Wasn't happy with the first chapter so I decided to revise it a little hope it is to your liking and if you have any suggestion please let me know

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It was a cold morning as four shadows went flying through the trees "man what a time to be out here I could be asleep." a blond haired boy cried.

"shut up you loser were on a mission" a black haired boy said in a cold and calm voice "man your such a loser" he finished.

Right behind him as always was a pinked haired girl, "You said it Sasuke." she said to him while looking at the blond haired kid "shut up Naruto we don't want to get caught stupid'' she scolded him.

''whatever'' he replied looking down at the ground.

Sakura could tell that he was hurt about what she had said to him. A calm voice called to her ''weren't you a little rough to Naruto.''

"But Kakashi-sensei he could give out our position and you said that we be in trouble if we were caught" she replied

'True did say that but you also have to consider the feeling of your teammates, if you don't consider there feelings then you cant work properly as a team and then your in trouble." he said to her.

Sakura started to think about what he said. 'I'll tell him I am sorry at the next break we get'

No sooner that she said that four shurikens went flying out of nowhere. "Look out" yelled Kakashi pushing Sakura down to the ground taking the four shurikens on his back and legs. He was out of commission. ''Damn should of known better," Kakashi said as he was struggling to get back up ''but somethings wrong it was only four shurikens, then why do i feel so tired.'' Then it hit him that they were chakra draining shurikens. He pulled them out to stop the draining of chakra from his body but it was to late the damage was done. ''Everyone run as fast as you can'' he ordered as he fell to the ground.

Naruto caught him before he hit the ground. As he looked around he saw four shadows in the distance coming at them fast ''Shit they're coming'' Naruto yelled. They needed to do something before it was to late. As he stood there thinking on a plan two shurikens came from the shadows aimed at the blond haired boy.

''NARUTO'' the girl yelled. Before he could react the shurikens hit him in the back of his head and neck. The girl started to cry at the sight of her falling teammate. Just the there was a poof of smoke. When the smoke cleared there was a log where Naruto use to be. Her heart seemed to jumping out her chest of joy that he had gotten out in time

''Sakura'' Naruto said as he jumped behind her, starting her,

''y...y..yyes whats up'' she replied.

''Take Kakashi-sensei out of here go as fast you can don't look back until you reach the village'' Naruto ordered.

''what about you,'' she asked ''what are you going to do.''

''Kick his ass what you think I'm going to do'' he replied with a fox like grin he was famous for. After he said that he turn to male teammate and started to say ''Sas'' but he never finished his sentence.

''Don't think your going to take all the fun are you'' Sasuke blurted out.

''Guess not'' he replied with his famous smile and was scratching the back of his head, then turned to Sakura and yelled ''Go now!'' Sakura picked up her teacher and ran off.

"Well, well what do we have here,'' a man with a black cloak and a large kitana coming out the back, ''looks like we caught a couple of kids playing ninja.''

''We are ninjas'' blurted Naruto ''come a find out if you want'' The man just stood there for a minute and started to laugh

''I have to admit you got balls but they wont help you.'' He lifted his hand and the two ninjas came out of the darkness.

The sun was just starting to come out when Sakura saw the village gates in the distance. As she ran closer and closer she couldn't stop feeling worried for her teammates. "hope they're ok,... they got to be ok...yes Sasuke is there so it will be ok..." she thought.

"Are you sure they are ok?, you shouldn't have left them there."

"what you talking about of course they are ok and our sensei is hurt, besides Naru... I mean Sasuke is there to save the day, damn" she finished.

"HA HA HA HA you were going to say Naruto didn't you, HA HA HA HA."

"Don't know what your talking about no be quiet we are almost there" she said to her inner self as she was blushing so hard that it matched her pink hair.

"Ok but who do you think your trying to convince, just admit it and we all will be happy."

"Shut up I said!" she shouted. With that she reached the gates, the guards ran towards her, they took Kakashi to the hospital and she immediately went to the Fifth Hokage as she got the the doors of his office she could hear a conversation.

