Why hello there~ I bet you want to kill me buuut look after this i'm posting the rest tomorrow! So thats good! And after I post three chapters after this you'll get an update per weekend! So hopefully everything goes swell! Now I would like to say thank you to: Kira1993, Akumagirl92, Darkestnight22, Glenxita, and the anon for the reviews and follows! :D I guess I should mention I'm rewriting again...and I know that sucks but there will be a change. I'm going to use a different perpective in every chapter! This is just for me so I can practice my writing but It'll make things more fun! So to start off this in third person.
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The beating of her heart continued to pound endlessly. (Run, there's no time!) Huffing out of breath Franie, stop and turned around to see no one following her anymore. (Run child!)Crouching down to rest for a while before running to the safety of her home. Cursing her luck on being sick that day. 'Tap, tap, tap' the soft sound found its way toward her ears. (RUN!)Franie stop to listen and turned around slowly to find a man right behind her with an predatory glint in his eyes walking slowly towards her. Her body froze in fear, her shallow breaths filling in the silence. 'Dammit run, don't just sit here!' she yelled at herself. Somehow gaining control of her body and ran till her muscle started aching. (You're close, just a little bit more)She started getting closer to her house. Fear only fueling her more, once she heard the man catching up. The chase ended when she felt strong arms around her neck. Tripping her, she and the man tumbled down on to the sidewalk. Screaming for help she tried to run away. Choking, (Child!) Franie kicked the man to let her free. Feeling the air leaving her, she became for desperate and started to punch, kick, and claw the man hoping he would let her go. Her attempts useless against the man. Untill finally Frannnie died and became what she always sees. A ghost. A throaty laugh came from the man as he smiled.
Onto the next chapter! I'll see ya soon!