A/N: I had huge trouble with this story. This is My first story ever. It may be bad and it is very random.
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Fullmetal Alchemist.
Chapter 1: The Idea
Edward was walking down the street for no good reason, when some random guy bumped into him.
Edward: Watch where you are going!
Random guy: Sorry little boy.
Edward: Who are you calling a half pint midget!?
Random Guy: No one called you that!
They random guy walked away kind of annoyed.
Alphonse Came up to Edward.
Alphonse: I have a great idea!
Edward: What?
Alphonse paused, making it sound very good.
Alphonse: Lets... Go... To... Disney land!
Edward paused blinked a few times, opened his mouth to say something then reclosed his mouth again.
Alphonse: Well... Do you want to go or not?
Alphonse was quite.
Edward: Yeah! Lets Go Right Away!
Alphonse: Yay!
Edward and Alphonse Together: How will we get there?
Both Edward and Alphonse were quite. Then Edward looked like he had and idea.
Edward: I know! It is so easy! We will take the T...
Alphonse: The Train!
Edward: I was about to say that!
Later...
At the Train station.
Edward: Two tickets to Disney Land... please.
Ticket Lady: Sorry... You can not buy tickets on a train that goes straight to disney land.
Edward: WHAT!?
Ticket Lady: ... But you can buy tickets to L.A. then take a new train to California... from there you can walk to Disney Land.
Alphonse: Ok... two tickets for that!
Edward: Fine...
The Ticket Lady handed Edward the tickets.
Ticket Lady: Here you go... Enjoy your trip!
Alphonse: Thank you... Come on Big Brother!
Later...
On the train to L.A.
Alphonse: Big brother... you do not look very well...
Edward: Will this train never stop? I think I am going to be sick!
Alphonse: Just wait until we get to L.A. you can get some fresh air before we go on our next train.
Edward is looking very sick.
Edward: If I make it on this train without being sick.
Alphonse: Well... I feel fine.
Edward: Ya... ya... ya... dont rub it in.
Later...
Chapter 2: L.A. Trip
A/N: This part of my story Just flew by. I had almost no trouble with this area.
In L.A.
Edward: Wow! This place is Huge... and look there are people that are... even... Shorter than Me!
Edward is being giddy seeing people shorter than he is.
Alphonse: Ya... Well are you feeling better now?
Edward still feeling exited about some heights of the people not noticing Alphonse question.
Alphonse: Big brother! Are you ok? Hello?!
Alphonse flicked Edward in his nonmetal arm.
Edward: What the! What do you want Alphonse?
Alphonse: I said... Are you feeling better?
Edward: Oh... Yes I am feeling better now.
Alphonse: Good because the Train is going to be here soon.
The train to California went into the station.
Edward: Um... Just give me a second.
Edward said feeling very sickly and going into a corner by a tree.
Alphonse: Ok... I will be in the station.
Edward: Uh huh...
Alphonse Went into the train station as Edward finished being sick in the corner and went inside.
Edward: Now that was much better.
Alphonse: Good... Now lets go on the train!
As they were walking into the train they heard a holler.
Girl: Edward! Alphonse!
Edward and Alphose turned aroutnd and found out that the girl was Winry.
Edward: Winr...
Alphonse: ...Y!
Winry: Yes? What are you guys going on a train to California? Why are you Even in Los Angelas?
(L.A. shortened for Los Angelas)
Edward: Well...
Alphonse We... are... going... to...
Winry: ... Just Tell me!
Alphonse: Disney Land!
Winry Stopped she looked at them with a blank look on her face.
Winry: ...
Winry: ... Um...
Winry: Cool! Can I Come?
Alphonse: Of course you can come! Do you have a train ticket?
Edward: Ya... you can come.
Winry: Great! Yes I do Have a train Ticket!
They All went on the Train and looked around, they could smell something.
Chapter 3: The Stink Train
A/N: I had huge writers block with this chapter. I think it is rather strange and I am having trouble thinking of what to write next.
Winry: Ew... What is that smell?!
Edward: I dont know but I am not sitting next to it.
Edward Having a Confident Look on his face.
Alphonse: What is your ticket number?
Edward: 5POF9
Winry: 7ITB3
Alphonse: 9HGI0
Winry: It looks like no one is sitting next to eachother. Alphonse is in Lane 9 Edward you are in Lane 5 and I am in Lane 7.
Edward: Whos Lane stinks more?
Winry: I will see...
Winry walked by each lane lightly sniffing the air around it.
Winry: Ew... The lane that stinks is Lane 5
Edward: Yes... Wait A second!
Edward had a disgusted and a annoyed look on his face.
Edward: Hey Alphonse do you feel like traiding landes?
Edward tapped his elbow on Alphonses chest.
Edward: What do you say?
Alphonse: Sorry Big Brother... but... I... Um... Like the view from my Lane.
Edward looked at Alphonse with a what the look on his face. So Edward walked closer to Winry.
Edward: So what do you say Winry? Will you trade seats with me?
Edward put a baby face look on.
Winry: No Way... I dont want a stinky ride to Disney Land!
Later...
In California train station.
Edward: Where are we?
Alphonse: I think somewhere in Califirnia.
Winry: Well... I am done waiting... so... WHERE IS DISNEY LAND?!
Alphonse: Remember Big Brother the ticket lady said once we get to California we Need To Walk.
Flash Back
Ticket Lady: ... But you can buy tickets to L.A. then take a new train to California... from there you can walk to Disney Land.
Edward: Ya... Ok... I get it we dont need the Big Flash Back thing.