'"But we should tell him now before it is to late." a ninja said, he had a chunin jacket on and a scar across the bridge of his nose

''I know we must but I don't think its the right time to tell him, we have to make sure he is ready to handle the information'' a female ninja replied, she was wearing a long jacket with a miniskirt and a fishnet type bodysuit.

"Yes but," the male ninja started to say but got interrupted by the Fifth

"Iruka, Anko I know that the time has come to reveal the biggest and most treasured secret that the village has, but i don't think Naruto is ready to learn it yet,'' The Fifth said in a calm yet strong tone. "I've come to a ruling we will not reveal it to him now, but after the next chunin exams and that final,"

''but,'' Iruka started to say but stop as Anko grabbed his shoulder and gave him a look that spoke volumes like "its for his own good; and with that they left.

Sakura was standing there shocked at the knowledge that there was a huge secret that involved Naruto, but quickly snapped out of it when she remember her teammates. She quickly knocked on the door.

"Come in" the Fifth replied. As she walked in she saw the Fifth Hokage sitting in her chair doing paperwork, she was a very beautiful blond hair woman and very skilled as a medical nin. She didn't wait for her to look up,

"Naruto and Sasuke are in trouble, we were attacked by the sound again Kakashi-sensei was attack with chakra draining shurikens, he is at the hospital." she said as she tried to get more air to continue her report, "I was ordered to take Kakashi away from there as Naruto and Sasuke distracted the sound ninjas."

"I see then," the fifth replied. "Shizune come here" she yelled. After a minute a tall very slender woman came through the door.

"Yes Hokage-sama" she replied.

"Naruto is in trouble send in four ANBU teams to help them" she ordered.

Shizune just stood there and then asked "Four ANBU teams don't you think thats a bit much?"

"Don't forget about Naruto condition" she answered looking at Sakura as she looked at bit lost. "now go" she ordered as she lifted her hand. Shizune bow and left to give out the order. "Is there any thing else if not then I'm very busy."

Sakura just stood there wondering what "condition" Naruto had. "No nothing more Hokage-sama" she replied as she thought of asking her about Naruto. "Ok then go home" she ordered "and come back tomorrow I have an announcement for you" she said as she went back to work.

"Yes Hokage-sama" she replied and turn around and went home.

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"You have balls kid but they wont save you boy" the man said as he raised his hand. Two ninjas came out of the darkness. "Kill them."

"Hai" both ninjas replied as they launched there attacks.

The first ninja ,as rather large man with the same device on his arm like Dosu did, jumped up and swung his arms. After a couple of seconds a large gust of wind started to blow aimed at both the boys which they dodged easily. As they landed they were met by a series of kicks and punches. They blocked at great speed but weren't fast enough as they were both kicked in the face and were sent flying into a tree.

"Come on I want to play too." the female of the group remarked, "you always have all the fun Kyo."

"Fine which one do you want, Kri?" he replied.

"I want the Uchiha brat" Kri replied.

"Whatever its all the same to me" Kyo stated and went to attack Naruto. He threw four kunai knives at him which he dodged only to be met with a series of punches to the face and stomach. Naruto went flying to a tree were he spit up blood.

Back with Sasuke he was holding his own with his Sharingan he could see all the move the female ninja was throwing at him. He countered them with ease. "Pathetic is that all you can do" he teased.

"Ha, you think thats it don't make me laugh" she replied and proceeded to attack Sasuke. This time he couldn't keep up with her moves. After a series of punches he was also sent flying towards a large rock. As he flew he managed to gain control and flipped in mid-flight and as came close to the rock he sent chakra to his legs then when he made contact with the rock he released the chakra which sent him flying towards Kri at a almost blinding speed. Kri only smirked at she made some hand signs. She shouted ,Ninja Art: Sound Destroyer, all of a sudden there was a big wave of air that was sent towards Sasuke. Sasuke managed to escape the blast and landed safely, he got into his fighting stance.

"That it? That was pathe..." he managed to says as a rather loud ringing came to his inner ear that made fall over.

"HA HA HA its over you won't be able to get back up, you die now." Kri stated and began to advance towards Sasuke to deliver to final blow.

Naruto was slowly standing back up from the series of attacks to he received he wiped the blood coming from his mouth. "Thats it? I thought you would be more of a challenge," Naruto yelled at the surprised ninja.

