

Eleonore brushed her hand through her pink long hair and few strands of hair came out which instantly glowed pink before turning into small energised familiars.

"I will need to concentrate but I will have these three patrol around Irisviel's home for now" Eleonore said as she sat still having her eyes closed, the three birds all suddenly spread their wings and zoomed through a window on the outermost wall. They flew into the midnight sky.

"I can't believe it, it has been two months since our battle with Berserker and now with my new little sister life final seems to be calming down" Illya thought to herself as she looked across her room seeing Kuro lying on her bed gazing at different magazines. It was dark outside, she could just start to see the stars in the night sky.

"Hey Kuro did you get a weird feeling then" Illya asked as she looked up from her desk, she was in middle of doing her homework but something felt off, strange.

"How so?" Kuro asked.

"What is it?" Ruby asked.

"Hmm" Illy hummed as she looked towards Luvia's mansion.

"I don't feel strange. Ruby-chan is full of energy as always!" Ruby said playfully.

"No, not that. It's kind of like, you know…" Illya pondered aloud.

"I don't get it. Aren't you a bit young to go senile?" Kuro teased.

"More importantly, Kuro, you're lounging in my room, but have you done your homework?" Illya said annoyed at the remark Kuro just made.

"Illya is the one doing our homework!" Kuro said plainly.

"I am not letting you copy!" Illya responded.

"Well more importantly did you pick out a swimsuit yet?" Kuro asked playfully. "Since we are gonna have our birthday party at the beach, we should have new ones right?"

"Hmm, I do want a new one, but I don't know if Sella will buy one for me." Illya said downtrodden. "She will probably say, 'Then that can be your birthday present, okay?'"

"Haha she would despite being a maid, Sella's stingy" Kuro said smiling. "Well, I can buy as many as I want with my allowance, though"

"Huh...W-what do you mean?" How do you have so much money?" Illya asked looking surprised.

"Because I lived with a rich family, until just recently." Kuro said, as her grin only grew wider and wider.

"Luvia-san?" Illya questioned.

"She would give us 100,000 yen as our monthly allowance." Kuro said smiling in glee to the astonishment on Illya's face.

"100,000?" Illya said in disbelief. "Whatever...It isn't as if Luvia-san being rich was a new thing. I will try asking Sella for new swimsuit when she is in a good mood."

"How admirable…..well, good luck with that." Kuro said still smiling ear to ear.

"Hey I'm not asking for…" Illya stopped talking and stood right up.

"Umm what?" Kuro asked.

"Something is definitely off." Illya said "You heard that sound right?"

"I didn't hear any…" Kuro trailed off as the sound of an earth shattering explosion rocks their ears.

"It's from Luvia-sans house?" Illya asked.

Illya and Kuro raced out to see what was going on, they arrive at the front gate but nothing seems out the ordinary. Up above them however three glowing wireframe pink birds have just flown over head. "Ugh guys we need to move now!" Eleonore shouted coming from her almost comatosed state.

"Hmm what is it?" Maiya asked as she walked into the plain white room, with barely any furniture. She was closely followed by Isander.

"Illya and Kuro have just engaged with the enforcer!" Eleonore said.

"Crap!" Maiya and Isander said at once.

"Hmm fine Eleonore you go get Caren-dono, I will speak directly to Irisviel-sama and Maiya if things get too dangerous for them you have full permission to engage the enforcer!" Isander ordered.

"Right" Maiya and Eleonore said at once.

"If you've come as reinforcements you are a bit late!" Bazett said, she wore her usual burgundy suit and tie.

Illya stood in fear as she watched Bazett beat Kuro simply by swinging her fists, she caught Kuro's arrow and threw it straight back at her.

"I am not sure if this qualifies as too dangerous but I really want to stop this." Maiya said out aloud as she rode a glowing blue pegasus, her gauntlett was missing and there was a white pebble in the middle of her chest, it had a glowing image of a man riding a horse. She flew high in the clouds, hidden from the carnage of the fight, as she watched Illya use different mana based projectiles, each harmlessly bounce off Bazett's runic gloves. "Hmm that fight is far too one sided. Strange she is supposed to be the vessel of the holy grail so why is she so weak?" Maiya muttered, she watched as Illya used her defensive magic and restraints. "Hmm however she is very smart" .

"I maybe weak, but I can fight, I can fight...FIRE!" Illya roared as she put everything into that blast of mana. However Bazett broke free from the restraints.

"If you were stronger you would of had me!" Bazett said calmly. Illya tried to fall back but Bazett scared her and then smashed her with a strike so powerful Maiya felt the aftershocks.

"Well now I need to engage…" Maiya went to move of her flying steed when she saw Kuro jump back into the fray.

"Illya grab the cards we can't allow her to get a single one!" Kuro said as she charged Bazett. They fought furiously but in the end Kuro lost to the monster that was Bazett. Illya during this fight desperately dragged herself across the stone pathway, she moved despite the pleading of Ruby.

"Illya-san you need to stay still, I have yet to heal your wounds, if you don't stop, you could die!"

"But we fought so hard for those cards, we can't give them up now. Just one, if I could get just one" Illya muttered as she put her hand on one card just before Bazett slammed her foot onto Illya's hand.

"Let go off the card" Bazett ordered.

"No" Illya said defiantly.

"Don't you understand I have been going easy on you" Bazett said, upon hearing this Maiya jumped off her pegasus, she muttered "Class change" and the pebble in her chest glowed brightly before her gauntlett returned to her wrist, the disc was still spinning as she fell back down to earth.

"Class select: Berserker. Hero Hercules!" The Gauntlett stopped spinning on a minotaur image, it glowed brightly before her entire body was engulfed by a bright light, the image of the mad warrior emerged around her roaring like an animal before it was absorbed back into Maiya's body, her crimson eyes glowed with power and her very skin seemed to give off a red glow.

"Well you can go full out against ME!" Maiya roared as she landed hard on the rock pathway, the shockwaves knocked Bazett away from the injured Illya.

"Wh-wh-who are you?" She asked weakly.

"I will explain everything later milady" Maiya replied before she put her hand to her back pocket pulling out two leather gloves, as she did this though a golden necklace jingled around her neck it had two letter engraved in a star symbol an A and a D, the sight of it drew Bazett's attention.

"Your one of the Andromedons correct?" Bazett asked.

"Your right enforcer" Maiya replied.

"Why are you here?" Bazett asked her fists resting calmly at her side.

"Could ask you the same, I mean an mages association enforcer attacking children is just plain wrong! Nope savagely attacking children is plain wrong! " Maiya said as she put her hands on her hips.

"Hmm the class cards are priority!" Bazett replied.

"Such a simpleton, oh well shall we get started" Maiya replied as she took a fighting stance.