Wonder Man: First of all, if I find this anywhere else, I will slam your
head on a wall so hard that it'll split your ass. Got it?
PROLOGUE
As the sun began to set, an air transport flew into the boundaries of the now ruined city. The once beautiful skyscrapers were now demolished. Buildings were burning, cars were overturned and worst of all, human bodies littered the ground. Destroyed MTs also dotted the city in equal numbers. The only life that was left in the city was a lone black and red Armored Core.
The large machine was badly damaged. It had lost its right arm; its head was badly seared by energy based weapons and the great cannon on its back had peeled like the petals of a flower. Although sparks were flying from its joints, the AC still seemed to be able to function.
"Raven! Are you there? Please respond" A woman's frantic voice was coming from the radio transmitter within the AC.
The single eye of the AC glowed a bloody red and stood up from its crouching position. Its remaining hand was held close to it side protectively. The AC looked around to scout for any nearby enemies, so when it found none, it took a few quick steps forward and flew to the tallest building still standing.
The transport had caught sight of the battered AC and was now heading for it. The Armored Core looked at its hand and began to open it slowly with its palm facing the sky, to reveal the unconscious but unharmed body of a little girl
END
Wonder Man: Yes it was short its only the prologue. Please give me a review on whether I should continue on *bows* please be gentle ....
PROLOGUE
As the sun began to set, an air transport flew into the boundaries of the now ruined city. The once beautiful skyscrapers were now demolished. Buildings were burning, cars were overturned and worst of all, human bodies littered the ground. Destroyed MTs also dotted the city in equal numbers. The only life that was left in the city was a lone black and red Armored Core.
The large machine was badly damaged. It had lost its right arm; its head was badly seared by energy based weapons and the great cannon on its back had peeled like the petals of a flower. Although sparks were flying from its joints, the AC still seemed to be able to function.
"Raven! Are you there? Please respond" A woman's frantic voice was coming from the radio transmitter within the AC.
The single eye of the AC glowed a bloody red and stood up from its crouching position. Its remaining hand was held close to it side protectively. The AC looked around to scout for any nearby enemies, so when it found none, it took a few quick steps forward and flew to the tallest building still standing.
The transport had caught sight of the battered AC and was now heading for it. The Armored Core looked at its hand and began to open it slowly with its palm facing the sky, to reveal the unconscious but unharmed body of a little girl
END
Wonder Man: Yes it was short its only the prologue. Please give me a review on whether I should continue on *bows* please be gentle ....