"What you blabbing about brat," the Ninja called Kyo questioned. Naruto just started to laugh and pointed to the his arms. Kyo look down and finally realized what he was laughing at. Naruto somehow while guarding had place explosive tags on the man's device, the man look up only to see Naruto say "boom" and with that the man arms was blown off. The man was surprised of what happened to him only when his brain registered what had happen the he gave out a blood curdling yell before passing out.

"He will be dead in a couple of minutes, time to go help Sasuke out" and with that he went to help his so called team mate. He saw that Kri lunge at Sasuke and he wondered why he was on hand and knees, but he soon realized that he was in trouble. He then kicked it up a notch, he sent chakra to his legs.

Sasuke looked up only to see Kri running towards him with her kitana ready to kill him, in that moment he felt something that he hadn't felt for so long and didn't like it, fear he didn't want to die. In a matter of seconds, which felt like hours, she jumped up to deliver the death blow. Sasuke closed his eyes ready for the sting of death to claim him. It was only seconds later that opened his eyes only to see the blade one inch from his eyes, but something was wrong, there was blood dripping from it. He know that he wasn't hit so where was the blood coming from, then after he focused his eyes he saw alot of orange. He quickly realized who it was.

Meanwhile about ten mile from were they were four teams of three were jumping from tree to tree quickly making there way towards the battlefield.

"Sas...uke a...re y..y..yo..u ...ok" Naruto struggled to say.

"Why did you do it, you idiot" Sasuke replied.

"Don't think I did it for you, I...I did it for" he cough up some blood before continuing, "I did it for Sakura, I know she would be sad if you died and would blame me for not helping and I can't stand seeing her like that."

"Ohhhhh how cute, well don't worry about that because you both will die and she will join you later" Kri stated.

"Oh don't think I forgot about you" Naruto said with his famous smile.

"What are you smiling about you bra..." then silence. After a second Kri was lying on the floor dead her head was blown completely off. Sasuke just look at Naruto as his rasengan hit Kri's head. It was the most horrific thing he saw. Her head was completely ripped off her body and mangled up into a pile of flesh, that if you didn't know were it came from you couldn't identify what it was. After that he saw Naruto falling to the ground, tried to move but couldn't, Naruto hit the floor inches away from death.

Sasuke thought it was over and he started to get movement in his body. He ran towards Naruto and picked him up to rush to the village. "No, leave me here, I know that I'm not going to make it" Naruto said quietly and with a sad tone of voice.

"Don't be stupid I'm not to leave you here to die, what would people say about me for leaving you here"

"HA! don't worry about the villagers they won't care any ways they would probably go out in the streets and party, glad to see me dead" he answered "any as for the the others they know that its part of the shinobi way of life and death is a part of it, th..." coughed more blood "they will get over...it" and with that he passed out.

"Wow that was some speech" the leader of group said "he was truly a ninja to the end he has my respect and I will send my respects to your Hokage for producing such a powerful ninja." Then he looked at Sasuke "as for you, ..." he paused then yelled "YOU ARE WEAK AND PATHETIC! He took out two of my best with ease and you could land one single punch." Thats all that Sasuke could stand he lowered Naruto before launching hit attack

"Where am I, what happen" Naruto wondered when he opened his. He was lying on a cold surface, it was dark and damp. He heard growling coming from one of the halls. He started to walk towards the noise as he got closer he could sense a chakra field and it seemed familer to him. Before he knew it he was at a cage looking gate with a paper tag that said "SEAL."

"AH, good to finally see you kit" a large booming voice said"well looks like times up for both of us huh"

"Yea looks like it you stupid fox." Naruto replied"well its been fun."

"Well before we go you might as well see my true form," Suddenly there was a bright light, after the light faded there was a man standing in the gate. He had long red hair with black tips, he was tall and look like he was in his twenties but everyone knew he was at least 50,000 years old. He also sported nine tails.

"Well what you think kit?"

"Well that was strange to say the least."

"How long do you think before we get his visit?"

"Don't know but what you want to do until he gets here."

"You want to hear some of my stories kit about the good old days?"

