This is the first story I put on, so bear with and, I really need reviews of what you people think of this.

It was raining and I wanted it to stop. MY life was now so dark and deep I daresay I love no longer. After all it had been a short while after the breakup. I couldn't take it, it was too much. How much I wished and longed to be in his arms again.

I did the right thing and tell him that he was cheating on me. Yet what did he want to say, before I walked out of the room. Darkness seemed to yet fall. Things couldn't have got any worse.

The peace full evenings we had together and how he confessed he loved me. Yet it was all a lie. A dark hole seemed to be in the place where he was.

"Knock, Knock"

"Kagome you here"

"No" she dreaded that voice, the voice of betrayal!

"Please let me in, I'm soaking wet"

"That's who you care about, yourself; you think no one else has feelings. You should feel ashamed and you are t-talking like nothing happened." Her voice was shaky from all the crying, anger and hunger

"I don't know what you're talking about" "Stop pretending Inu-yasha, I know that... that... that..." her voice trailed of, she couldn't bring herself to say the dreadful, awful words.

"Go ahead finish the sentence"

"...................................." silence passed for a while.

"What does your heart say. I could hear it says you still crave for me........."

he was cut of by Kagome's screaming.

"Shut up you foul, mouthed half demon, I don't crave for you, nor anyone, I don't give a damn about you. I hate you."

"If you didn't care about it, you wouldn't be screaming, Please let me in; I just want to sort it out.

Kagome had half gotten up when she sat back down and said "earn your way in."

"Anything you say, milady" he said in an old fashioned way.

"Pack your bag because it's a long trip".

"What are you talking about?"

"You'll find out"!

"You can't just boss me around like that."

"I'm not, I'm only trying to earn my way in!" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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