Winry: So where do we go to get to disney land?
Edward: I think that Ticket Lady scamed us Al...
Alphonse: Wait Look! There is A BIG sign it says... Disney Land
Edward: Ok Then... Nevermind about the Ticket Lady then.
Chapter 4: The March
Alphonse, Edward and Winry are walking to Disney Land.
Edward: It is boiling outside! When will we get there?
Winry: I dont know probably soon... It is only 20C!
Edward: Ya... I Hope so... and I have a Metal arm and Leg if you hadnt noticed!
Alphonse: We Are Finnally here!
Winry: Yay! What should we do first?
Edward: I am NOT going to the Kiddy Land!
Alphonse: What Ride do you want to go on Big Brother?
Edward: I Want to go on... Splash Mountain!
Winry: Yipee!
Alphonse: Yay!
Chapter 5: The Fun Begins!
A/N: I Have had Huge Trouble and Writers Block. For this half this will be probably my last chapter. But as I go on I might add another one.
Edward: So Where is Splash Mountain? I have heard of it but I have never seen Splash Mountain... or... BEEN ON IT! So I want to go on it NOW!
Winry: Ok Let me think it would be... um... Over there!
Alphonse: Yes! There it is!
Edward: Lets Go!
They all ran over to splash mountain.
Edward: Yay! This is so fun! I am not hot anymore!
Winry: Ah!... This is so FAST!
Alphonse: This is really fun!
After going on Splash Mountain They all went to get some food.
Edward: Ya!... Lets bring on the Food!
Winry: None for me I think I am going to be sick.
Alphonse: Next Lets go on the "Tilt-A-Whirl"
Edward: Great!
Edward quickly swallowed his food.
Edward: Ok Lets Go!
Alphonse: Don't you want to wait a while so you don't get sick?
Edward: Nah I'll be fine.
Edward: Are you coming Winry?
Winry: Just give me a minute
Winry walked off into a corner and by a big bush.
Edward: I guess she doesn't take moving extremely quickly.
Edward: Now... To the "Tilt-A-Whirl"
Edward and Alphonse head over to the tilt-a-whirl.
Chapter 6: Tilt-A-Whirl Suprise!
A/N: I decided to add this one chapter but it will be the last one until the END of this story. I will make more stories like this (different idea) if I hear that people like this story.
Edward: This will be SO AWSOME! I can't wait!
Alphonse: There is still a line up.
Edward: It is not a long line up!
Later...
Edward: Finnally The line is over!
Alphonse: Ya! So do you have your tickets?
Edward: Yep I had to use some to buy my Lunch but I have 1 ticket left!
Ticket Man: Can I have your tickets little one?
Edward: Who are you calling a annoying shrimp that can't take order?!
Ticket Man: Ok calm down I never called you that... can I have your ticket?
Edward: You got lucky this time... here you go.
Alphonse: Here are my tickets too
Ticket man: Thank you... and cool costume...
Alphonse: Thanks but it isn't a costume
Alphonse and Edward went into the ride area, it was covered with barf so avoiding the barf They found a place to sit in there.
Edward: This is great... um... nevermind... I'm going to be sick
Alphonse: Well... Just don't go on me... besides I told you that you should wait before going on this ride.
Edward: BARF!!
Edward: oh no I got it on all of my precious... CLOTHES!
Alphonse: We can probably find some clothes around here.
After going on the tilt-a-whirl Edward (clothes still with Barf on them) and Alphonse went and found Winry.
Chapter 7: What are Those?
A/N: I needed to add tis one chapter or it wold bug me extrememly. This chapter and chapter 6 are veryshort.
Winry: What happened to you Ed?
Edward: I went on the "Tilt-A-Whirl"
Winry: Well I know exactly where do get you some new clothes!
Edward: You Do!
Winry: Yep! Come with me!
The Elric boys followed Winry until they got to a table with disney character clothes.
Winry: I will like these pants and I guess this shirt.
Clothes man: Right away Little missy.
Winry: Thank you... I guess.
Edward: I need to wear those? What?!
Winry: Well I am not spending all of my money on you and these are on Sale 50 off.
Edward: Ugh...
Winry: It is this or your barf clothes.
Edward: Where is a Bathroom?
Alphonse: Over there!
Edward: Be a minute.
When Edward came out he had on a shirt with a picture of mickey mouse that said "Cheese Please" and Pants that looked like the one that Goofy wears.Winry and Alphonse burst into laughter.
Edward: Ya... Very funny now lets... I don't know... GO HOME!
Alphonse: Fine we had a good day so lets go home.
Winry: Ok
Chapter 8: Hard Ride Home
A/N: This is the ending chapter!
Edward Had a hard ride home with people giggling at his clothes.
Edward: This WAS fun but it isn't anymore everyone has no life and wastes time laughing at me.
Winry: Well you do look pretty funny.
Edward: HEY THIS IS YOUR FAULT YOU BOUGHT THESE CLOTHES FOR ME!
Alphonse: Well it is only about an hour until we get Home.
Edward: Good only one hour until I can BURN these clothes!
Later...
Off the train at where they originally got on.
Edward: Finnally we are home!
Alphonse: Yah... next month lets go to "Disney WORLD"
Edward: Oh Great here we go again... what will I wear next time... if Winry is there I will probably look like Minney Mouse.
THE END!
A/N: I hope you enjoyed this story... instead of chapters in the story I will make them as link on storries (where everyone elses chapters are) so please give me some reviews on this copy of the book!! D (smiley face)