"Whatever but they better be good."

"Trust me."

"What you both idiots doing, I know how to save both yours asses but we have to hurry." A loud voice came out of nowhere stated

"Who said that?" the fox yelled

"Have no idea I thought it was just you and me." Naruto answered

"Don't worry who I am everything will be reveal at its proper time just for the time being think of me as a gift from your mother." the voice replied

"That voice sounds familiar but can't put my paws on it" the fox said quietlybut the voice hear it and replied "ah forgot me already oh well I guess being trapped in here can do that, but that doesn't matter right now," After a pause he continued "so like I was saying I know how to save both of you"

Naruto look at the fox demon and asked "what you think?" the fox demon look at Naruto because he did not want to die

"don't know kit." then he yelled to the voice "how can you save both of us?"

After a minute the voice responded "by merging how else do you think"

"WHAT!" Naruto yelled at the top of his lungs before calming down "how will that help me?"

"You fool, how do think you never seem to be injured for long periods of time, or be in the hospitals for no more a couple of days when in reality you should be there for weeks, IT WAS THE FOX'S CHAKRA!" the voice explained

"Yea so what" answered Naruto.

"well why isn't he healing you right now then" the voice smirked. Naruto thought for a moment and look at the fox. The fox look up at him and shrugged. "Man both of you are dense, that sword that hit you had special properties and one of then wont let the demon chakra heal you, but if you merge both your charka's and then you won't die but..."

"but there something more isn't there" Naruto asked.

"what will happen to me?" the fox asked.

"HA HA HA... I guess your both not as slow as I thought" the voice said "well for Naruto he will become stronger and learn all your justus and abilities. And for you my dear fox will become part of Naruto, everything he feels you will too, so in a way you will have a body so to speak." There was a couple second of silence he continued "but there more to that, Naruto you will be in essence become a demon, but you will still look the same, maybe a little changes here and there but other than that the same" Then he looked at the fox. "As for you will become a part of his mind like me"

"what do you say and hurry because the death god is coming"

Naruto thought for a minute before saying "What up think do you want to do it?"

The fox looked at Naruto and thought "well I guess this won't be as bad, I mean I will at least be able to feel again." "sure, lets do it." the fox said.

"Ok you sure?" Naruto said as he waited for the fox's nod look up and yelled "What do I have to do?"

After a second the voice said "Just go to the seal and pull it off I will do the rest" Naruto did just that he walked up to the seal reached out, grabbed the paper seal and with one pull ripped it off the gate. The gate immediately open sending red charka towards Naruto. He close his eyes for a second before realizing there was no pain opened his eyes to see his own chakra and the read chakra fight for control. After a couple second he saw that both red and blue chakra was beginning to mix and turn purple before going into his body. Thats when the pain started as it began to change his body, his senses were becoming more sensitive and his muscles more defined, all his baby fat were starting to come off. The pain was becoming to much for him he passed out again.

Meanwhile back on the outside

Sasuke was trying very hard to beat the leader but couldn't even land a single hit. The leader just laughed at him which made Sasuke even angrier. "Like I said earlier pathetic and weak" he said.

"I'm going to kill you" Sasuke yelled and went to attack him again. Then man just stood there until he got closer, after he was close enough he lifted his right hand and said "Ninja Art: Sound Burst", and out of his arm there was a loud buzzing ringing sound, Sasuke this time couldn't get out of the way in time and got hit full force by the attack. He feel to the ground and blood came out of his ears, he tried to get up but his legs won't respond in fact nothing in his body would respond.

As Sasuke was lying on the ground blood still pouring out of his ears and drained of chakra there was only one thing going through his mind "damn, this is really it I'm really going to die out here."

"Time to die weakling" the man teased as he walked up to Sasuke. He lifted his kitana ready to remove his head from his body when he stopped and look up. "What is this power I feel? Its almost pure blood lust"

Sasuke could also feel this power that had suddenly showed up. He tried to look around but his body would not respond. The it hit him "Naruto" he tried one more time to move his head towards Naruto but when he did he saw Naruto covered with purple charka. After seeing this he was completely drained and passed out.

