My Mental Guardian

Hey Yami here, this is for The Author Challenge muse this is my first time writing a Harry Potter story that's not a crossover or one-shot please tell me if you like it.


Quirrels body fell to floor of the chamber turning into ash.

Voldemort felt his fury swell up in him. He was defeated again by the boy! How was this possible!

He could hear Dumbledore coming.

Voldemort snarled. How dare he interfere? He glared at Potter who was picking up the stone.

With a roar, he flew towards the boy.

And everything went black.


(Few days later in the Hospital wing)

Harry groaned, as he woke up. He was surprised to find himself in the Hospital wing.

"Good to see that you are ok Harry."

Harry turned to see Dumbledore smiling at him, his eyes twinkling as always.

In the back of his head, Harry swore he heard something spat some insult at the Headmaster.

Suddenly everything came back to Harry. "Headmaster! Quirrel the stone I…Voldemort err!

"Settle down Harry, settle down." Dumbledore told him with a smile. "Everything's fine."

"No it isn't!" A voice in Harry's head screamed. Harry froze for a moment before deciding it was just his imagination.

"Where's the stone?" Harry asked trying to grasp all that had happened.

"The stone was destroyed." Dumbledore told him.

"But what about Mr. Flamel?"

Dumbledore gave him a sad look. "He and his wife will die." He said sadly.

There was a pause before Harry continued to question Dumbledore.


(Meanwhile deep in Harry's mind)

Voldemort frowned. Where was he? It took him a moment before he realized he was in the mind of Harry Potter.

Voldemort roared with rage. How did this happen! He watched as the boy woke up, not at all pleased wit the situation.

He cursed as Dumbledore come over to talk with Harry. He prayed silently that Dumbledore would not realize he was here.

Thank Morgana he did not. Voldemort watched slightly amused as Harry started to blurt out what happened.

He glared as Dumbledore told Harry everything was fine. "No it isn't!" He snarled. Voldemort frowned when Harry froze, and smirked. So the boy could here him.

A plan started to form as Voldemort smiled evilly. Maybe he could use this to his advantage.


So tell me what you think pass fail? I know it is short but hey, I do not know if it is any

Good or not.

Well tell me if you think I should continue, or if this is a waste of my time.

If I decide to continue, the next chapter will be up sometime next week.