It was dark as something streaked across the grass. Rain pouring from the sky, turning the ground into mud. A white haired child with silver colored eyes; was running and slipping on the mud. He kept looking behind him with eyes filled of terror. Scared of what was behind him and trying to escape with his life. The creature that was chasing him was not something of this world. Black fur with red eyes. Eyes that were hungry for human flesh. Its snout was already smeared with blood.
The only thing the child could think of was he had to live. Had to live for his father that had been killed by that monster. But no matter how fast he ran the creature was gaining on him. It was grinning at him as it leaped at him knocking him over. The last thing he sees and hears is a bright light and the pained cries from the creature. Then he falls into the cold darkness.
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