Naruto suddenly opened his eyes and looked around, as he got up he pulled the kitana that was still embedded in his chest, as Sasuke didn't pull it out because of fear of more blood lost. Looking around he saw that Sasuke was laying on the ground all battered up and blood covering most of his body. Naruto then pulled out the sword in his chest, slowly the wound began to heal.

"What are you?" the man asked as he cowered in fear of what he was seeing. Moments ago he was completely beaten and now he was walking closer and closer with power he didn't think possible for a boy to have.

"Your worst nightmare!" Naruto yelled as he released huge amounts of killer intent making the man cower more in fear.

"Its just a boy a genin at that he shouldn't be that hard to kill him." the man thought as he was beginning to regain his composure. He lunged at the boy with his kitana, only to be blocked with the sword Naruto possessed. Naruto then pushed the man back with ease as he got into a battle stance that he never learned but still seemed familiar.

Both ninjas were locked in a battle but looked more like a elegant dance as sword hit sword. After several minutes of their dance they stopped.

"May I ask your name boy?" the man inquired

"Naruto Uzumaki"

"Ah no wonder" the man stated and confused Naruto "it was an honor to face one the famous Uzumaki clan,"

"What are you talking about?"

"The Uzumaki clan is known all over the shinobi world as skilled assassins and are by far geniuses at creating justus"

"Who are you"

"Oh, were are my manners my name is Ryouga" the said while bowing at the boy "But now we have at fight we must finish"

In a flash they were both back to the fight, Naruto slashed vertically at Ryouga managed to dodge and lung at Naruto. Naruto almost didn't move out of the way as the sword came dangerously close to his neck. Ryouga tried to slash again but Naruto kept dodging all his attack and manging to put some of his attacks in as well. In a matter of minutes both fighter were getting tired as they looked at each other from a distance, both had sweat flowing from their brow. Cuts everywhere, they both knew that they could not last any longer, both fighter stared at the other warrior in front of them. Both men put their kitanas at their sides and lower their stances.

A small breeze blew between them picking up dust and leaves, as soon as the breeze died down both men ran at each other, after a short charge they both jumped into the air, as they passes each other midair they slashed at each other. Both men landed on opposite side of the battlefield. Seconds seems to past as minutes as both men just stood there, the wind started to pick up and the new born sun began to give its light. All of a sudden Ryouga fell onto his knees and coughed up blood. His side was cut deeply and blood flowed freely from the wound.

"Truly an honor to face a strong opponent" he thought as he started to shed a tear almost as if it was the best day of his life.

Naruto walked up the man, his blood lust now gone. As he got closer he noticed that Ryouga was shedding tears which confused him.

"Naruto you are truly a wonderful shinobi and will go far as for me, I'm glad that I was your opponent today, though I lost" the man looked down and coughed up some blood "now finish the job let me die a shinobi's death"

Naruto knew exactly what Ryouga was talking about and nodded as he got closer to the dying man. "Ryouga, it was truly a honor to fight you as well good bye and may we met in the afterlife." Naruto then lifted his sword, the sun now fully out shined off the blade. As he brought it down all Naruto could hear was "thank you" as the blade came swiftly and removed Ryouga's head from his body.

Naruto looked around and saw the carnage and shed a tear but quickly composed himself as he reminded himself that this is what the shinobi life was about. He began to feel lightheaded and his world became darken again and passed out.

The four teams had showed up minutes before but decided to wait and see if the boy could handle himself and were surprised at the way he did handle himself. After seeing him fight and now losing consciousness decided to make their presence known and caught Naruto before he hit the ground. The leader of the groups looked around and said "though these ninjas were our enemies they were still ninjas and died as such we must pray for them" After paying there respects and properly getting rid of the bodies they picked up Sasuke and left for the village.

Meanwhile two shadow were watching the whole battle.

"Kukukukuku what a show" the larger of the shadow stated

"Yes it was looks like we underestimated them Orochimaru-sama" the shorter shadow replied

"That we did but no matter I will still get my prize kukukuku come Kabuto lets go we still have much to do" Orochimaru ordered and turned around and faded into the forest.

"Hai Orochimaru-sama" and with that both shadows were gone.

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